jiski yaad me.............

by sayak on January 02, 2005, 06:36:10 PM
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sayak
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jiski yaad bhulane ko ciggarette jalayi thi,
kambakht dhuwe ne usiki tasbeer bandali
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2005, 06:48:04 PM »
very nice sayak
yadoon ka silsila chalta raha hai , chalta rahega
yeh na khattam hone wala dhuaa hai , dil se nikalta raha hai nikalta rahega

yeh jisne tasveer banayi hai woh dhuwa nahi ,
khayale yaar tha
jiske liye tu abb bhi bekraar hai, aur kal bhi bekraar tha
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sayak
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2005, 05:11:55 PM »
thanks nikki
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2005, 05:23:17 PM »
Very nice SayakJi and beautiful lines NikkiJi

uske khayalon ke bagair jindagi adhoori hai,
kyun aaj uske bina jindagi mein wo baat nahi  sad5
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2005, 05:28:06 PM »
wah wah heart nice one!

 :D
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2005, 05:53:23 PM »
ThankYou MeenaJi,

aisa kahan naseeb k wo kisi roz aakar mil jaye
ye mohabbat hai ya uska andaaz aye khuda  sad5
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dolly
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2005, 05:58:05 PM »
Nice all!!!!

Heartji!!yeh uska andaaz hua to kya karoge?Huh?
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2005, 06:11:48 PM »
nice heart!!!!!!

uska andaz me hai chupna,
ek aur ada hai woh hai roothna,
humara to ek hi kam hai is dunyia me,
aur woh hai us sanam pe apna pyar lutana!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2005, 06:14:51 PM »
Thanks Dolly! lol

dil-o-dhadkan mein usse basaya hai,
har rut mein uski chahat hogi...
chahe kitni mile mujhe tanhai,
wo naa mili to rab se shikayat hogi...

 sad5
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dolly
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2005, 06:17:16 PM »
Too!!!!gud meenaji.

mana kabhi dil ki baat na bataaoge,
par jo dil mein hai woh kaise chupaogay,
vada raha humaara yeh aapse,
jab bhi palkein uthaaoge humein saamne paaoge...

(NM)
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2005, 06:26:28 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Too!!!!gud meenaji.

mana kabhi dil ki baat na bataaoge,
par jo dil mein hai woh kaise chupaogay,
vada raha humaara yeh aapse,
jab bhi palkein uthaaoge humein saamne paaoge...

(NM)


Nice MeenaJi and Dolly!

kuch aisa hi rishta mera aur tumhara bhi hai
k jab yaad aati hai tumhari, dil baar baar ro deta hai
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2005, 06:35:45 PM »
thanx Heart ji n very good work.....
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sayak
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2005, 05:37:44 PM »
great job heart meena and dolly
Keep it up!!!
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dolly
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2005, 06:14:33 PM »
Thanx sayakji.Urs also gud.

Carry on!!
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2005, 06:21:29 PM »
nice work everyone.....................

pyar woh nahin,
jo dil ko chur chur kar de.
pyar woh hain stupid,
jo jeenay ko majbur kar de.
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