Jee chahta hai:Shayri-E-Dard

Ricky

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Aaj rone ko jee chahta hai k jee bhar k role.n,
bahne dein inn ansuon ko k jee bhar k role.n,
Koshish naa karen ab ghum chipane ki k jee bhar k role.n,
Ankhen band ker woh namee.n mehsoos kare.n k jee bhar k role.n,
bheege hue rukhsaar sae ashko.n ko naa ponche, k jee bhar ke role.n,
khoon ke ghoo.nt kyon piye k jee bhar k role.n,
bojh hai jo dil mein, k ab usse aur naa dabaye.n...........
Aaj rone ko jee chahta hai k jee bhar k role.n !


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2006, 06:44:33 PM »

bas u hin aai thi ki chlo kutch padhoon...........mann mera bhi aaj bas aise hin na jaane kyoun sustt tha ..........................aapko padha toh mujhe apna yoindia ka pahla post yaad aaya ''rona chahti hoon..............''...or yaad aaya ki uss din sach main kya vyatha thi meri ..............aaj aapko padh kar laga ....jaise maine hin likha ho ...aapke inn panktiyaana ko................. dard se chatpataata huaa kutch bhav ..........................kya kahoon aab ...........par sahi hai rone se dil halka ho hin jaata hai ..............

apna khyaal rakhiye ...........................

................................................. .......may god bless you!

................................................. ..........................chandsi


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Meena is back

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2006, 09:49:39 PM »

nice nice!

:D


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Ricky

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2006, 05:12:36 PM »

woh ghum hee hote hain jo aass dilatein hain,
woh ghum hee hote hain jo kushi yaad dilatein hain
Inn ghumo.n ko kalam sae kaghaz mein quaid karlo
Akhir ghum hee toh ahmeeyat-ae-tabassum ka ahsaas dilatein hain !

Well.. Chandsi , I mostly see all of the post at Yoindia and have also seen your "rona chahati hoon" when you had just posted it. The first word came out was "wonderful" and you gotta style. It was just that I hardly post reply as there are so many other stuff on Yoindia which I have to do everytime when I log in.
Well..
Meena, have you lost password of "Meena" so that you have to make "Meena is back" ? Well I was away from Yoindia for few weeks, may be I am missing something.


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2006, 02:54:28 AM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

ricky ji .......aapka ye yoindia behad pasand aaya..............all the best for everything!!

yoindia ka mujhe editing option achcha laga ...........apne hin post ko baar baar padhna or jahan galti huii hai usse thik kar paana .........mujhe behad pasand aaya ......................

so .......likhte rahiye ........iss dard se bhari jindagi main ek jagah ttoh ho jaha ........ek kona bas apna ho ..............

kya likhon ki dil main _aab kutch hai hin nahi
wo jo tha dill MAIN mere _uski parchaahi tak bhi nahi
kisi ke paas sukh hai _toh kisi ke paas khushi bhi nahi
main kya likho ki aab _mere pass bacha kutch bhi nahi

do palon ka pyaar tha _paaya maine
gooroor kiya jispar or khushi paaya maine
aaj wahi sare aam badnaam kar raha hai mujhko
hai mera pyaar paap se badhkar _ehsaas dila raha mujhko

ye khuda aisi kisi ko jindagi na dena
jindagi main kisi ko pyaar ki AISI saza na dena
kisi ke pyaar ko aise goonahon ka naam na dena
bepanah ho mohabbat jisse _ussi se ho rooswaai _aisi shaam na dena

bye tc ..................likhte rahiye ki padhna achcha lagta hai ..............


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Ricky

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2006, 05:52:43 PM »

Ghum..
Ghumo.n kaa aana jaana laga hee rehta hai,
phool ka murjhana aur nai kaliya aana... laga hee rehta hai,
Zaroori nahin ek hee ho iss manzar ka sabab,
Ghumo.n k liye her roz ek naha bahana .... laga hee rehta hai !

Well, It appears you like to have discussion with poetry. its good.
I think you are really able to express yourself very easily.


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2006, 03:18:37 PM »

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kya kahoon _kutch kehne ko bhi nahi banta

jise chaaha_ usse duaao maine maanga bhi nahi jaata

jiss dard se tadpi thi _wo dard kisi ko dikhaaya bhi nahi jaata

hai jo dil main mere _usse apna ya begaana kaha bhi nahi jaata

khuda se maango _toh kya maango _sharm se aankh hai jhuk jaata

jo mera hai hin nahi _usspar haq jataaya bhi nahi jaata

bhoola doon bhi toh kaise _dil se usse nikaala bhi nahi jaatA

kooi jo mujhe duaa bhi de _wo bhi mujh se apnaaya nahi jaata

aab isse jyaada apni kahani _kisi ko bataaya bhi nahi jaata

thanks for every thing .....................khush rahiye ..........main thik hoon .........

......................bye and tc

...........................................chands i


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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2006, 05:17:08 PM »

Wah kya baat hai Ricky and tanhachand ,gr8 poetry going on here with really well expressed emotional talks Winking


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sanya310

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2006, 05:17:08 PM »

very good! keep going..


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Aryaan

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2006, 08:24:36 PM »

Bohat khoob Ricky & TanhaChand...


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Ricky

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2006, 08:42:38 PM »

Thankyou Sanya and Nidhi and Aryaan.
Well. Chandsi.. I again want to say that you have style.

lavs dar lavs ashk samete hain.. phir bhi kahin koi kami hai,
Sare fasane kaghaz mein quaid kare.. phir bhi kahin koi kami hai,
aksar kaliyo.n sae phoolo.n ka thikana poochte hain.
K manzilen doondhi saari.. phir bhi kahin koi kami hai !!


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Rajbir

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2006, 10:34:00 PM »

Ricky and tanhachand...Bahut khoob !

Very well written. Keep going...

Rajbir


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2006, 06:37:13 AM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

Thankyou Sanya and Nidhi and Aryaan.

Well. Chandsi.. I again want to say that you have style.

lavs dar lavs ashk samete hain.. phir bhi kahin koi kami hai,
Sare fasane kaghaz mein quaid kare.. phir bhi kahin koi kami hai,
aksar kaliyo.n sae phoolo.n ka thikana poochte hain.
K manzilen doondhi saari.. phir bhi kahin koi kami hai !!

wow!!.................too good..........

jiivan ko na jaane kis- kis tarah sambhaala
................................................. ...phir bhi kahin_ kutch kami si hai
pyaar main na jaane kaise - kaise ghaav paaye
................................................. ...phir bhi kahin _kutch kami si hai
na ji hin paaye dhang se _na mar hin paaye hum
............................................na jaane kis baat ki kahin _kutch kami si hai

thanks !!!!....aap sab ko ..................................bye tc

................................................. ..........chandsi...


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Ricky

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2006, 06:42:48 PM »

Thankyou Rajbir and Chandsi

Kuch naa badlega ..

Sharafat sae duniya k liye haath badaya
Masumiyat sae kadam uthaya
Socha k rawayatein badal jayengi
lekin _humne sirf ek aur shor hee machaya !!!


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2006, 01:44:51 PM »

maasoom tum bane hin rehna
ki khuda dekhta hai

kutch achcha tum karte hin rehna
ki khuda dekhta hai

kutch tum badal paao ya na paao
barkkat milega tumko ki khuda dekhta hai

shor machaana bhi hai jarori
aazmaaish ho rahi sabki ki khuda sabko dekhta hai ..................


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