jindagi mein ek baar

by waheed_rose2004 on July 09, 2004, 01:42:25 PM
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Ek Naam Kya Likha Tera Saahil Ki Rait Par
Phir Umar Bhar Hawa Se Meri Dushmani Rahi
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2004, 01:43:10 PM »
Mujh Se Mut Pouch, Mere Dil Ki Kahani O Hum-Dum
Is Main Kuch Parda-Nashinon Ke Bhi Naam Aate Hain
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2004, 04:20:00 PM »
Mr.. Wahid..

Those are wonderful..
Aapne do labso mein sara jahan samet diya..

really.. keep it up!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2004, 06:10:42 AM »
thanks ricky.....kam se kam aap ne meri dil ki baat to samjhe...
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2004, 05:42:47 PM »
wheed ji app bhu he achi sahri kertey hai ricki ji ap bhi legta hai eyea site sirfe tutey huye delo key leya he hia crybaby2crybaby2crybaby2
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patjhad mey jevan beet gaya
koi humsafer na meela hum ko tanha eu safer beet gaya, vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
kabhi apna na bena sakey unko hum jin key devaney they, vo dil mey bastey they humarey per hum sey anjaney they. dil mey tasvir hai un ki ab bhi per bhuhut dur manmet gaya, vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya. kabhi to pigalengey hum key badal khushiya barseyngi jevan mey, heryali cahyagi sukhi bagiya mey yea aas lagi thi men mey, ab to pthra gai hai ahkhey bhi akeyleypen hum sey jeet gaya, vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2004, 05:43:16 PM »
khoi koi rat
yea tanhaee ka alam hee kuch eysa hia, rat bhi jeysey khoi khoi lagti hai yeo to tarey bhuhut hai asman per un mey aap ki kami si khilti hai kamushi humey bulati hai avajey dey ker to candni hass hass ker jalati hai chand ko keya malum uss ki chandni humey app key ketey karib ley jati hai.
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2004, 05:43:51 PM »
gum
keysa gum hia ki jo jata he nahi raham kambhakhat ko ata he nahi loog to or bhi jha mey hai meyra dar chud key jata hee nahi juda hia yeo meyrye nasib key sath or lpo esey bata he nahi vafa ki ek mesal yea bhi hai esaq eysey to koi nibahta he nahi hia
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2004, 05:44:08 PM »
raat ka khar
rat key es andhkar mey na janey kha kho gai hai shaksiyat meyri pyar ki khatir bhatak gaye jindgi meyri. kadmo ko ley cahli mey galat raah per na socha yea ki anjam keya huga es ka ahkir. leykin badey kadam n rok saki, jakham deya tha jin sey mujhey usi ki yaad ko n dil sey mita saki. n janey keya tha us mey ki mey us ki orr khichi chali gaye, us ki asli surat deykh ker dil ki sari ashaye chor chor hu gaye.
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2004, 04:19:39 AM »
nahin sonu bhai, aisa nahin hai ki yeh website sirf hum aur ricky ke liye hai....toote hue dil ke logon ke liye nahin hai.....agar aisa hai to aap bhi kahin toote hue to nahin hain...........
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2004, 08:42:03 AM »
Well.. Sonu this website is for posting all your precious work and shayaris and you can show that easily to world. Here on this site lots of people come daily from search engines and from other links.. so you it is place to get right appreciation for your hard work.

This place is basically to promote poets and writers. In future you will see lots of improvement and features like rewarding good writers etcc. and it will be writer's heaven..

So "Inshaallah"

Hoping to see more good work from your side and others.
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2004, 04:01:10 PM »
Hi Ricky ji

Thanks ricky ji for suggestion. BTW ricky ji what kind of rewarding. yea sure  i will write some more work to see some other people suggestions.

Thanks again
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2004, 09:34:38 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Ek Naam Kya Likha Tera Saahil Ki Rait Par
Phir Umar Bhar Hawa Se Meri Dushmani Rahi


BAHOOT KHOOB WAHEED.
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2004, 09:45:42 PM »
Quote from: "Sonu"

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patjhad mey jevan beet gaya
koi humsafer na meela hum ko tanha eu safer beet gaya, vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
kabhi apna na bena sakey unko hum jin key devaney they, vo dil mey bastey they humarey per hum sey anjaney they. dil mey tasvir hai un ki ab bhi per bhuhut dur manmet gaya, vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya. kabhi to pigalengey hum key badal khushiya barseyngi jevan mey, heryali cahyagi sukhi bagiya mey yea aas lagi thi men mey, ab to pthra gai hai ahkhey bhi akeyleypen hum sey jeet gaya, vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
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BAHOOT KHOOB SONU, REALLY TOUCHING

koi humsafer na meela hum ko tanha eu safer beet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
dil mey tasvir hai un ki ab bhi per bhahoot dur manmeet gaya
ab to pthra gai hai ahkhey bhi, akeylaapan hum sey jeet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2004, 10:17:28 PM »
Waheed ji, ek aapka saahil hei jo aapka ghar dubotha hei aur ek mere saahil ko dekhiye neechey.

jub saarey jahaan ke
lekin magar kaash aur per
milkar ban jaayein bhanwar
phir kon saahil paas aaye
aur meri kashti paar lagaaye?
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Sonu
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«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2004, 04:19:12 AM »
thanks pooji
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