janm(gul)

by gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:43:48 PM
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gulzargul
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kiun baat kerty ho saat janm jeeny ki
ji bhar diya hy aik janm ke jeeny ny
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2008, 12:49:46 PM »
Nice lines gul ji..

Jeene ki koi wajeh hoti toh jeete
Uska sahara na mila toh kyun jeete
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gulzargul
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2008, 12:53:45 PM »
thanks and nice lines honey ji


gul
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2008, 01:09:06 PM »
DIL KI BATEIN DUNIYA KO BATATE Q HO
JEE BHAR GAYA LEKIN USE JATATE Q HO DOH

APNA BHI HAAL KUCH KUCH TERE JAISA HAIN GUL
LEKIN MERE SABR KO TUM AAZMATE Q HO Crying


(KAHA THE YAAR ITNE DIN DIKHE NAHI)
 
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gulzargul
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2008, 01:16:40 PM »
nice dear sajid

gul
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2008, 02:58:56 PM »
Nice lines Gul Ji

Good contributions Honey sis, Sajid Ji

p.s.

I think this poetry suits more to Shayari-e-Dard than Khumar-e-Ishq. Moving it there.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2008, 07:50:46 AM »
Quote from: gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:43:48 PM
kiun baat kerty ho saat janm jeeny ki
ji bhar diya hy aik janm ke jeeny ny

Koi achcha saathi na mila hoga
Is liye ji bhar gaya hai ek janm mein
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honeyrose
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2008, 08:08:44 AM »
Shukriya gul ji,,Celmira sis..
Nice lines Rajesh ji

Ek janm kafi hai zakhm khaane ke liye
Nahi jeena hai zamane ki khushi ke liye
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2008, 08:19:41 AM »
janm mile fir to milenge tujhse magar
ae mere sanam ab mujhe jaana hoga
wada hai fir khilenge apni chaht k gul wahan
jahan chaand sitaaron se saja ashiyana hoga
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #9 on: October 21, 2008, 08:20:29 AM »
nices lines u wrote everyone Applause
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2008, 09:59:56 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 21, 2008, 08:19:41 AM
janm mile fir to milenge tujhse magar
ae mere sanam ab mujhe jaana hoga
wada hai fir khilenge apni chaht k gul wahan
jahan chaand sitaaron se saja ashiyana hoga
JANAM JANMO KA TO PATA NAHI LEKIN
TERE AANE TAK TERA INTEZAAR HOGA
JIS JAGAH AAJ TUM CHOD JAATE HO HUMKO
USI JAGAH BAAD MARNE KE MERA MAZAAR HOGA
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2008, 10:16:26 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on October 21, 2008, 08:08:44 AM
Shukriya gul ji,,Celmira sis..
Nice lines Rajesh ji

Ek janm kafi hai zakhm khaane ke liye
Nahi jeena hai zamane ki khushi ke liye

Kisi ne theek hi gaya hai

Apne liye jo jiye to kya jiye
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gulzargul
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2008, 10:52:06 AM »
lot of thanks my friends, buht acha reply kiya aap sab ny


gul
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2008, 03:02:14 PM »
Bahoot Hi Achche,.
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2008, 03:03:20 PM »
Quote from: gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:43:48 PM
kiun baat kerty ho saat janm jeeny ki
ji bhar diya hy aik janm ke jeeny ny

Ek Janam Mein Jo Paaye Hain Saath Janam Ke Dukh,.
Shayad Agle Janam Mein, Is Hisse Ki Bhi Khushi Ho,.

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