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SURESH SANGWAN
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क्या कहूँ किसी एक को दिल ये ज़रा-ज़रा सबने तोड़ा
कुछ थे मेरे अपने और ज़रा- ज़रा रब ने तोड़ा
देखा है जब भी ग़ौर से इनसां को मैने किसी
साफ़ नज़ारे देखना इन आँखों के ढब ने तोड़ा
ख़्वाब कहाँ पलकों के लिये गर हैं नींदें गहरी
है कौन नहीं वाक़िफ़ ख्वाबों को मतलब ने तोड़ा
दम टूटता ना था या रब रिश्ता छूटता ना था
माहौल अमन का हाय गुस्ताख उस लब ने तोड़ा
बंद डिब्बे का सामां मुझे मिला कीड़ों के साथ
देखिए नफ़रत का गुरूर ख़ुश्बू की छब ने तोड़ा
शर्म-ओ-हया का बोझ 'सरु'रहेगा सर पे कब तक
जानती हूँ ये कि मेरी जात को अदब ने तोड़ा
छोड़े थे वहाँ मैनें तो महके हुए लफ्ज़ कुछ
भरम दिल का मेरे उनके हाय सबब ने तोड़ा
Kya kahoon kisi ek ko dil ye zaraa zaraa sab ne todaa
Kuch the mere apne aur zaraa zaraa rab ne todaa
Dekha hai jab bhi gaur se insaaN ko maine kisi
Saaf nazaare dekhna inn aankhoN ke dhab ne todaa
Khwaab kahan palkoN ke lye gar haiN neendeiN gehri
Hai kaun nahiN waqif khwaaboN ko matlab ne todaa
Dam toot tan a tha ya rab rishta choot ta na tha
Mahaul aman ka haye khaamosh us lab ne todaa
Band dobbe ka saamaaN mujhe mila keedoN ke saath
Dekhiye nafrat ka guroor khushboo ki chhab ne todaa
Chhode the wahaan maine to mehke hue lafz kuch
Bharam dil ka mere unke haye sabab ne todaa
Sharm-o-hayaa ka bojh ‘saru’rahega sar par kab tak
Janti hooN ye ki meri jaat ko adab ne todaa
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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2014, 05:00:37 PM » |
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Suresh jee Aadaab ...!
Waah jee kia kahne bahut khoob ... pahle to aapko is nayi kawish par dheroN mubbarakbad...
be had khoob kalaam huyi hai jee ... sabhi sher aik se badhkar aik rahe... aur maqta toh bus behad laajawaab rahaa...
Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ....
Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan O aabaad karte rahiye ....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... 
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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2014, 05:15:09 PM » |
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हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........Parwaaz ji....
Suresh jee Aadaab ...!
Waah jee kia kahne bahut khoob ... pahle to aapko is nayi kawish par dheroN mubbarakbad...
be had khoob kalaam huyi hai jee ... sabhi sher aik se badhkar aik rahe... aur maqta toh bus behad laajawaab rahaa...
Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ....
Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan O aabaad karte rahiye ....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2014, 05:16:04 PM » |
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2014, 05:19:50 PM » |
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हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया .........sir ji..waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2014, 09:16:34 PM » |
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So nice.
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2014, 06:10:59 AM » |
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Umda peshkash
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«Reply #8 on: October 15, 2014, 09:04:29 AM » |
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हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........surindarn ji.
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«Reply #11 on: October 15, 2014, 04:45:51 PM » |
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behtrennn peshkash suresh ji waaahhhh dheroooo daaaadddd
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2014, 12:25:43 PM » |
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Kya likha hai dost.... dil ki gehrai se likha hai.. aur bahut khubsurat hai...
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2014, 04:32:26 PM » |
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2014, 04:33:01 PM » |
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bahut 2 shukriya ashu ji.......................... Kya likha hai dost.... dil ki gehrai se likha hai.. aur bahut khubsurat hai...
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