jindagi me

by preeti verma on May 12, 2013, 02:32:50 PM
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preeti verma
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tera aur mera kehne ko
koi nh h jindagi me

aansu hai chup karane
ko koi nh h bagal me

khtam kr daley ye
jindagi kya!
Jiya na jaye is udas
jindagi me...
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Tuhina
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2013, 03:57:38 PM »
very  nice  dear....
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Sajid_Ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2013, 08:22:23 PM »
Preeti Jee Jindagi nahi sahi lafz Zindagi hai......aur aapki yeh peshkash na Nazm hai Na Kavita hai Na ismein shayri hai.....apne ehsaas ko khoobsurat andaaz me bayaan karna hi Poetry hai..........warna to ek aam bol chaal ke siwa kuch nahi.

Ghazal Nazm Kavita inki basic requirement samajhne ki koshish karein please.
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2013, 08:46:47 PM »
Bahut Khoob,Likhte Rahiye,,,,,,,,,,,,
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