Jo bevafa hoga.........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 18, 2009, 04:26:45 AM
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Hum jante hain gairo ne, kya tujhme dekha hoga
Tera husn teri ada tera ishq, tera dil na kisi ne dekha hoga

De dege jaan bhi apni, shehar bhar ne tujhse kaha hoga
Aur bina kiye tujhse wada koi, ek GHAYEL hi mar gaya hoga

Yu to har guzarte carvaan ne, tujhe sath chalne ko kaha hoga
Par rok kar apna safar, meri tarah tera rasta na dekha hoga

Woh sochte hain roz ki tarah, kuch fuzool humne likha hoga
Jo bevafa hoga teri tarah, padhkar ise sharminda hoga


-Sajid Ghayel-
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2009, 04:37:07 AM »
Nice Lines Ghayal !!!
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pandit
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2009, 05:07:00 AM »
gud one sazid..
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chitralsony
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2009, 06:26:45 AM »
tu jis shakhas  kay liyay rastay may tehra hoga
kon janay os shkhs kay dil may kiya fasana hoga
kiya khaber wo bi taray liyay aysay tarapta hoga
man may oskay jhank kay tu nay  kub  dekha hoga
yay haqeeqat hay bhol jana muhabbbat may kathan
 baywafa keh kay osay  taira dil to behla hoga
wo jis kay sochon pay tairi yaad ka pehra hoga
piyar ka daikh kay shikwa kiya wo shirminda hoga
tairi taraf atay  hoyay a mairay budguman  dosst
os  kay   be rastay  may  aya koyi  kantaa  hoga
yay elzaam sun kay  kysay  kysay  wo tarpa  hoga
jub jakay gair nay yay sub os say keh diya  hoga



ghayel ji kabi kabi kuch majboriyan mehbob ki nazron may baywafa bannay pr majboor kr daiti hain so kuch aysay hi baywafon ki side li hay ,bura lagay tu mouafi chahti hun
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2009, 08:25:32 AM »
Quote from: pandit on February 18, 2009, 05:07:00 AM
gud one sazid..

Quote from: Pooja on February 18, 2009, 04:37:07 AM
Nice Lines Ghayal !!!

Thank You Pandit and Pooja....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2009, 08:32:30 AM »
Quote from: chitralsony on February 18, 2009, 06:26:45 AM
tu jis shakhas  kay liyay rastay may tehra hoga
kon janay os shkhs kay dil may kiya fasana hoga
kiya khaber wo bi taray liyay aysay tarapta hoga
man may oskay jhank kay tu nay  kub  dekha hoga
yay haqeeqat hay bhol jana muhabbbat may kathan
 baywafa keh kay osay  taira dil to behla hoga
wo jis kay sochon pay tairi yaad ka pehra hoga
piyar ka daikh kay shikwa kiya wo shirminda hoga
tairi taraf atay  hoyay a mairay budguman  dosst
os  kay   be rastay  may  aya koyi  kantaa  hoga
yay elzaam sun kay  kysay  kysay  wo tarpa  hoga
jub jakay gair nay yay sub os say keh diya  hoga

Ghayel ji kabi kabi kuch majboriyan mehbob ki nazron may baywafa bannay pr majboor kr daiti hain so kuch aysay hi baywafon ki side li hay ,bura lagay tu mouafi chahti hun


Subhan_allah Chitral  Clapping Smiley

Kash zindagi me woh nahi tum hote
Kash main main nahi tum tum nahi humtum hote

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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2009, 09:16:19 AM »
Bohat BOhat Badhiya Sajid Bhai,.
Kamaal ka Likha Hai Aapne, Nice One,.

And A Great Work From Ur Side Too, Miss Chitra,.

