...JHL...alive yet again...

by Just_Hate_Love on May 22, 2009, 02:25:26 PM
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Just_Hate_Love
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...writing after such a long time...hope you guys like it...
...arz kiya hai...

...mohabbat hame unse aaj bhi utni hi hai,
par mohabbat mein ab woh wafa hi nahi to hum kya kare,
duaao mein hai shaamil woh aaj bhi hamare har pal,
Par un duaao mein ab khuda hi nahi to hum kya kare,
Unhone koshish bahut ki hame rulane ki,
Par aankhon mein aansu ke liye jagah hi nahi to hum kare,
Sote hai har roz hum bistar ko kabr aur chaddar ko kafan samajhkar,
Jeene ke liye bachi ab koi wajah hi nahi to hum kya kare...
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2009, 02:28:13 PM »
Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on May 22, 2009, 02:25:26 PM
...mohabbat hame unse aaj bhi utni hi hai,
par mohabbat mein ab woh wafa hi nahi to hum kya kare,
duaao mein hai shaamil woh aaj bhi hamare har pal,
Par un duaao mein ab khuda hi nahi to hum kya kare,
Unhone koshish bahut ki hame rulane ki,
Par aankhon mein aansu ke liye jagah hi nahi to hum kare,
Sote hai har roz hum bistar ko kabr aur chaddar ko kafan samajhkar,
Jeene ke liye bachi ab koi wajah hi nahi to hum kya kare...

aaww... Kya baat hai... aate hi damal ka shayri pesh kiya hai aapne.
Bahut accha likha hai.
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vitasta
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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2009, 02:29:21 PM »
Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on May 22, 2009, 02:25:26 PM
...mohabbat hame unse aaj bhi utni hi hai,
par mohabbat mein ab woh wafa hi nahi to hum kya kare,
duaao mein hai shaamil woh aaj bhi hamare har pal,
Par un duaao mein ab khuda hi nahi to hum kya kare,
Unhone koshish bahut ki hame rulane ki,
Par aankhon mein aansu ke liye jagah hi nahi to hum kare,
Sote hai har roz hum bistar ko kabr aur chaddar ko kafan samajhkar,
Jeene ke liye bachi ab koi wajah hi nahi to hum kya kare...

bahut khoob, badiya likha hai!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2009, 03:34:01 PM »
Wah Bahoot bahoot Khoob JHL Ji. Keep writing...........
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2009, 03:34:58 PM »
Sachchi Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Aapne Bhai.,
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2009, 09:03:07 AM »
...thanks a lot Roja, Vitasta, Sophi n Azeem for appreciation...why didnt anyone write anything here.?.that's not fair guys...
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k.shael
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2009, 09:18:43 AM »
Bahut khoob JHL Ji, Har line dusri line ki poorak hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2009, 02:36:34 PM »
...thanks a lot k.shael for appreciation...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2009, 04:03:09 AM »
Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on May 22, 2009, 02:25:26 PM
...writing after such a long time...hope you guys like it...
...arz kiya hai...

...mohabbat hame unse aaj bhi utni hi hai,
par mohabbat mein ab woh wafa hi nahi to hum kya kare,
duaao mein hai shaamil woh aaj bhi hamare har pal,
Par un duaao mein ab khuda hi nahi to hum kya kare,
Unhone koshish bahut ki hame rulane ki,
Par aankhon mein aansu ke liye jagah hi nahi to hum kare,
Sote hai har roz hum bistar ko kabr aur chaddar ko kafan samajhkar,
Jeene ke liye bachi ab koi wajah hi nahi to hum kya kare...

Beautifull lines Just bohat khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2009, 04:44:50 AM »
Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on May 23, 2009, 09:03:07 AM
...thanks a lot Roja, Vitasta, Sophi n Azeem for appreciation...why didnt anyone write anything here.?.that's not fair guys...

JHL ji, aapne mujhe saath likhne ke liye nahi bola Crying  Crying Crying...agar bolte to shayad umar gujar jaati saath likhte likhte Laughing hard  Laughing hard  =))hehehe

Shally.
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2009, 02:41:28 PM »
...thanks a lot Honey dear...where have you been...i have seen a single mail from your side since ages...do mail me about what has happened to you...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2009, 02:42:35 PM »
...shally dude yaha pe humne sabko likhne ke liye kaha par kisine likha kya.?.ab tumhi bataao kisiko bol ke kya faiyda.?.izzat hi nahi apni...
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