Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein:Shayri-E-Dard

Sahiba Zehra

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Muddaton baad kaaghaz uthaya,
Aur humne kalam ko haath lagaya..

Kuch kehte usse pehle hee..
Khambakht dil ne ek saaz bajaya..

Usne fir se harr wo kissa dohraya..
Ki bechara dill khudh hi bharr aaya..

Jee karne laga ki ro de inn alfaazon main
per kaise..hume kuch naa samajh aaya..

Fir ek Jumla jo humne kahi suna tha..
woh zehen main aaya..

"Ke tere dard zamana hassega !!"

OR

"I am too big to cry"


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javedarshad

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2009, 09:59:19 PM »

bahut khoob

yeh kaisa , kisi ne hai saleeqa banaya
Keh abhi tak duniyan mein jeena na aaya

javed


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Sahiba Zehra

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2009, 10:13:00 PM »

Shukriya Javedji
lekin agar aapko isme kuch bhi atpata lage, yane ki shayari ke andaas mainyaa koi suggestion ho toh please bataein.

Mujhe khud iska aakhir kuch ajab laga...per yahi mera poora khayal tha iss nazm k peeche.


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javedarshad

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2009, 10:40:38 PM »

SAhiba ji adaab

main nahinnsamajh sakta is nazm mein koi aap ko mashware ki zaroorat hai . jaise ke aap ne khud hi likha hai ke kuch samajh mein nahin aaya jab likhne wala hi majboor ho to doosra kia kah sakta hai

javed


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injured.warrior

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2009, 06:57:48 AM »


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Jhuki Palkein

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2009, 07:04:15 AM »

Bohat Khoob Likha Hay Aapnay Zehra Jee


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aaina

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2009, 11:41:28 AM »

very nice sahiba ji bhut acha likha hai aapne umeed hai ki aage bhi aapko padne ka moqa milega, keep writing


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deepika_divya

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2009, 11:46:25 AM »

Waah waah Sahiba ji bahoot bahoot Khoob !


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Sahiba Zehra

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Re: Jee karta hai ki Ro de hum in alfaazon mein

«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2012, 05:40:31 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on August 23, 2009, 10:40:38 PM

SAhiba ji adaab

Quote from: javedarshad on August 23, 2009, 10:40:38 PM

main nahinnsamajh sakta is nazm mein koi aap ko mashware ki zaroorat hai . jaise ke aap ne khud hi likha hai ke kuch samajh mein nahin aaya jab likhne wala hi majboor ho to doosra kia kah sakta hai

javed

Javed saheb,
Shukriya Jo aapne waqt nikala aur jawab diya,Jo akhri line hai, ussi naZr rakh ye ouri nazm kalam-band ki Thi,acha laga ki sabhi ko achi lagi. Shukriya Jhuki plken , aaina, nisha and injured worrior hi.


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