*-*-*- JHL On Fire -*-*-*

by Just_Hate_Love on May 25, 2006, 06:36:06 PM
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Mujhe is ishq ki aag mein jalne do,
Bhatak gaya hoon main abhi thoda sambhalne do,
Jalti hui mom ka ye imtehaan hai,
Use roko na waqt ke saath use bhi pighalne do,
Jo bura daur khuda ne banaya hai,
Us daur ko badlo na use chalne do,
Jis zameen se wo roz guzarte hai,
Hame bhi us par se ek baar nikalne do,
Wo baat karna chahte hai judaai ki,
Par aaj ki raat us baat ko talne do,
Aandhiyon ke bich pyaar ki ek lau jal rahi hai,
Ek baar bas ek baar us lau ko machalne do,
Roshan kar degi wo lau duniya ko,
Hame aandhi ke rukh ko badalne do,
Dil mein to unhone kabhi hame basaya hi nahi,
Uski aankhon mein hame aansu banke palne do,
Mar jayenge hum unke honth tak pahunchke,
Aye 'Nazmi' hame aankhon se muskurake phisalne do ...
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phoenix
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2006, 06:38:06 PM »
bahut khoob jhl
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2006, 12:31:34 AM »
wah JHL JI!!! Bahoot khoob!! ek ek line apne kamal ki likhi hai...full of emotions.. bahoot khoob!!

Aai hai jo yah andhi, chali jayegi
tadpta hua phir se toota dil chor jayegi
payaar ki saja e dost tune paai hai
dardily kahani jo yah juban per aai hai!!

behak lo ki shayad kuch chain aa jaye
bhatak lo ki iss bhatkan se karar aa jaye
thak jao to, phir se ek baar sambhalo khud ko
manjile bahoot, jo apni raah ko pa jao tum to!!!!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2006, 11:10:54 AM »
yeh kya likh diya hai aapne JHL JI !... ab kya kahun iski tareef ke liye mere paas alfaaz nahi hain.... bas yehi kahana chaunga ki BEHTREEN aur KAMAAL  ka likha hai aapne.......

aur POOJA JI aap ko humesha hi.....................

Ishq me jalne se kuch, haasil nahi hai hota,
aankhon ki bhi barbadi daman ki bhi ruswaai.....
hum log samundra ke bichde sahil hain dost,
us paar bhi tanhaai aur is paar bhi tanhaai......
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2006, 02:39:24 PM »
wah kaya khoob likha Vicky apne!!!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2006, 03:12:32 PM »
bohot ache!!!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2006, 02:31:11 AM »
Bohat khoob JHL, Pankhuri & Vicky...
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2006, 02:50:54 AM »
thanks Aryaan!! yaha per apse bhi kuch ho jaata to mehfil aor jam jaati
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2006, 05:50:15 AM »
wah bahut achaa JHL>........good good.....man u r good!!!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2006, 09:45:41 AM »
shukriya POOJA JI aur ARYAAN JI........
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2006, 06:55:07 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Mujhe is ishq ki aag mein jalne do,
Bhatak gaya hoon main abhi thoda sambhalne do,
Jalti hui mom ka ye imtehaan hai,
Use roko na waqt ke saath use bhi pighalne do,
Jo bura daur khuda ne banaya hai,
Us daur ko badlo na use chalne do,
Jis zameen se wo roz guzarte hai,
Hame bhi us par se ek baar nikalne do,
Wo baat karna chahte hai judaai ki,
Par aaj ki raat us baat ko talne do,
Aandhiyon ke bich pyaar ki ek lau jal rahi hai,
Ek baar bas ek baar us lau ko machalne do,
Roshan kar degi wo lau duniya ko,
Hame aandhi ke rukh ko badalne do,
Dil mein to unhone kabhi hame basaya hi nahi,
Uski aankhon mein hame aansu banke palne do,
Mar jayenge hum unke honth tak pahunchke,
Aye 'Nazmi' hame aankhon se muskurake phisalne do ...


Wah SubhaanAlaah bahut khoob JHL ji......

Sula de mujhko Kabr me dafan hone de.....
Chor de haath mera mujhe mitti me Gum ho jaane de......

Karta tha tujhpar Nisaar hone ki baatein main......
Aaj phir ek baar apne Pyar par mujhe marr mitt jaane de......

Na ungli uthaye iss Dunia me koi humari Mahobbat par.......
Chale jaane de mujhko tu mujhe Badnaam hone de.........
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2006, 07:46:59 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Mujhe is ishq ki aag mein jalne do,
Bhatak gaya hoon main abhi thoda sambhalne do,
Jalti hui mom ka ye imtehaan hai,
Use roko na waqt ke saath use bhi pighalne do,
Jo bura daur khuda ne banaya hai,
Us daur ko badlo na use chalne do,
Jis zameen se wo roz guzarte hai,
Hame bhi us par se ek baar nikalne do,
Wo baat karna chahte hai judaai ki,
Par aaj ki raat us baat ko talne do,
Aandhiyon ke bich pyaar ki ek lau jal rahi hai,
Ek baar bas ek baar us lau ko machalne do,
Roshan kar degi wo lau duniya ko,
Hame aandhi ke rukh ko badalne do,
Dil mein to unhone kabhi hame basaya hi nahi,
Uski aankhon mein hame aansu banke palne do,
Mar jayenge hum unke honth tak pahunchke,
Aye 'Nazmi' hame aankhon se muskurake phisalne do ...


Too good jhl jee n all
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2006, 06:03:12 PM »
Thanks a lot everybody here for supporting me and for appreciating my poem ...
Thank you very very much ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2006, 06:05:39 PM »
Zindagi dar ba dar jaise guzri ho,
Kabhi is dar se kabhi us dar se guzri ho,
Is gumaan mein hai ab guzar jaane ke baad,
Shayad tere dar se bhi ye guzri ho ...
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2006, 07:48:09 AM »
GOOD ONE JHL JI
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