Jeene ki koi chah na rahi...

by punam on December 27, 2007, 08:38:25 AM
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Wo apna tha kab paraya ho gaya pata hi na chala
dekhe the milke jo sapne kab choor hogaye pata hi na chala..

haath tham ke sahara dene wala kab mooh pher liya pata hi na chala
apna banake kab dil se utaar bhi diya pata hi na chala..

jeene ki koi chah na rahi..dil dard se tadap raha tha
kab khwaab toota kahan kaun kho gaya pata hi na chala..

yaadon me kho ke pal kab sadiyan ban gaye pata hi na chala
aankhon se pyar ke badle kab aansoo barasne lage pata hi na chala..
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sagar_0777
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2007, 08:57:42 AM »
YAAR ACCHA LIKHTE HAI AAP.
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2007, 09:04:35 AM »
Thanx sagar ji...
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sagar_0777
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2007, 09:09:13 AM »
 aap gairo ki baat karte hai,
hamne apne b aajmaye hai,
aap kanto se bach k chalte hai
hamne phoolon se jakham khaye hai
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sagar_0777
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2007, 09:11:08 AM »
DOSTI ME NO TNX ND NO SORRY OK PUNAM JI
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2007, 10:02:04 AM »
again verry good lines
thanx punam ji
to share with us these lines

Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2007, 10:19:36 AM »
thanx baadal ji..aap ko pasand aaya..
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Raman.S
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2007, 10:48:41 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai punnu ji....................... :D
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punam
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2007, 10:58:40 AM »
Tanku tanku raman ji...
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2007, 05:53:43 PM »
NICE ONE PUNAM...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2007, 06:23:39 PM »
Punam

Wah !

Bahut khoob likha hai !

Keep going ! :D
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sagar_0777
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2007, 05:11:59 AM »
MAI CHUP RAHA TO SARA JAHAN THA MERI TARAF
HAQ KI BAAT KI TO KOI KAHAN THA MERI TARAF.
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punam
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2007, 07:04:15 AM »
Tanku bhaiya...

sagar ji thanx..
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SHONA
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«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2007, 11:47:06 AM »
beautiful one punam.very nice
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«Reply #14 on: December 31, 2007, 05:46:48 AM »
EK JAMANA GUJAR GYA HAI USKO DHEKHE HUE
YE OR BAT HAI KE UNKE KHAYAL ROJ AATE HAI
KASH KOI MUJHE BATA DE KI UNKI TARAH HUM BHI UNHE ROJ YAD AATE HAIN
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