Jee karta hai ......

by Just_Hate_Love on April 15, 2005, 07:26:32 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2005, 02:10:20 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
most welcome JHL. Usual Smile

"Aaj phir haule se aakar bulata hai koi,
   apna hone ka ehsaas karata hai koi,
   khyalon me chupke se dastak dekar,
   yadon ke khandar girata hai koi,
   jab bhi dard had se bad jata hai toh,
   pyaar ka marham lagata hai koi,
   jab bhi bhool jane ko jee chahta hai,
   toh yadon ke deepak jalata hai koi,
   shabe gam ke sagar se bach aaye hain ham,
   phir kyun sahil par kashti dubata hai koi."


bohut achaa likha hai nidhi ji
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«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2005, 02:15:41 PM »
Quote from: "amit_is_always_cool"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
most welcome JHL. Usual Smile

"Aaj phir haule se aakar bulata hai koi,
   apna hone ka ehsaas karata hai koi,
   khyalon me chupke se dastak dekar,
   yadon ke khandar girata hai koi,
   jab bhi dard had se bad jata hai toh,
   pyaar ka marham lagata hai koi,
   jab bhi bhool jane ko jee chahta hai,
   toh yadon ke deepak jalata hai koi,
   shabe gam ke sagar se bach aaye hain ham,
   phir kyun sahil par kashti dubata hai koi."


bohut achaa likha hai nidhi ji
Thanx amit.
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #17 on: April 24, 2005, 01:05:40 PM »
Kya baat hai Nidhi aaj kal bahut hi cool likhne lagi ho ...
Waise pehle bhi achha likhti thi par ab to bahut achha likhne lagi ho ...
Nice keep it up ...


Hum kyu koi hasti aankhon ko rulaaye,
Aap to dil mein base ho kaise aapko bhulaaye;

Hum haar chuke hai zindagi se,
Ab kaun hame is duniya mein aazmaaye;

Humko to chup kar diya aapki nigaaho ne,
Ab mehfil mein aap hi kuchh farmaaye;

Lod mitt chuke hai mohabbat mein,
Aao zinda laasho ka kabrastaan banaaye;

Isi pyaar mein hum bhi mar jaaye to ghum nahi,
Par khwaahish hai ki unke naam ye dil kar jaaye ...
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«Reply #18 on: May 02, 2005, 05:07:10 PM »
Thanx JHL,ab summers aa gaye hain,to thoda cool likhna hi padta hai Winking

Bohat khoob likha aapne bhi.
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«Reply #19 on: May 02, 2005, 05:51:08 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
most welcome JHL. Usual Smile

"Aaj phir haule se aakar bulata hai koi,
   apna hone ka ehsaas karata hai koi,
   khyalon me chupke se dastak dekar,
   yadon ke khandar girata hai koi,
   jab bhi dard had se bad jata hai toh,
   pyaar ka marham lagata hai koi,
   jab bhi bhool jane ko jee chahta hai,
   toh yadon ke deepak jalata hai koi,
   shabe gam ke sagar se bach aaye hain ham,
   phir kyun sahil par kashti dubata hai koi."


wah!!!!! jhl.........superbbbbbb  nidhi.........tumhari  kami  bahot  mehsoos  ho rahi thi.....wonderful......

ai  mere dil  kisi  se sikwa  na  kar
ab is  jahan  mein  koi tumhara nahin
jiski aagosh  mein soya  tha barson  se
ab  woh kisi  aur ka hai tumhara nahin........
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«Reply #20 on: May 03, 2005, 04:30:24 AM »
Thanx waheed,bohat khoob.

"Kisi ki yaad is kadar aa rahi hai,
 kyon aaj jaan meri jaa rahi hai,
 kaash tu aa jaye ek baar mere paas,
 khushi khushi lungi,jeevan ki akhiri saans."
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«Reply #21 on: May 03, 2005, 09:44:02 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Thanx waheed,bohat khoob.

"Kisi ki yaad is kadar aa rahi hai,
 kyon aaj jaan meri jaa rahi hai,
 kaash tu aa jaye ek baar mere paas,
 khushi khushi lungi,jeevan ki akhiri saans."


hmmm.............ur  welcome  nidhi .............very  nice  nidhi..............

uski  yaadein  hai  tumhare saath usko bachaye rakhna
woh  aayega  tere paas ek diya uske naam ka jalaye rakhana
hongi  har  dil ki  armaan pori  tere dil ki ai  "Nidhi"
sirf  uske liye  khuda  ke saamne apne haath uthaye rakhna..........
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«Reply #22 on: May 06, 2005, 12:36:41 PM »
Wowww ...
Great written by both of you Nidhi and Waheed ...
Keep it up both ...
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«Reply #23 on: May 06, 2005, 12:47:44 PM »
Aankhon ko yu jhukaaye na,
Jalti shama ko bujhaaye na,
Jo dil ko tadapne pe majboor kar de,
Aisa koi nagma sunaaaye na,
Khushi judaai ki jhalak rahi hai nigaaho mein,
Aansu mein us khushi ko chhupaaye na ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #24 on: May 08, 2005, 12:53:49 AM »
Wah! Bohat khoob.. JHL, Nidhi & Waheed......
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«Reply #25 on: May 08, 2005, 07:08:44 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Jee karta hai teri in aankhon mein kho jaaye,
Aansu bankar teri palkon ko bheego jaaye,
Aansu ye tere aaye bahaar bankar,
Aur mere dard ko inme doobo jaaye,
Jee rahe hai ab tak zindagi ki aas mein,
Par ab sochte hai maut ke pehlu mein so jaaye ...


aansu bhi sookh chuke hain, rona bhi bhool gaye hain,
aise juda hue, ek ek din mar mar ke ji rahe hain
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«Reply #26 on: May 08, 2005, 07:14:18 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
most welcome JHL. Usual Smile

"Aaj phir haule se aakar bulata hai koi,
   apna hone ka ehsaas karata hai koi,
   khyalon me chupke se dastak dekar,
   yadon ke khandar girata hai koi,
   jab bhi dard had se bad jata hai toh,
   pyaar ka marham lagata hai koi,
   jab bhi bhool jane ko jee chahta hai,
   toh yadon ke deepak jalata hai koi,
   shabe gam ke sagar se bach aaye hain ham,
   phir kyun sahil par kashti dubata hai koi."


Wah wah waha..........spec. the last line just mind blowing
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«Reply #27 on: May 08, 2005, 06:21:29 PM »
wah waheed,wat a reply,wonderful yaar,thanx.
Thanx naveed,JHL,Aryaan and ISha,thanx a lot Usual Smile

Nice one JHL.
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #28 on: May 08, 2005, 06:52:21 PM »

You Welcome NIDHI




Jheel se zyada gehri thi jiski aankhen
mere yaar wohi bewafa nikla,
Kiya tha sabse zyada jispe humne eitbaar,
mere yaar wohi bewafa nikla,
Mehfil-e-deewaano mein jisne hume pohachaya,
mere yaar wohi befawa nikla,
Khuda ke baad jise mere labo ne yaad kiya sabse zyada,
mere yaar wohi bewafa nikla,
Jab bhi kiya intezaar toh sirf usika
mere yaar wohi befawa nikla,
Hawa bhi jinke hooton ko choo ke ho jati thi num,
mere yaar wohi bewafa nikla,
Na thi bewafii ki umeed bhi kabhi jinse,
mera wohi yaar bewfa nikla...


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«Reply #29 on: May 08, 2005, 08:35:17 PM »
Nidhi, JHL and Waheed bohat khoob... dill tak lagay sher iss thread per...

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