Jhoote khuwab ..!

by Delicate_Doll on October 19, 2006, 12:21:00 PM
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Apni hi nazaron se neech gir gaye hain hum,
Apne aapko hi dhoka de rahe hain hum,
Jante hai unko hum kabhi pa nahi sakte,
Kyun unko mohabbat ke jhoote khuwab dikha rahe hain hum...?
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2006, 04:52:18 PM »
Thats  good,

It will look more graceful if you do last line like this ...

Apni hi nazaron se neech gir gaye hain hum,
Apne aapko hi dhoka de rahe hain hum,
Jante hai unko hum kabhi pa nahi sakte,
Kyun unki mohabbat ke jhoote khuwab jee rahe hain hum...?
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2006, 05:18:17 PM »
Good one salma... so nice to see you here after such a long time.. take care buddy..
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2006, 07:05:31 PM »
very  nice  Salma.........  :lol:  acchal ikha tumne.....
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2006, 07:20:23 PM »
Good One Salma...
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2006, 12:30:13 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2006, 04:22:44 PM »
Bahoot Khoob,..

Dekha Jo Khwabon Ko Toot-te Hue Maine Haqeeqat Mein,..
Tab Se Maine Khwaab Sajaana Chord Diya,..
Aaj Sab Lage Hain Yahan Sapne Sawaarne Mein,..

Maine Jab Dekha Dil Ko Toot-te Hue Zamaane Mein,,
Us Din Se Maine Dil Lagaane Chord Diya,..
Aaj Sab Lage Hain Yahan Fasaane Banaane Mein,..

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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2006, 05:19:29 PM »
Bahut khoob azeem Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2006, 01:03:33 PM »
Shukriya Husena,..
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«Reply #9 on: October 21, 2006, 05:48:48 PM »

Ya Rab HaMein Tujhse Koi Gila Bhi Nahi,
Wo Naseeb Me Nai Tha Isliye Mila Nahi,
Seencha Tha Jis ChaMan Ko Apne Dilke Lahoose,
Phir Kayi Barsaat Me Koi Phool Khila Nahi,
Na Lagaye Koi Chot Is Dil-E-MasooM Par,
Abhi To Pichla ZakhaM Mujhse Sila Nahi,
Manga Tha Jholiyan Utha Utha Kar Use,
Magar HaMein Duwaon Ka Koi Sila Mila Nahi...
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2006, 05:17:32 AM »
Bohat khoob Azeem & Angel...
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2006, 08:39:08 AM »
Shukriya Aryaan Bhai,.
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2006, 06:39:08 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai ji Salma dear!!
Itne dino baad aap yahan aayi hain..
ye dekh kar bahut khushi hui..


aur Jaanasheen ji ne bhi bahut achcha likha hai..!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2006, 07:39:04 PM »
bahot  khoob........ Azeem........
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2006, 07:53:19 PM »
Quote from: "salma4u"
Apni hi nazaron se neech gir gaye hain hum,
Apne aapko hi dhoka de rahe hain hum,
Jante hai unko hum kabhi pa nahi sakte,
Kyun unko mohabbat ke jhoote khuwab dikha rahe hain hum...?


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Dil Mein Chupe  Raaj Kyon Kholi  Ho  Indino
Yeh Tumhare  dil ki  Baat Hai To  Koi Baat Nahi
Kyon Aisi Baat Ka Eksaah Tumne Dilaaya Hai Indino...........
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