jee lenge jeevan ansoo chupa kar....

by punam on April 21, 2008, 12:52:30 PM
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kehe dete hain hum ek ek baat aap se
chupate rehte ho aap humse aksar...

Kab se intazaar tha humein wo lamhe ka
Jab ek din bayaan karoge dil ki baat aakar..

meri pratiksha ka phal mil hi gaya
mile jab aake mujhse meri hi sahar..

chamk utha tha chand meri aankhon me
milna bhi kuch aisa hua...dekh bhi na payi jee bhar kar....

Meri khushiyon ko sada zakhm hi mile
chalna likha hai kismat me jo kanton ki rah par...

muskurana hai hume unki khushi k liye
jee lenge jeevan ansoo chupa kar.....
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2008, 06:10:05 PM »
Quote from: punam on April 21, 2008, 12:52:30 PM
kehe dete hain hum ek ek baat aap se
chupate rehte ho aap humse aksar...

Kab se intazaar tha humein wo lamhe ka
Jab ek din bayaan karoge dil ki baat aakar..

meri pratiksha ka phal mil hi gaya
mile jab aake mujhse meri hi sahar..

chamk utha tha chand meri aankhon me
milna bhi kuch aisa hua...dekh bhi na payi jee bhar kar....

Meri khushiyon ko sada zakhm hi mile
chalna likha hai kismat me jo kanton ki rah par...

muskurana hai hume unki khushi k liye
jee lenge jeevan ansoo chupa kar.....

gud lines punam ji...
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2008, 07:26:00 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on April 21, 2008, 01:06:40 PM
Good Job Punam Ji.....
Achha Bayan Kiya Hai Tadap.e.Ishq Ko Keep It Up.

.....
Karta Hoon Yun To Main Qismat Par Aitbaar
Fir Bhi.e.Sanam Teri Ik Haan Ka Sawaal Hai.

Yun To Chhod Gaye Ho Tum Hume Tanha
Fir Bhi Dil Main Ik Aapka Hi Khayal Hai.

Har Dum Chamakti Rehti Hai Meri Aankhein
Jaante Hai Ye Aapke Chehra.e.Noor Ka Kamal Hai.

Rehkar Judaa Aapse Khus Hum Bhi Nahi.e.Humdum
Zaraa Kabhi Pass Aakr Dekh TumBin Kya Haal Hai..


Thanx Majid jibahot khoob ..really bahot acha likhe aap ne...
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punam
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2008, 07:28:58 PM »
Thanx pandit ji...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2008, 04:44:46 AM »
Bohat khoob likha hai punam.. Clapping Smiley
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2008, 11:37:29 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Punam.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Alfaaz Likhe hain aapne..!!
aur Bahut khoooooob Shihab ji...!!


Har Yaad Unki Jeene ka Sahara Deti Hai Mujhko,
Hai Yeh Bhi Such Ki Tu Yaad Bahut Aati Hai Mujhko....
Pa Leta Gar Tumko, To Yeh Zindgi Kitni Haseen Hoti,
Bas Isi Baat Ka Zindgi Bhar Afsos Rahega Mujhko....!!
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2008, 01:40:22 PM »
Thanx...wah mann ji..bahot khoob...bahot dino k baad lagta hai aap aaj likhne k mood me ho...

yaadon me unki hi ab jeeti hun main
dil se unhe nahi nikal pati hun main...

kho ke bhi unhe payi hun main
bhulne ki kosish se hari hun main...
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2008, 01:45:27 PM »
bahoot khoob punam ji  Clapping Smiley





Baadal
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2008, 02:22:12 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Punam.. har baar ki tarah Great Work.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
aur rahi Mood Ki baat to Mood aaj Waqai Kuch Shayarana Hai..!!


Har Waqt Uska Haseen Chehra Yaad Aata hai Mujhko,
Yeh Alag Baat hai ki, Deedar Kabhi Hua Nahi Uska... tongue3

Dil se Shuru Hui Yeh Mohabbat, Aankhon tak Jayegi,
Ab tamanna hai Yahi Ki, Bas Nazaara Karun Har Pal uska....!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 25, 2008, 08:30:24 AM »
Nice One Poonam Sis,.'
Majid Bhai,.
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2008, 12:06:16 PM »
Beautiful wording and piercing thoughts, I like the way you hurt yourself with unimaginable instincts.
Really marvelous.
Keep the spirit up.
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chamk utha tha chand meri aankhon me
milna bhi kuch aisa hua...dekh bhi na payi jee bhar kar...
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Tantalizing above one...  Applause
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Iss ka jawab meri poem akhir kab tak men band hai, issliye wohi post karta hun.

Tum dard chhupa kar rakhoge, -
Yeh silsila aakhir kab tak. -

Tum kitne khat likh kar phaadoge, -
Yeh haalat rahegi aakhir kab tak. -

Tum izhaar ko raaz banaaoge, -
Yeh zubaan pe shikan aakhir kab tak. -

Tum khud ko anjaa'n bataaoge, -
Yeh la'ilmee aakhir kab tak. -

Tum tasavvur men gul khilaaoge, -
Yeh sapnon ka mahal aakhir kab tak. -

Tum kab tak dil ko bahlaaoge, -
Yeh Na,maaqooli aakhir kab tak. -

Tum dil ki baat kab bayaan kar paaoge, -
Yeh khaamoshi ka aalam aakhir kab tak. -

Tum aise jeevan kab tak biataaoge, -
Yeh haalat-e-zaar aakhir kab tak. -

(Syed Naami)
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2008, 12:29:58 PM »
bahoot khoob Punam, Majid, Mann and Syed ji!!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2008, 12:49:01 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 29, 2008, 12:29:58 PM
bahoot khoob Punam, Majid, Mann and Syed ji!!!

Buhat shukriya aap ka bhi.
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punam
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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2008, 08:11:04 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on April 29, 2008, 12:06:16 PM
Beautiful wording and piercing thoughts, I like the way you hurt yourself with unimaginable instincts.
Really marvelous.
Keep the spirit up.
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Tantalizing above one...  Applause
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(Syed Naami)


Thanx syed ji aap yehan aaye aur yeh padhe aur aap ko acha laga...
thanx a lot.....
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punam
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2008, 08:12:09 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on April 29, 2008, 12:06:16 PM
Beautiful wording and piercing thoughts, I like the way you hurt yourself with unimaginable instincts.
Really marvelous.
Keep the spirit up.
------------------.

Tantalizing above one...  Applause
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Iss ka jawab meri poem akhir kab tak men band hai, issliye wohi post karta hun.

Tum dard chhupa kar rakhoge, -
Yeh silsila aakhir kab tak. -

Tum kitne khat likh kar phaadoge, -
Yeh haalat rahegi aakhir kab tak. -

Tum izhaar ko raaz banaaoge, -
Yeh zubaan pe shikan aakhir kab tak. -

Tum khud ko anjaa'n bataaoge, -
Yeh la'ilmee aakhir kab tak. -

Tum tasavvur men gul khilaaoge, -
Yeh sapnon ka mahal aakhir kab tak. -

Tum kab tak dil ko bahlaaoge, -
Yeh Na,maaqooli aakhir kab tak. -

Tum dil ki baat kab bayaan kar paaoge, -
Yeh khaamoshi ka aalam aakhir kab tak. -

Tum aise jeevan kab tak biataaoge, -
Yeh haalat-e-zaar aakhir kab tak. -

(Syed Naami)

Bahot khoob ..bahot hi acha likhe aap sayed ji...
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