Jinhe Mohabbat Se Mohabbat Naa Ho "Khwaish"

by khwaish on August 22, 2012, 09:30:08 AM
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Acchi YaadeiN Aapki AankhoN MeN Tab Hi Nami Le Aati Hai..............!!!!!!
Jab Aapko Yeh Ehsaas Ho Ke Aap Unn YaadoN Ko Dobaara Naa Jee Paaoge




Rootha Hoon Tujhse Aur Tujhe Iss Baat ka Gumaan Bhi Nahi
Bata Sakoon  Tujhe lafzoN MeN Yeh Itna Asaan Bhi Nahi

Gham Ke Maaro Ka Yeh Hi  To Ek Rona Hai..!!!!!!
Gham Paas Ho To Koi Tum Par Meharbaan Bhi Nahi

Naa Jinhe Kuch Kehne Ki Adab, Naa Kuch  Suune Ka Saleekha
Iss Duniya MeN Uss Shahks Ka Koi Kadardaan Bhi Nahi

Iss Karvaan-e-Daur Ko Ab Kya Naam De...!!!!!
Zakhmi Hai Dil ,Par Kaheen Koi Nishaan Bhi Nahi

Yeh Mohabbat Hai Ke Tum Muskuraye Aur Hum Kareeb Ho Gaye
Mujhe Dekh Kar Tera Muskurana mujh Par Koi Ehsaan Bhi Nahi

Gar Mohabbat Hai To Hai, Phir Iss MeN Sharmaana Kaisa??
Jinhe Mohabbat Se Mohabbat Naa Ho,Meri Nazar MeN Woh Insaan Bhi Nahi

Alwida kehkar Yuh Chal Diye Tum, Jaise Hum-Tum Koi Ajnabi The........
Sirf Puuch Hi Lete "Khwaish" Kya Aapke Dil MeN Baaki Koi Armaan Bhi Nahi


                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 10:06:19 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 22, 2012, 09:30:08 AM
Acchi YaadeiN Aapki AankhoN MeN Tab Hi Nami Le Aati Hai..............!!!!!!
Jab Aapko Yeh Ehsaas Ho Ke Aap Unn YaadoN Ko Dobaara Naa Jee Paaoge




Rootha Hoon Tujhse Aur Tujhe Iss Baat ka Gumaan Bhi Nahi
Bata Sakoon  Tujhe lafzoN MeN Yeh Itna Asaan Bhi Nahi

ab kya gutakhi kar di maine. kuch bata bhi ya roothe hi raho ge. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

Gham Ke Maaro Ka Yeh Hi  To Ek Rona Hai..!!!!!!
Gham Paas Ho To Koi Tum Par Meharbaan Bhi Nahi
ab kya ghum gale pad gya. haan kya main ghum nazar aati hoon. jaao khushi talaash kar lo. crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2
Naa Jinhe Kuch Kehne Ki Adab, Naa Kuch  Suune Ka Saleekha
Iss Duniya MeN Uss Shahks Ka Koi Kadardaan Bhi Nahi
nahin nahin tum bahut ache ho aur bahut pyari baatein karte ho. main hoon tumhari kaderdaan Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Iss Karvaan-e-Daur Ko Ab Kya Naam De...!!!!!
Zakhmi Hai Dil ,Par Kaheen Koi Nishaan Bhi Nahi
pyaar mein lagi chot dikti nahin sirf mehsoos hoti hai. per kisne di ye chot
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Yeh Mohabbat Hai Ke Tum Muskuraye Aur Hum Kareeb Ho Gaye
Mujhe Dekh Kar Tera Muskurana mujh Par Koi Ehsaan Bhi Nahi
haan ji per log meri ek muskaan ke liye taraste hain aur tum ho ki..jaane do icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Gar Mohabbat Hai To Hai, Phir Iss MeN Phir Sharmaana Kaisa??
Jinhe Mohabbat Se Mohabbat Naa Ho,Meri Nazar MeN Woh Insaan Bhi Nahi
acha to main ek insaan hoon ji.aapki tarah Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Alwida kehkar Tum Yuh Chal Diye Tum, Jaise Hum-Tum Koi Ajnabi The........
Sirf Puuch Hi Lete "Khwaish" Kya Aapke Dil MeN Baaki Koi Armaan Bhi Nahi

chalo ab bataa bhi do. wo kya armaan hain. paise mat maangna abhi kamaati nahin hoon
          Laughing hard Laughing hard          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


so nice khawaish acha laga padh ke..........!
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 10:13:04 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on August 22, 2012, 10:06:19 AM

so nice khawaish acha laga padh ke..........!


Thankyou Soooooooooooo much For Your Comments Sheba Ji..

Mujhe Meri Kalaam Se Zyaada Aapke Comments pasand Aaye.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Sach kahoon To Aapne Apne Comments Se Itna Hasaaya Ke Kya Kahoon..

