**Jhopdi bhi nahin**by Rahim

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Yeh shaer kayi matlab de sakta hai...ghareeb amiri ka khwab dekhna...chote barron ki khwahish rakhna...ya yeh jiss matlab main maine likha hai...kisi ko pana mager filhal kuch nahin ho saath..

Taj mahal pane ki khwahish rakhta hai Khamosh,
Malik toh main jhopdi ka bhi nahin...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2010, 08:51:25 PM »
bahut khoob Rahim bhai....

Zameen pe kadam sambhle nahi,
aur mohabbat aasmaan se ho chali...
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2010, 08:52:52 PM »
Rahim Ji KAMAL yaar .......

Bhut ache ...

Very deep ....

Agar manzil pane ki khawish rakhte ho
To rasta bi tume khud hi Talshna padega eh DOST
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2010, 09:03:40 PM »
Sabhi ne achcha likha hai.......
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2010, 09:14:39 PM »
Shukriya Kapil dost, Neel jee aur Sajid jee..

Kapil Dost aur Neel jee..Bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2010, 09:47:43 PM »
shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 27, 2010, 09:14:39 PM
Shukriya Kapil dost, Neel jee aur Sajid jee..

Kapil Dost aur Neel jee..Bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2010, 05:41:26 AM »
Mehfil achchhi jami thi par na jaane kyun tahar gayee
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2010, 06:22:34 AM »
Wah kya baat hai      Rahim ji........


Taj mahal pane ki khwahish rakhta hai khamosh
aur jaanta bhi hai ye sapna kabhi poora nahi hoga....
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2010, 12:19:17 PM »
Bahaut shukriya Rajesh jee aur Cara jee....

Cara jee, yeh sapna poora hoga inshAllah!
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2010, 12:22:36 PM »
Woh raasta jispe woh hamsafar hai mera woh khud hi talashega mujhe,
Akhir sabko nahin milte Khamosh jaise pyaar karne wale duniya main...
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2010, 12:39:15 PM »
shukriya Rajesh ji....

kuch waqt ki bandishein hain,
kuch halaat ki paabandiyaan,
kabhi hum likh lete hain aur,
kabhi hoti hain majbooriyaan....

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 28, 2010, 05:41:26 AM
Mehfil achchhi jami thi par na jaane kyun tahar gayee
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 01:02:51 PM »
bahut achche dost...

aajkal is jahaan me dost pyaar ki koi qadar nahi,
ek din tum kho jaoge aur hoga kisi ko khabar nahi...

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 28, 2010, 12:22:36 PM
Woh raasta jispe woh hamsafar hai mera woh khud hi talashega mujhe,
Akhir sabko nahin milte Khamosh jaise pyaar karne wale duniya main...
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2010, 02:21:00 PM »
Bahut acche Rahim Bhai.. 2 Line me hi Pooori Gazal Likh Daali Dost.. Applause Applause


Sabhi Doston ne Bhi Bahut Accha likha hai.. :clap;



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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2010, 06:37:52 PM »
Bahaut ache Kapil Dost...

Shukriya Kapil Dost aur Vikas bhaijan..yunhi hausla badate rahiye..
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2010, 07:44:36 PM »
Jaroor hoga Rahim Lyk it be +ive .....

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 28, 2010, 12:19:17 PM
Bahaut shukriya Rajesh jee aur Cara jee....

Cara jee, yeh sapna poora hoga inshAllah!
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