jati hu mai (nam)

by poonamA on August 07, 2013, 03:13:29 PM

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poonamA

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aankho me din raat ansoo sajati hu mai
bujh gai chiraag ab khud ko jalati hu mai

door tujhse rahkar kush nahi hu mai
bas logon ki khatir muskurati hu mai

din beet jata hai aur dhal jati hai shaam
tere aane ki umeed se dil ko bahlati hu mai

tham ke hathon me phool na anna pade tumhe
gar maut ki taraf kadam jo badati hu mai

muddaton se kiya hai intizaar tera
thak gayee hu ab chali jati hu mai

fursat nahi ab na kijiyega bahana
tere kandhoo per he ab jana chahti hu mai


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2013, 03:52:38 PM »

Quote from: poonamA on August 07, 2013, 03:13:29 PM

nive ,ma'am


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2013, 04:18:01 PM »

khubsurat peshkash poonama ji


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2013, 06:17:17 PM »

बहुत खूब....पूनम जी..... Applause


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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 06:25:47 PM »


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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 07:25:49 PM »

Beautiful creation.... Applause


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2013, 08:22:55 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 09:12:42 PM »

Quote from: poonamA on August 07, 2013, 03:13:29 PM

bahot khoob Applause


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 10:28:16 PM »

waah waah waah waah kya kehne Poonam ji, ek dum dhamaakedaar likhaa hai aapne, one of your best creations till date, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke...!!!


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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 10:46:19 PM »

Poonam jee bahut khoob likha hai apne..Dhero daad.. happy9


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2013, 09:12:23 AM »

wah


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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2013, 10:59:28 AM »

good one


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poonamA

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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2013, 03:12:17 PM »

shukriya sabhi ko


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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 03:27:46 PM »

bohut khub poonam ji waah


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poonamA

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Re: jati hu mai (nam)

«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2013, 03:29:18 PM »

thx saahill

Quote from: saahill on August 08, 2013, 03:27:46 PM

bohut khub poonam ji waah


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