Jitna paya tha pouna hua.......mann

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Pyar ko doguna chahate the,
Jitna  paya  tha pouna  hua.

Byah  to tha  rachaya gaya,
Par na khwabon ka gouna hua.

Neend jab jab bhi aayi hame,
Kanton ka hi bichhouna hua.

Unko dil apna hamne diya,
Khelne  ko  khilouna  hua.

Mann ke jangal chahakne lage,
Gham hiraniya ke chhouna hua.

Sari  khoobi satah  aa  lagi,
”Mann” ka jab bhi bilouna hua.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2012, 11:51:47 AM »
alag si hai.. lekin ghazab si hai..

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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2012, 11:54:00 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya touhidji
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2012, 01:34:06 PM »
bohat khoob mann ji ......
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2012, 01:37:03 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 11, 2012, 11:37:52 AM
Pyar ko doguna chahate the,
Jitna  paya  tha pouna  hua.

Byah  to tha  rachaya gaya,
Par na khwabon ka gouna hua.

Neend jab jab bhi aayi hame,
Kanton ka hi bichhouna hua.

Unko dil apna hamne diya,
Khelne  ko  khilouna  hua.

Mann ke jangal chahakne lage,
Gham hiraniya ke chhouna hua.

Sari  khoobi satah  aa  lagi,
”Mann” ka jab bhi bilouna hua.

Mann

kyaa class likhte ho yaar ................ ghazab hai
 bahut bahut umdaa..
tumse milne ka man ho gayaa...

hatss off... keep up .......
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2012, 01:48:16 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2012, 02:00:47 PM »
wah wah...ek different mast style hai aapka is poem me..
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2012, 06:54:59 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 11, 2012, 11:37:52 AM
Pyar ko doguna chahate the,
Jitna  paya  tha pouna  hua.

Byah  to tha  rachaya gaya,
Par na khwabon ka gouna hua.

Neend jab jab bhi aayi hame,
Kanton ka hi bichhouna hua.

Unko dil apna hamne diya,
Khelne  ko  khilouna  hua.

Mann ke jangal chahakne lage,
Gham hiraniya ke chhouna hua.

Sari  khoobi satah  aa  lagi,
”Mann” ka jab bhi bilouna hua.

Mann


naaaice----M.M
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2012, 03:16:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya laaibaji.... ummid hai aapka sath milta rahega....
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2012, 03:19:03 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janumanuji..... meri adna si koshish ko aapne itna pyar diya bahut bbahut shukriya..... yun hi sath bane rahiye....
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2012, 05:24:56 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya masoomji
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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2012, 08:41:30 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya spsji
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2012, 09:55:31 AM »
Bahut khoob mann jee
Bahut umda
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2012, 10:36:16 AM »
bahut shukriya shihabji
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2012, 03:36:48 AM »
bahut bahut khamoshji
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