Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine... mann

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Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine.....


Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine,
Tere kandhe par sar rakkha tha.

Ab wo rahen aur kathhin hain,
Jin rahon ka hal rakkha tha.

Wo pal ab aur dard bhara hai,
Khushion ka jo pal rakkha tha.

Jane Kyon wo kadwa nikla,
Kismat main jo fal rakkha tha.

Sare khwab bikhar jane the,
Hamne aisa kar rakkha tha.
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2011, 05:21:35 AM »
uss kaandhe par na use bharosa raha
jis par usne sar rakha tha

sheetalta ki chah thi jisko
usne hi agan rakha rha

hua lahluhaan vo humdum uska
dil me jiska vo ghar rakha tha

gham kis baat ki kare vo bhi naadan
aastin me saanp jisne chupa rakha tha sad5
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2011, 08:43:29 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 08, 2011, 04:06:59 AM
Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine.....


Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine,
Tere kandhe par sar rakkha tha.

Ab wo rahen aur kathhin hain,
Jin rahon ka hal rakkha tha.

Wo pal ab aur dard bhara hai,
Khushion ka jo pal rakkha tha.

Jane Kyon wo kadwa nikla,
Kismat main jo fal rakkha tha.

Sare khwab bikhar jane the,
Hamne aisa kar rakkha tha.


Bahut Khoooob Mannji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Good One S.f ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2011, 10:47:58 AM »
thanks sarfiraji..
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2011, 10:49:17 AM »
thank u khawaishji....
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2011, 11:32:07 AM »
Mann jee Aadaab!

behad khoob khayaal kahe hai aapne...
Sabhi ahsaas ko behad achche se kaha hai..

Kuch kafiye sahiN nahi huye hai.. baki kalam
behad khoob rahi aur khayaal behad umdaa..

Humari daad Kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2011, 03:24:03 AM »
thanks parwazji....

ek koshish thi...
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2011, 09:53:48 AM »
bohat khoob mann ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2011, 10:37:29 AM »
thanks shaifaliji......
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2011, 10:53:28 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 08, 2011, 04:06:59 AM
Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine.....


Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine,
Tere kandhe par sar rakkha tha.

Ab wo rahen aur kathhin hain,
Jin rahon ka hal rakkha tha.

Wo pal ab aur dard bhara hai,
Khushion ka jo pal rakkha tha.

Jane Kyon wo kadwa nikla,
Kismat main jo fal rakkha tha.

Sare khwab bikhar jane the,
Hamne aisa kar rakkha tha.



bahut khoob mann.mann ji


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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2011, 03:37:31 AM »
thanks shebaji
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«Reply #11 on: November 16, 2011, 11:50:05 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 08, 2011, 04:06:59 AM
Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine.....


Jin khushiyon ki chah main maine,
Tere kandhe par sar rakkha tha.

Ab wo rahen aur kathhin hain,
Jin rahon ka hal rakkha tha.

Wo pal ab aur dard bhara hai,
Khushion ka jo pal rakkha tha.

Jane Kyon wo kadwa nikla,
Kismat main jo fal rakkha tha.

Sare khwab bikhar jane the,
Hamne aisa kar rakkha tha.

Bahut khoob Mann ji
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«Reply #12 on: November 17, 2011, 03:14:20 AM »
dhanyawad mkvji..
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