Jee chahta hai -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

tushar_4u_im

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«Reply #15 on: January 26, 2006, 04:04:54 PM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

Thankyou Rajbir and Chandsi

Kuch naa badlega ..

Sharafat sae duniya k liye haath badaya
Masumiyat sae kadam uthaya
Socha k rawayatein badal jayengi
lekin _humne sirf ek aur shor hee machaya !!!

tum aab sarafat kya dikhate ho jalaya hai tumne humara ghar ........

kiya hai zulm o sitam kiya hai tumne hi to ghar se begharr........

mai to aab bhi apna dard sametker aapna gharonda bana lunga.......

tum mehlo me reh ker bhi dhundo aapne nishan...................


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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #16 on: January 26, 2006, 06:38:24 PM »

Tushaar....

What you got from that..

Well.. I posted ::

Sharafat sae duniya k liye haath badaya
Masumiyat sae kadam uthaya
Socha k rawayatein badal jayengi
lekin _humne sirf ek aur shor hee machaya !!!

let me expalin what I meant .The above lines says that..

Tried hard to go with this world, tried to our best for making good changes but still all those efforts were useless because this world really don't deserve to go good.. people still believe all those old things whether they are wrong or right. So our effort of changing the system (rawayatein) was useless.. was nothing more than just another effort which was never noticed.

But you answerd as if I have done something wrong with you personally.
Anyways..

Har lavs hazaar matlab rakhta hai,
Zarurat ho to sirf ek gehere vichaar ki

And chandsi , it was good. just a little misleading last stanza.

So
Humara har ek lavs ek awaaz hai,
Humara har ek bol ek saaz hai,
Khuda toh dekhta hee hai ...
Zamana dekhe aisa bhi kuch andaaz hai !!


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #17 on: January 26, 2006, 08:06:29 PM »

hum main gar kutch baat hai
humaara har lavz agar aawaj hai
hum khud ki gun gaaye na gaayein
karein kutch aisa ki duniyaa gun gaaye_tab kooi baat ho............

......thanks for every thing ..........


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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #18 on: January 27, 2006, 08:53:53 AM »

Very Nice Rickyji & TanhaChandji....... Usual Smile

Quote from: "RICKY"

Sharafat sae duniya k liye haath badaya
Masumiyat sae kadam uthaya
Socha k rawayatein badal jayengi
lekin _humne sirf ek aur shor hee machaya !!!

Quote from: "TanhaChand"

kya likhon ki dil main _aab kutch hai hin nahi
wo jo tha dill MAIN mere _uski parchaahi tak bhi nahi
kisi ke paas sukh hai _toh kisi ke paas khushi bhi nahi
main kya likho ki aab _mere pass bacha kutch bhi nahi

do palon ka pyaar tha _paaya maine
gooroor kiya jispar or khushi paaya maine
aaj wahi sare aam badnaam kar raha hai mujhko
hai mera pyaar paap se badhkar _ehsaas dila raha mujhko

ye khuda aisi kisi ko jindagi na dena
jindagi main kisi ko pyaar ki AISI saza na dena
kisi ke pyaar ko aise goonahon ka naam na dena
bepanah ho mohabbat jisse _ussi se ho rooswaai _aisi shaam na dena

Very Well Written ....


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #19 on: January 28, 2006, 10:32:36 AM »

ji chahta hai aab door chali jaaoun
tum se bandha har rishta mita doon
par........
tum ho dill main dil main hin rahoge
maine chaahe antim nishaani mita doon

jindagi ke kaii roop rang hain
khushi na sahi dard hin sahi
par.........
rahoge toh paas hin chaahe jiss roop main
tum hin kaho kaise har kahaani mita doon......


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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #20 on: January 28, 2006, 01:29:03 PM »

Dil Cahata Hai.. Tayree zulfoo ko sawaru Ayasay..
Dil Cahata Hai.. Tujkoo Neharu Ayasay...

Tayree Cahata Ko May Cahu Kaysay..
Dil ke Cahata Ko Bhulaa kaysay..

Mayray Asahkoo May hee Mayraa Afsanaa hai..
Na Janay Mayraa dil Que... tayraa devanaa hai...

Ques....


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tushar_4u_im

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #21 on: January 28, 2006, 02:36:42 PM »

lafzo me aahsas a baya kara jaye kaise......

tumse hi bichre the kabhi aab tum se fir mila jaye kaise......

her taraf hi humare badnaam hone k charche hai ...........

tumhe humare naam se bhi door kiya jaye kaise


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #22 on: January 28, 2006, 03:30:11 PM »

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ji chahta hai bhoola doon par bholaaou kaise
tumse bandha har rishta mita doon kaise
tum hin dil main ho tum hi rahoge chahe jaise
main har nishaani mitaa doon chaahe jaise

jindagi roolaaye mujhko chahe jaise
tum sataao mujhko chaahe jaise
hai mujhe sneh tumse aise
marte ko jeevan ki_ chaah ho jaise ...............


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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #23 on: January 29, 2006, 02:56:03 PM »

Nice work all..

Hasratein-kwahishon mein sabhi jee rahe,
Koshishe jeene ki sabhi kar rahe,
Gar mile khushi tumhe kisi k saath
kyun unn lamhon ko tum mitane ki zidd kar rahe !!


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #24 on: January 31, 2006, 06:16:53 PM »

hmmmm................

ziddd..............lamhain.............khwaahish. ........hasratain..........................

bada mushkil hai ...........................


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #25 on: February 01, 2006, 02:27:04 AM »

zidd meri ki usoolono pe hin chalna hai
hasratain aisi ki aasamaan ko choona hai
khwaahish aisi ki usoolon ko todti hai
lamhae hain jo _imtihaan leti hai
imtihaan ko jitna_ toh hin jeevan hai

par....................

aise jeevan se kya_ jismain keval rona hai
hasratin daba _ bas rote hin rehna hai
hai khuda bade hin sang dill
jisne banaaya usko bhi tang dill...............


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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #26 on: February 01, 2006, 07:16:33 AM »

Jee chahta hai kabhi sub yeh badal jaaye,
Kuch silsile aise ho ke rooh ko sakoon mil jaaye,
Dard dil ka, yeh maddham maddham tadap meri,
Bechaini, kasak, yeh ashkon se bheegi palkein,
Kabhi koi aisa mile in sabka dhang badal jaaye,
Koi humdard humsafar ho mera ke
yeh zindagi meri bhi sawarr jaaye...........
gesu's tadap!!!!!!!!


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #27 on: April 09, 2006, 04:43:58 AM »

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nice...................


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tanhachand

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #28 on: April 10, 2006, 04:45:05 PM »

ji chahta hai ..................

ki sahbdo main likh doon
kutch aisa _jisse main goon goonaa paoun
mila mujhe apnnapan aapke iss ghar main
uss pyaar ko kaise main sabdon main sametoon....

................................................. ......thanks !!

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Jee chahta hai

«Reply #29 on: April 10, 2006, 05:04:45 PM »

nice work all. tongue3


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