janaze me na aana

by aftab alam on September 13, 2010, 06:39:41 PM

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aftab alam

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laut jati hai lehre gum hamara dekh kar jaise laut jati hai
machhli kinara dekh kar tu hamare janaze me na aana
kahin fir zinda na ho jao tera chehra dekh kar


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ParwaaZ

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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2010, 06:54:43 PM »

Aaftaab Sahab AadaaB!

Aapke khayaal to kafi gehre lage hume... par aap lafzoN meiN dhaal nahi paye, Khair likhate rahiye........ Ummid hai aap achchi shayari karna sikh jayeNge.....

Tuu khush raheN yehi khushi raheNgi mujhko
Teri muskuraahat pe muskurata rahuN maiN


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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2010, 07:11:53 PM »

Quote from: aftab alam on September 13, 2010, 06:39:41 PM

laut jati hai lehre gum hamara dekh kar jaise laut jati hai
machhli kinara dekh kar tu hamare janaze me na aana
kahin fir zinda na ho jao tera chehra dekh kar

bht achche khyal hain aftab ji...

behtar ho sakta hai


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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2010, 07:13:05 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 13, 2010, 06:54:43 PM

teri muskaan k sadke ee mere humdum
tu kahe to ashk chhupa muskurate rahen hum...


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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2010, 07:26:33 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 13, 2010, 07:13:05 PM

teri muskaan k sadke ee mere humdum
tu kahe to ashk chhupa muskurate rahen hum...

Tuu muskura aise ke gul bhi sharmsaar ho jayeN
BahareN barse tujhi pe sab ko tujhse pyaar ho jayeN


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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2010, 07:30:09 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 13, 2010, 07:26:33 PM

Tuu muskura aise ke gul bhi sharmsaar ho jayeN
BahareN barse tujhi pe sab ko tujhse pyaar ho jayeN

inn baharon ne mujhse hi to muskurana sikha hai
mujhe dekh hi chand sitaron ne chamakna sikha hai


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nisha bhatia

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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2012, 04:11:57 PM »

bahut khub


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2012, 04:53:09 PM »

Quote from: aftab alam on September 13, 2010, 06:39:41 PM

laut jati hai lehren gum hamara dekh kar
jaise laut jati hai machhli kinara dekh kar
tu hamare janaze me na aana kahin fir
zinda na ho jaun tera chehra dekh kar

aftab ji aapne bahut achha likha hai
maine zara si gustakhi karne ki jurat ki hai

aur zara sa ise adjust kiya hai
parhne men mujhe better lag raha hai

bura na manayeega mere dost
kuchh kuchh karna to doston ka haq banta hai
bansi


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Re: janaze me na aana

«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2012, 12:03:18 AM »

Quote from: aftab alam on September 13, 2010, 06:39:41 PM

laut jati hai lehre gum hamara dekh kar jaise laut jati hai
machhli kinara dekh kar tu hamare janaze me na aana
kahin fir zinda na ho jao tera chehra dekh kar

wah beautiful Clapping Smiley