Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

by harashmahajan on October 17, 2008, 06:12:19 AM
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Jeene ki aarzu meiN unke paas aa gaye
Itne diye haiN Zakhm ke ZubaN pe aa gaye.

Ek umra tamaam ho gayi unki Talaash maiN
Pake magar unhe toh hum tanhaii paa gaye.

Sehr-o-shaam tha kabhi zuba pe  uka naam,
Khud hi bana ke mahel woh pal meiN hi dha gaye.

Umeed thi raheNge hum tamaam umra saath
Banke majhi kashti ke kashti duba gaye.

Samajh ke pakki neev hamne banayi minar-e-khwab
Ab kya kaheiN woh Neev par diya jala gaya.
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2008, 06:20:29 AM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB AUR UMDA KALAM
PESH KIYA AAPNE HARSH JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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baadal102
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2008, 06:33:55 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khoob bahut hi umda kya baat hai harash ji
as usual gr8 lines from ur side.





Baadal
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2008, 06:38:48 AM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on October 17, 2008, 06:12:19 AM
Jeene ki aarzu meiN unke paas aa gaye
Itne diye haiN Zakhm ke ZubaN pe aa gaye.

Ek umra tamaam ho gayi unki Talaash maiN
Pake magar unhe toh hum tanhaii paa gaye.

Sehr-o-shaam tha kabhi zuba pe  uka naam,
Khud hi bana ke mahel woh pal meiN hi dha gaye.

Umeed thi raheNge hum tamaam umra saath
Banke majhi kashti ke kashti duba gaye.

Samajh ke pakki neev hamne banayi minar-e-khwab
Ab kya kaheiN woh Neev par diya jala gaya.
LAUTE HAIN APNE SHEHAR ME HUM BARSO BAAD
APNO KE BEECH AAKER HUM GHABRA GAYE
ITNI VEERANIYA HAR MANZAR HAIN KHAUFNAK
AB SOCHTE HAIN GHAYEL YEH KAHA AA GAYE

                    -SG-
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2008, 07:14:15 AM »
such a wonderful creation harsh ji Applause

kaafi dino baad aapka likha padhne ko mila par jab padha to aur bhi acha laga .....   Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2008, 07:31:27 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on October 17, 2008, 06:20:29 AM
Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB AUR UMDA KALAM
PESH KIYA AAPNE HARSH JI...
BY. K.SHAEL

Shael sahab bahut bahut Shukriyaa..
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2008, 07:41:41 AM »
bohat bohat umda ,waah! Harash ji.... Applause Applause Applause
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2008, 07:44:15 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on October 17, 2008, 06:33:55 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khoob bahut hi umda kya baat hai harash ji
as usual gr8 lines from ur side.

Baadal

bahoot bahoo Shukriyaa baadal ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2008, 08:01:07 AM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on October 17, 2008, 06:12:19 AM
Jeene ki aarzu meiN unke paas aa gaye
Itne diye haiN Zakhm ke ZubaN pe aa gaye.

Ek umra tamaam ho gayi unki Talaash maiN
Pake magar unhe toh hum tanhaii paa gaye.

Clapping Smiley Bahut umdah!
Woh aa gaye qareeb, jigar mein samaa gaye!
Ham ko lagaa, 'abd', ki, ham hayaat paa gaye!
Khalwat ki chaah ney, magar, aisey khilaaye gul;
Woh zindagee key baag ko, saidaa* banaa gaye!!
*Jangal, beeharh
                            - abd bundeli
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honeyrose
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2008, 10:24:20 AM »
Wah bohat khoob... Applause
Harash ji achcha likha hai aapne
Kafi dino baad aapke nazm padhne ko mila ...   


Wah bohat khoob Sajid ji very nice reply.. Applause


Wah Abd ji bohat khoob very nice reply... Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2008, 11:02:27 AM »
Shukriyah honeyrose ji!
                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2008, 11:34:15 AM »
Nice One Harash Ji,.
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2008, 11:38:36 AM »
Jeene Ki Aarzu Thi, Khushiyon Ki Aas Thi,.
Dhoond Rahe The Khushi Apni, Jo Uske Paas Thi,.

De Na Saki Wo Mere Hisse Ki Khushi, To Gham Hi Apnaa Liya,.
Chordkar Jeene Ki Aarzu KO Humne, Maut Se Rishta Banaa Liya,.
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2008, 11:53:34 AM »
Wonderful ! Harash ji just wonderful ! Applause
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2008, 12:10:14 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on October 17, 2008, 06:12:19 AM
Jeene ki aarzu meiN unke paas aa gaye
Itne diye haiN Zakhm ke ZubaN pe aa gaye.

Ek umra tamaam ho gayi unki Talaash maiN
Pake magar unhe toh hum tanhaii paa gaye.

Sehr-o-shaam tha kabhi zuba pe  uka naam,
Khud hi bana ke mahel woh pal meiN hi dha gaye.

Umeed thi raheNge hum tamaam umra saath
Banke majhi kashti ke kashti duba gaye.

Samajh ke pakki neev hamne banayi minar-e-khwab
Ab kya kaheiN woh Neev par diya jala gaya.

Bohot Khoob Harash Ji Applause Applause Applause Aaj muddat ba'ad aapne yahan likha hai...... Usual Smile
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