Jindagi aor yadeen

by Pooja on July 22, 2004, 05:58:57 PM

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Pooja

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Tum atty nahi, yah yaden jatti nahi,
na tum ayye kabhi, na in yadon ne kabhi daman chora
Jindagi kab is anne jaane mai bit gai,
Ab to ajao ki, ki hum hamari ankhiri sanso per hai

<<< Puzzled !

samaj mai nahi ayya ki upper wala likhu ya nichy wala, so dono hi likh diye Usual Smile

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Tum atty nahi, yah yaden jatti nahi,
na tum ayye kabhi, na hi yah yadeen gai
Jindagi kab is anne jaane mai bit gai,
Ab to ajao ki, ki hum tumhari yadon mai yaad banane ko hai


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2004, 11:54:48 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Tum atty nahi, yah yaden jatti nahi,
na tum ayye kabhi, na in yadon ne kabhi daman chora
Jindagi kab is anne jaane mai bit gai,
Ab to ajao ki, ki hum hamari ankhiri sanso per hai

<<< Puzzled !

samaj mai nahi ayya ki upper wala likhu ya nichy wala, so dono hi likh diye Usual Smile

>>>>>

Tum atty nahi, yah yaden jatti nahi,
na tum ayye kabhi, na hi yah yadeen gai
Jindagi kab is anne jaane mai bit gai,
Ab to ajao ki, ki hum tumhari yadon mai yaad banane ko hai

well pooja........dono acchi hai...... Usual Smile

very nice...


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Meena

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2004, 01:49:08 PM »

nice pooja i wud say ke:

1st line is gud
2nd line first sher se lo
3rd line is gud
4th line 2nd sher se lo ("Ab to ajao ki, ki hum tumhari yadon mai yaad bane ko hai)

sorry agar bura laga ho to :?


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immi

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2004, 08:36:41 PM »

Good one Pooja !!


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Pooja

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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2004, 06:14:44 PM »

Thanks waheed, meena and immi!!!!


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waheed_rose2004

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2004, 08:46:01 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Thanks waheed, meena and immi!!!!

ur welcome pooja.............


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Meena

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2004, 04:53:35 PM »

anytime kuddiye :D


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bakwashayar

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2004, 05:36:56 PM »

wahhhhhhhhhh wahhh poojaa


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myheart_ursonly

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2004, 05:51:16 PM »

very nice pooja ji

:wink:


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Pooja

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2004, 09:56:44 PM »

Shukariyan!!!!!


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Aryaan

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Jindagi aor yadeen

«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2004, 03:09:14 AM »

Bohat khoob Pooja ji...

Teri yaadon mein inn aankhon se jo bhi ashk bahe
harr ek ashk ki dua hai tu aabaad rahe
Bhale hi Qaid hai dil ab bhi teri yaadon mein
Dua hai dil se meri tu sadaa shadaab rahe..