Jeena bhi kya jeena NM

by uditakeehsaas on July 04, 2009, 08:40:28 AM
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uditakeehsaas
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Ae zindagi, tu kahan le (aayi)
 Jahaan jindagi mano kohi andheri gehrahi
 
Aaj mujhe mere lakshya nahein hai kohi hosh
 Kulhi hai merie aankhen par dil hai behosh
 
Kahin mere raah mein koi ek diya to jalao
Mujhe meri zindagi ka wajood to samjhao
 
Pehle toota mera dil jinme sapne the hazaar
 Phir tooti meri umeede, hai kaisa tha yeh pyaar
 
 Baadi karvi thi yeh jiddagi kee suchchhai
Khud ko sambhala toh paas thi sirf meri purchhai.
 
Meri tanhai,mera akelapan,bas yahi hain ab mere paas
Jeevan me kuch karne ki nah hai umeed, aur nah kohi aas
 
Hothon pe hansi bus yoonhee rakhti hoon
Koi  kya jaane kaise andar se roti hoon
 
Kabhi neendon mein dikh jati hai ek pyaar ka saya
 Aankhen jab khooley, toh woh meri yaadon ki maaya
 
Kaise suljhaoon main is zindagi ki paheli
Uljhi har raah hai aur berangeen hai holi.
 
Jo ankhe sapne sajaya karti thi kabhi
Utsaah aur lagan hai inme,kehte the sabhi
 
 Aaj inme ek sunaapan,veeraniyat si hai
 mano bahaa kohi gammon ka leh
 
Kya karna aisey jindgai jee kar mujhey
jahaan har din maut ka intazaar ho

framed by Udita,drawn by Vivek
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 08:41:55 AM »
Nice sharing Udita...

Welcome to Yoindia!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 08:50:16 AM »
Beautiful sharing Udita ji. Applause Applause Applause
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uditakeehsaas
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 09:10:51 AM »
tis poem has been put into a canvas by me but the words have been drawn n colored by Vivek
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2009, 09:12:03 AM »
Nice sharing Udita ji... Applause
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superspawn10
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2009, 11:46:36 AM »
Nice Sharing.. Usual Smile
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uditakeehsaas
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2009, 10:17:45 AM »
d same poem has been edited again by Vivek:

Ae zindagi, tu kahan le (aayi)
 Jahaan jindagi mano kohi andheri gehrahi
 
Aaj mujhe mere lakshya ka nahein hai kohi hosh
 Kulhi hai merie aankhen par dil hai behosh
 
Kahin mere raah mein koi ek diya to jalao
Mujhe meri zindagi ka wajood to samjhao
 
Pehle toota mera dil jinme sapne the hazaar
 Phir tooti meri umeede, hai kaisa tha yeh pyaar
 
 Baadi karvi thi yeh jiddagi kee suchchhai
Khud ko sambhala toh paas thi sirf meri parchhai.
 
Meri tanhai,mera akelapan,bas yahi hain ab mere paas
Jeevan me kuch karne ki nah hai umeed, aur nah kohi aas
 
Hothon pe hansi bus yoonhee rakhti hoon
Koi  kya jaane kaise, andar se roti hoon
 
Kabhi neendon mein dikh jati hai ek pyaar ka saya
 Aankhen jab khooley, toh woh meri yaadon ki maaya
 
Kaise suljhaoon main is zindagi ki paheli
Uljhi har raah hai aur berangeen har holi.
 
Jo ankhe sapne sajaya karti thi kabhi
Utsaah aur  josh hai inme, kehte the sabhi
 
 Aaj inme ek sunaapan, ek veeraniyat si hai
 mano beh raha ho koi, gammon ka leh
 
Kya karna aisey jindage jee kar roj
 Jaha har waqt kartein hai hum maut ke khoj


plz do let us know how u like tis 1...
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banjara
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 09:23:06 AM »
wah!kya khoob likha hai!
mashaallah!
Vivekji khud kyu nahi is mehfil ka hissa ban jaate!unka hum teh dil se swagat karenge...

Uditaji,aapka bhi shukriya jo aap Vivekji jaise shayar ke lafzon ko duniya ke saamne le aayi!!!
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