... Jiye jaa rahe hai ...

by Just_Hate_Love on April 02, 2006, 03:45:53 PM
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #15 on: April 27, 2006, 06:11:28 PM »
Yaad rakhna hame hamare bichhad jaane ke baad,
Rihaai le lenge hum duniya tere naam kar jaane ke baad,
Aakhri khwaahish hai ki dua tum karna ki,
Kam se kam khushiyaan to mile hame hamare mar jaane ke baad ...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #16 on: April 27, 2006, 06:11:51 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Jinhe dekhne ke liye hum jiye jaa rahe hai,
Wo parde pe parde kiye jaa rahe hai,
Taarjub hai yaaro hum mare to nahi,
Par wo kafan pe kafan siye jaa rahe hai ...


wah wah bahut achaa likha sab na........but JHL i like this one the best
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #17 on: April 27, 2006, 06:21:25 PM »
Thanks a lot Dear ...
Why havent you wrote anything here Huh?
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #18 on: April 27, 2006, 06:23:55 PM »
aare likhana ke liya ab kuch bachaa he nahi......jo pura suraa aata tha woh bhi gayaa ab toh

tum likho.....achaa lagta hai.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: April 27, 2006, 07:49:55 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Yaad rakhna hame hamare bichhad jaane ke baad,
Rihaai le lenge hum duniya tere naam kar jaane ke baad,
Aakhri khwaahish hai ki dua tum karna ki,
Kam se kam khushiyaan to mile hame hamare mar jaane ke baad ...


Bahoot khoob, First two lines to kamal ki likhi hai apne….

Yaad hi raha, aor kuch yaad nahi
Ek wo tera sath, aor koi baat nahi
Khawahish hi rahi, tere sung jine ki
Aor yah agg, na tujse kabhi milane ki!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: April 29, 2006, 06:22:25 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
aare likhana ke liya ab kuch bachaa he nahi......jo pura suraa aata tha woh bhi gayaa ab toh

tum likho.....achaa lagta hai.....


Usme kya hai Huh?
Jitna bhi aata hai utna to likha baaki ka hum pura kar denge ...
Aur sunke khushi hui ki tumhe hamari shayaris achhi lagti hai ...
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«Reply #21 on: April 29, 2006, 06:26:01 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Yaad rakhna hame hamare bichhad jaane ke baad,
Rihaai le lenge hum duniya tere naam kar jaane ke baad,
Aakhri khwaahish hai ki dua tum karna ki,
Kam se kam khushiyaan to mile hame hamare mar jaane ke baad ...


Bahoot khoob, First two lines to kamal ki likhi hai apne….

Yaad hi raha, aor kuch yaad nahi
Ek wo tera sath, aor koi baat nahi
Khawahish hi rahi, tere sung jine ki
Aor yah agg, na tujse kabhi milane ki!!!!



Thanks a lot Pooja for appreciation ...
You have also written fantastic one ...
Keep it up ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: April 30, 2006, 04:23:40 AM »
thanks JHL JI!!!
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #23 on: May 03, 2006, 01:19:18 PM »
Gr8 all...n Jhl jee bahut khoob
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #24 on: May 09, 2006, 11:57:36 AM »
You are welcome Pooja and thanks a lot Salma for appreciation ...
Salma aapne kuchh likha nahia Huh?
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