... Jiye jaa rahe hai ...

by Just_Hate_Love on April 02, 2006, 03:45:53 PM
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Jinhe dekhne ke liye hum jiye jaa rahe hai,
Wo parde pe parde kiye jaa rahe hai,
Taarjub hai yaaro hum mare to nahi,
Par wo kafan pe kafan siye jaa rahe hai ...
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2006, 05:30:32 PM »
Nice one JHL.

"Jiye jaa rahe hain kisi ke intezaar me ham,
      mehroof wo na jaane mere dil ka haal,
      jiske liye badal diya khud ko,zindagi ko,
      tod ke vaade aaj badal gayi wahi chaal."
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2006, 07:13:13 PM »
wonderful  JHl.  ..............  Nidhi.........
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2006, 07:45:16 PM »
Bohat khoob JHL & Nidhi....
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2006, 11:31:16 AM »
nice Jhl n Nidhi
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2006, 05:46:11 PM »
thanx waheed,aryaan n salma.
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2006, 05:58:17 PM »
kuch dabe hai jazbatt tumko seena khol ker dekhau kaise ,,has raha hai zakham aaise marham ko dekhker tere dard ka malham mai zakhmo per lagau kaise
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2006, 01:12:01 PM »
Thanks a lot Niddhi, Waheed, Aryan and Salma ...
Nice one Niddhi and Tushar ...


Ye sannata bahut mehenga padega,
Use bhi phutkar rona padega,
Wohi do chaar chehre ajnabi se,
Unhi ko phir se dohrana padega,
Koi ghar se nikalta hi nahi hai,
Hawa ko thak kar se jaana padega,
Yaha suraj bhi kala pad gaya hai,
Kahi se din bhi mangwana padega,
Wo achhe the jo pehle mar gaye,
Hame kuchh aur pachhtana padega ...
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2006, 01:36:43 PM »
Wah wah wah ....

Ye tanhayain kehti hai..
ke aansu apni kabr pe khud hi bahana padega
Dil to dukhta rahega lekin..
Jhoote hi muskurakar zindagi ko azmana padega!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2006, 04:43:20 PM »
bohot ache!!!

itne zakhm khayie hai, itne anson bahaye hai,
suk gayi ankhon ki nami, aab rone ko dil nahin karta,
kushiyan humesha door rahi, gum hi pas aye mere,
aab itne hi apna lete hai "Meena", ke ine kone ko dil nahin karta!
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2006, 11:06:55 AM »
Quote from: "nirbhay"
Wah wah wah ....

Ye tanhayain kehti hai..
ke aansu apni kabr pe khud hi bahana padega
Dil to dukhta rahega lekin..
Jhoote hi muskurakar zindagi ko azmana padega!!


Dil pe laga bewafaai ka daag mitana padega,
Mohabbat ka usool us bewafa ko sikhana padega,
Waqt kam hai hamare paas ye use yakeen nahi,
Isiliye use zindagi ka doobta suraj dikhana padega ...

Sukriya Nirbhay ...
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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2006, 02:25:42 PM »
wah bahoot khoob neer and JHL ji!!!

Dekha hai manjar wo ki sab bhool gaye
kuch pal rahe yaad, aor her pal bhool gaye
yaandon ke palo mai, wo pal bikhar jaaty hai
tinka tinka sameta jise, kayun ek jhonkein mai udd jaaty hai!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2006, 01:50:38 PM »
superbb JHL, Nidhi, Nirbhay, Meena sis n Pooja sis.......
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2006, 02:49:02 PM »
thanks nikki
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2006, 06:08:41 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja and Nikki for appreciation ...
And nice one Pooja ...
Keep it up ...
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