Jannat se Dooor Ho Gyaa....

by Alam Qazi on May 27, 2009, 11:45:36 AM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 1109 times)
Alam Qazi
Guest

Toot Gayee Shaakh wo, Jispar tha Aashiya'n
Be Ghar ho gyaa, Mai Be Watan ho gyaa

Hath se chut Gayee, Zindagi ki Dorr
Iss Naye safar ka Ab, Nayaa Aagaz ho gyaa

Khamosh Dafn ho gaye, Phir bhi Na jaane kyon
Meri Maut ka, Har Ghar mein Shor ho gyaa

Meri Khatao'n ka mujhe, Aakhir Silaa mil gyaa
Dozakh ki Aag mil Gayee, Jannat se Door ho gyaa..


 tearyeyed tearyeyed
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
dooor ho gaya by Alam Qazi in Shayri-E-Dard
Jis Rehguzar se Guzar gyaa by Alam Qazi in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
Bikhar gyaa mai Tootkar ... by Alam Qazi in Shayri-E-Dard
Phir Khaak Ho Gyaa.... by Alam Qazi in Shayri-E-Dard
.....Dafnaa Gyaa..... by Alam Qazi in Shayri-E-Dard
vikas2210
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2009, 11:54:13 AM »
bahut khoob ... very nice.. keep it up
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 6 hours and 17 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19903
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2009, 12:01:40 PM »
Bohat KHoob, Mashallah Har Ghazal Aapki Dil Choo Jati Hai,.
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2009, 12:03:15 PM »
gud one alam bhai.....bahut hi ummda likha hai aapne Giggle
Logged
Alam Qazi
Guest
«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2009, 12:08:05 PM »
thanks vikas, azeem, and salil...
Logged
SARVESH RASTOGI
Guest
«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2009, 01:43:27 PM »
Kya khooob Qazi Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2009, 06:45:31 PM »
Bohot Khoob Alam sahab
Logged
dead heart
Guest
«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2009, 07:10:18 PM »
Bahaut acha likha hai
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2009, 02:10:07 AM »
beautiful gazal Alam ji,very nice, Applause Applause Applause
Logged
honeyrose
Guest
«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2009, 08:19:13 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob Alam ji..
Logged
_Vicky_
Guest
«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2009, 04:25:35 AM »
Alam Saheb... Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Dost... Bahut Bahut khooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: Jannat se Dooor Ho Gyaa....
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 05:57:53 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.12 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer