Jeene Ki Aas Chhod Di Hai

by Devdas_online on December 28, 2005, 07:06:54 AM
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Devdas_online
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Jab Maine Jeene Ki Aas Chhod Di Hai,
Phir Khuda Tune Mujhe Kyon Zinda Rakha Hai
Jab Maine Andhere Ko Apni Zindagi Bana Liya Hai,
Phir Suraj Tu Kyon Mera Dil Roshan Kar Raha Hai

Na Yeh Zindagi Mujhe Chhodti Hai, Na Maut Aati Hai,
Khuda Ke Dar Pe Zindagi Sasti Aur Maut Mehangi Lagti Hai
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Princess21
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2005, 08:52:05 AM »
Wow Devdas buhat acha likha hai...TUm ne......
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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2005, 09:13:18 AM »
Nahi bakhshi kuda ne mujhko jo teri mohabbat to kaya
Sapnao pe mere to kisi ka ikhtiyar nahi

Jo naa paa sake tumko is janam mai to kaya
Agle janam pe mere to kisi ka ikhtiyar nahi

Paa lun jaldi agala jaman mai isi khayal se
Sota raha kabar mai jaa kar kitne din

Kambakkhat itna bhi na samjha tum to jeete ho abhi
Khuda itna bhi begairat nahi ki karde akela mujhe agle janam bhi

Shayad soncha rakha hai usne anjaam meri chahat ka
Tabhi to jeeta hun kabar mai reh kar bhi tere intezaar mai.
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Princess21
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2005, 09:21:59 AM »
Vikas....buhat ache....ITne Dino baad app aye..?
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vikas2210
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2005, 09:57:20 AM »
Dhanywad Princess jee

Correct kafi dino ke baad ana hua
shayad phir se jeene ki tamana hui

where were you for so long?Huh??
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2005, 12:46:13 PM »
Bohat Khoob Dosto!

Chodh humne bhi di thi kab se jeene ki aas,
aaj woh phir mile to yaad aaya woh choobta ehsaas,
woh beete huve pal, woh aankhon ki narmi, woh haatho ki thandak, phir laaya bhoola khwab

Tadap mein jee rahe the barso se (2)
ke jab bhi bhoolna chahte the unko, woh chupke ke se aaja te the andhero mein,
yaad unki jo gerebaan mein baasi hai mitaye to kese,
ke jab bhi hum aankhen khoolte hain to samne aaja te hai woh bewaafa, zindagi ke jese!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2005, 04:00:26 PM »
very nice all of u keep it up............ :wink:
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Devdas_online
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«Reply #7 on: January 02, 2006, 05:15:39 AM »
thanks everyone...................
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Princess21
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«Reply #8 on: January 02, 2006, 05:41:01 AM »
UR welcome Vikas ji....BUaht acha likhte ho....Likhte raho...well i was really bz...but im here now! Usual Smile nice seeing u! Usual Smile
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vikas2210
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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2006, 11:16:06 AM »
rehte hai hum is duniya kuch is tarah
ke jurm karke chupta phrta hai har koi
meri sanse chalte chalte rukne lagti hai
tera naam aata hai kisi ki zuban pe kabi

Thanks Neha good to see u back. u write suberb Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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Devdas_online
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2006, 06:09:46 AM »
jis zuban se khuda ka naam lete the,
aaj usi zuban pe tera naam aata hai
aaj pata chala devdas,
kyon ishq ko khuda kehte hain
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2010, 11:03:25 AM »
Bahut khoob Devdass ji.lovely creation.beautiful lines by Vikas ji and Ravi ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2010, 10:08:15 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Devdas Ji N nice response from Vikas and Ravi
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