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Mein utna Yaad aungi Jitna mujhe bhulaoge..
Dekhoge Jahan Mohobbat meri surat wahan paoge
Jab baithoge Tanha paane ko sukun kisi pal
Us pal mein tute mere dil ki awazein paoge
Jab guzroge khabi koi shaam kisi Chaman se
Har kantein mein tab meri kismat Zindagi paoge
Jab Puchega koi tumse ke mohobat ka sabab kya hua
Nazre Jhukaoge aur seene mein uthta ek dard paoge
Khabi jo sochoge Bhul se mere baare mein
Us waqt mushkuraoge aur ankhon mein chamak paoge
Khabi phir jo sajaoge Mehfill kisi shaam
Jalte Chiragon mein ROSHNI ki kami paoge
Khabi na hopayegi duniya mukammal Tumhari
Ek humsafar aur mohobbat ki kami har mod pe paoge
~Roshni~
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2008, 02:37:16 AM » |
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Lovely...
too good dear...
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2008, 02:38:40 AM » |
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Jab jhukega sajde mein sar tumhara,
apni mannaton mein hamein hi paaoge,
Chaahoge bahut ke bas na chaaho hamein,
par apni har saans pe hamara hi ikhtiyaar paoge,
Mohabbat ka anjaam shayad ye na socha hoga tumne,
ab apni har ek dhadkan par hamare hi sur paaoge...
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2008, 07:03:11 AM » |
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Mein utna Yaad aungi Jitna mujhe bhulaoge..
Dekhoge Jahan Mohobbat meri surat wahan paoge
Jab baithoge Tanha paane ko sukun kisi pal
Us pal mein tute mere dil ki awazein paoge
Jab guzroge khabi koi shaam kisi Chaman se
Har kantein mein tab meri kismat Zindagi paoge
Jab Puchega koi tumse ke mohobat ka sabab kya hua
Nazre Jhukaoge aur seene mein uthta ek dard paoge
Khabi jo sochoge Bhul se mere baare mein
Us waqt mushkuraoge aur ankhon mein chamak paoge
Khabi phir jo sajaoge Mehfill kisi shaam
Jalte Chiragon mein ROSHNI ki kami paoge
Khabi na hopayegi duniya mukammal Tumhari
Ek humsafar aur mohobbat ki kami har mod pe paoge
~Roshni~
bahut hi khub surat sayri likhi he |
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2008, 07:17:55 AM » |
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THANKS KILLER JI
and angel sis tooo gud...thanks so much
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2008, 10:36:17 AM » |
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Mein utna Yaad aungi Jitna mujhe bhulaoge..
Dekhoge Jahan Mohobbat meri surat wahan paoge
Jab baithoge Tanha paane ko sukun kisi pal
Us pal mein tute mere dil ki awazein paoge
Jab guzroge khabi koi shaam kisi Chaman se
Har kantein mein tab meri kismat Zindagi paoge
Jab Puchega koi tumse ke mohobat ka sabab kya hua
Nazre Jhukaoge aur seene mein uthta ek dard paoge
Khabi jo sochoge Bhul se mere baare mein
Us waqt mushkuraoge aur ankhon mein chamak paoge
Khabi phir jo sajaoge Mehfill kisi shaam
Jalte Chiragon mein ROSHNI ki kami paoge
Khabi na hopayegi duniya mukammal Tumhari
Ek humsafar aur mohobbat ki kami har mod pe paoge
~Roshni~
very nice lines princess bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne dil bhar aaya aapke is kalaam se really too good JAB KABHI DEKHOGE MUD KAR PEECHE
JIS RAAH CHOD GAYE US MEIN INTEZAAR KARTE MUJHE HI PAOGE
JAB KABHI HO TUM TANHA
TO APNI US TANHAI MEIN MUJHESE HI MILOGE
JAB BHULA DE KOI TUMHE TO
APNE DIL KI KASHISH KE KAREEB MUJHE HI PAOGE |
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2008, 10:38:10 AM » |
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Jab jhukega sajde mein sar tumhara,
apni mannaton mein hamein hi paaoge,
Chaahoge bahut ke bas na chaaho hamein,
par apni har saans pe hamara hi ikhtiyaar paoge,
Mohabbat ka anjaam shayad ye na socha hoga tumne,
ab apni har ek dhadkan par hamare hi sur paaoge...
NICE LINES FROM UR SIDE TOO ANGEL JI
REALLY GOOD. |
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2008, 02:22:13 PM » |
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Thanks diya, shihab  |
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2008, 11:24:53 AM » |
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Awesome majid sahab...bohot khoob humse reply diye bina raha nai gaya
so kuch khoshish hum bhi karte hai..gaur farmaiyega..
Badi sidat hai hume apne pyar par zara aitbar karlo
Sabke Mar.z samajte ho ab humara bhi ilaj kardo
Jabse gaye ho tum meri ga.li mein meri rat hai
Laut ao meri duniya mein ek nayi sheher kardo
Tumse thi pechan ab to khud se bhi anjaan hain
koi mujhe mera naam yad dilao koi pehchaan kardo
Tumne lootli khushiya aur duniya ne bhi na choda
Reham karo aye logon 2 pal mujhe chain inaam kardo
~Roshni~
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2008, 02:54:33 PM » |
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Bahut achhe majid and rosh...
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2008, 03:53:10 PM » |
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bahoot khoob likha hai pricess, shihab bro aur angel ne.............
likhte ahiye aur hum padhte rahen ye khoobsurat nazme...kabhi dard me doobi hui aur kabhi judai me tadpati si
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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2008, 08:00:54 AM » |
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thx husena sis and bekarar ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2008, 10:00:32 AM » |
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bohut acha likha hai roshni ji and nice reply shihaab ji
kaash har raah ka mukaam aa gaya hota
tujhse bichdne se pehle maut ka paigaam aa gaya hota
kar leti yu to zindgi basar mei yu hi tanha
par tu khush hai mere bagair gar iska aitbaar ho gaya hota
likh rahi hoon aaj fir mein zindgi ki adhuri daastaan
ho gaya hota pura har kalaam jo tera farmaan aa gaya hota
utha hai tufaan fir dil mei par yu hi khadi hoon mei
bikhar gayi hoti gar teri yaadon ka sahara na mila hota
yu to har raah par milte hain hamei kai shaqs
ban jaata mera bhi koi gar tera pyaar mere dil se mit gaya hota
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2008, 09:00:03 PM » |
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Bohot khoob Majid awesome as usual
lijiye apka reply
Paas bula kar hume tum har bar dur kiya karte ho
Najane kyu Mohobbat ka istarah sila kiya karte ho
Kehte ho ke Humare begair hai jeena Mushkil
Phir kyu Dard mein bhool jane ki sala diya karte ho
Kehte the hum ke Tum nahi rehpaoge Begair mere
Dekho ab apni deewaron bhi se Baatein kiya karte ho
Mujhse chutkare ke liye Mujhe beech raste Bhatka diya
Ab meri talaash mein khud Dar.Ba.dar bhatka karte ho
Tumne to Aag lagadi meri duniya ko Mita diya par
Ab dekho apne bhikre ashian ke Tukde Gina karte ho
Meri dua hai ke tu khushrahe par teri Nafrat ka kya karu
Tu chahe to hume marde par kyu Zindagi ko aur Saza karte ho
~Roshni~
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2008, 09:02:18 PM » |
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bohut acha likha hai roshni ji and nice reply shihaab ji
kaash har raah ka mukaam aa gaya hota
tujhse bichdne se pehle maut ka paigaam aa gaya hota
kar leti yu to zindgi basar mei yu hi tanha
par tu khush hai mere bagair gar iska aitbaar ho gaya hota
likh rahi hoon aaj fir mein zindgi ki adhuri daastaan
ho gaya hota pura har kalaam jo tera farmaan aa gaya hota
utha hai tufaan fir dil mei par yu hi khadi hoon mei
bikhar gayi hoti gar teri yaadon ka sahara na mila hota
yu to har raah par milte hain hamei kai shaqs
ban jaata mera bhi koi gar tera pyaar mere dil se mit gaya hota
toooo gud awesome reply..Bhawna ji.. |
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