Aur Haan Paise To nahi mangunga Main Aapse kabhi . Laughing hard  Laughing hardLaughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 11:16:51 AM »
bohat khoob bohat achi ghazal pr bohat c daad...........
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 11:21:07 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 11:58:57 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Khwaish ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 12:03:35 PM »
bahot hi achcha...
vaise is layak to nahi  hu..par ek  suggestion de rahin hu...
(agar ye kisi maqsad se use hue hai..to mujhe maaf kariyega,shayad mai samajh nahi pai)

agar 'bhi'hata de sabhi second lines se to aur khil jayega ye kalaam..
second last para me 'phir' do baar aur last para ki first  line me 'tum' do baar use hua hai, vo typing error hai shayad
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 12:58:07 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on August 22, 2012, 11:16:51 AM
bohat khoob bohat achi ghazal pr bohat c daad...........


Thankyou Sooooo Much laaiba Ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2012, 12:58:42 PM »
waah beautiful sir
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2012, 12:58:54 PM »
Quote from: Sanjeev kash on August 22, 2012, 11:21:07 AM
Bahut Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Aapka bahut Bahut shukriya Sanjeev ji icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2012, 12:59:26 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 22, 2012, 11:58:57 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Khwaish ji....!!!
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Thanks a lottttttt Hridayji icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2012, 01:02:46 PM »
Quote from: Sps on August 22, 2012, 12:03:35 PM
bahot hi achcha...
vaise is layak to nahi  hu..par ek  suggestion de rahin hu...
(agar ye kisi maqsad se use hue hai..to mujhe maaf kariyega,shayad mai samajh nahi pai)

agar 'bhi'hata de sabhi second lines se to aur khil jayega ye kalaam..
second last para me 'phir' do baar aur last para ki first  line me 'tum' do baar use hua hai, vo typing error hai shayad





Sps Ji Aapka Bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne apna waqt diya..Ji yeh kalaam mein yakeenan kuch kamiya reh gayi hai..aaenda poori koshish karunga ke theek se likh sakoon aur jo aapne last 2 sher mein jo galti se kuch lafz double post ke baare mein bataaya, woh error theek kar chuka hoon..apna waqt dene ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.. icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2012, 01:03:13 PM »
Quote from: kamlesh.yadav001 on August 22, 2012, 12:58:42 PM
waah beautiful sir


Thanks a lot Kamlesh ji icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2012, 05:08:14 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 22, 2012, 09:30:08 AM
Acchi YaadeiN Aapki AankhoN MeN Tab Hi Nami Le Aati Hai..............!!!!!!
Jab Aapko Yeh Ehsaas Ho Ke Aap Unn YaadoN Ko Dobaara Naa Jee Paaoge
Bilkul sach



Rootha Hoon Tujhse Aur Tujhe Iss Baat ka Gumaan Bhi Nahi
Bata Sakoon  Tujhe lafzoN MeN Yeh Itna Asaan Bhi Nahi  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Gham Ke Maaro Ka Yeh Hi  To Ek Rona Hai..!!!!!!
Gham Paas Ho To Koi Tum Par Meharbaan Bhi Nahi  Applause Applause

Naa Jinhe Kuch Kehne Ki Adab, Naa Kuch  Suune Ka Saleekha
Iss Duniya MeN Uss Shahks Ka Koi Kadardaan Bhi Nahi BAHUT UMDA KHAYAAL..

Iss Karvaan-e-Daur Ko Ab Kya Naam De...!!!!!
Zakhmi Hai Dil ,Par Kaheen Koi Nishaan Bhi Nahi Kya baat hai

Yeh Mohabbat Hai Ke Tum Muskuraye Aur Hum Kareeb Ho Gaye
Mujhe Dekh Kar Tera Muskurana mujh Par Koi Ehsaan Bhi Nahi  Applause Applause

Gar Mohabbat Hai To Hai, Phir Iss MeN Sharmaana Kaisa??
Jinhe Mohabbat Se Mohabbat Naa Ho,Meri Nazar MeN Woh Insaan Bhi Nahi  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Alwida kehkar Yuh Chal Diye Tum, Jaise Hum-Tum Koi Ajnabi The........
Sirf Puuch Hi Lete "Khwaish" Kya Aapke Dil MeN Baaki Koi Armaan Bhi Nahi
wah wah wah dil pe seedhe asar kar gaya ye sher..bahut khaas ehsaas


                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
Dhero Daad aur mubaarakbaad khwaish jee
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2012, 05:08:52 PM »
Dil se likha hai aapne dil se padha hai humne
khawahish ji aapki qalam ki tareef karna aasan bhi nahi....





Bahut khub bahut umda aur besqeemti peshkash.......hazaro daad aur mubarakbaad khawahish jiii...... Bahut umda
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