Khush Raho,.
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2009, 09:48:46 AM »
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji

NIce reply from you Chitral Ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 18, 2009, 10:07:39 AM »
Nice lines Ghayel Ji
Equally good response Chitral Ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2009, 10:53:01 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 18, 2009, 04:26:45 AM
Hum jante hain gairo ne, kya tujhme dekha hoga
Tera husn teri ada tera ishq, tera dil na kisi ne dekha hoga

De dege jaan bhi apni, shehar bhar ne tujhse kaha hoga
Aur bina kiye tujhse wada koi, ek GHAYEL hi mar gaya hoga

Yu to har guzarte carvaan ne, tujhe sath chalne ko kaha hoga
Par rok kar apna safar, meri tarah tera rasta na dekha hoga

Woh sochte hain roz ki tarah, kuch fuzool humne likha hoga
Jo bevafa hoga teri tarah, padhkar ise sharminda hoga


-Sajid Ghayel-

Wow Nice creation Sajid ji..  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2009, 01:04:05 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 18, 2009, 09:16:19 AM
Bohat BOhat Badhiya Sajid Bhai,.
Kamaal ka Likha Hai Aapne, Nice One,.

And A Great Work From Ur Side Too, Miss Chitra,.

Khush Raho,.

Bohat shukriyaan Chote...

Quote from: Celmira on February 18, 2009, 09:48:46 AM
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji

NIce reply from you Chitral Ji

Thank You Talat...

Quote from: Roja on February 18, 2009, 10:53:01 AM
Wow Nice creation Sajid ji..  Applause


Nawazish karam Roja

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 18, 2009, 10:07:39 AM
Nice lines Ghayel Ji
Equally good response Chitral Ji

Shukriyaan Dost...
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2009, 04:21:56 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 18, 2009, 04:26:45 AM
Hum jante hain gairo ne, kya tujhme dekha hoga
Tera husn teri ada tera ishq, tera dil na kisi ne dekha hoga

De dege jaan bhi apni, shehar bhar ne tujhse kaha hoga
Aur bina kiye tujhse wada koi, ek GHAYEL hi mar gaya hoga

Yu to har guzarte carvaan ne, tujhe sath chalne ko kaha hoga
Par rok kar apna safar, meri tarah tera rasta na dekha hoga

Woh sochte hain roz ki tarah, kuch fuzool humne likha hoga
Jo bevafa hoga teri tarah, padhkar ise sharminda hoga


-Sajid Ghayel-

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Ghayel saheb dewanna hogaya hoon apki shayri ka...kamal ka likte ho...akhri ki do lines chuu gayi sabse zada...wah wah kamal ka likha hai...


meri kadvi shayrian padke woh zarur toota hoga,
mere rone pe woh zarur khushi se juma hoga,
ab kaise kahe RAHIM ke usne kisiko dard dia nahin,
bewaffai payi hai toh shayad humne bhi kisi ka dil toda hoga...
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2009, 06:59:48 PM »
Quote from: dead heart on February 18, 2009, 04:21:56 PM

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Ghayel saheb dewanna hogaya hoon apki shayri ka...kamal ka likte ho...akhri ki do lines chuu gayi sabse zada...wah wah kamal ka likha hai...


meri kadvi shayrian padke woh zarur toota hoga,
mere rone pe woh zarur khushi se juma hoga,
ab kaise kahe RAHIM ke usne kisiko dard dia nahin,
bewaffai payi hai toh shayad humne bhi kisi ka dil toda hoga...


Arey DH nahi mere bhai deewana nahi hona  DOH bohat bohat shukriyaan jo tumne itni izzat di Khuda khush rakhe tumhe.

And thank you for such a beautiful reply.. Clapping Smiley
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dead heart
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2009, 07:04:08 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 18, 2009, 06:59:48 PM
Arey DH nahi mere bhai deewana nahi hona  DOH bohat bohat shukriyaan jo tumne itni izzat di Khuda khush rakhe tumhe.

And thank you for such a beautiful reply.. Clapping Smiley
shukriya ke apko humara jawab pasand aya...

arey deewana toh hum ban hi gaye kyun ke bahaut acha likte ho aap...likte rahiye...Khuda apko bhi khush rakhe...
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«Reply #14 on: February 19, 2009, 07:43:49 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on February 19, 2009, 07:40:53 AM
bahot acha likha hai Sajid bhai aapne... Applause Applause

too nice ... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nawazish Karam Aakash....
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