jo dAalee hai tum pe NaZar aaKhRee hai,....

by laaiba on June 02, 2013, 07:20:35 PM
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mohabbat kaa yeh SaFar aakhRee hai,
sahaa dil par jo JaBar aakhRee hai,...

mujhe tum se to shikaayat nahiN thee
ye shikWaa bhi to MaGar aakhRee hai,..

ye maqtal ab ke sAjaa hai to sun lo,..
jo ujDaa hai woh NaGar aakhRee hai,.....

ye souchaa bhi to nahiN tum se mil kar
mOhabbat kee ye DaGar aakhRee hai,.....

najaaNe kab ho mulaaQaa.t jaaNaa,..
jo daalee hai tum pe NaZar aakhRee hai..,
 
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2013, 08:55:07 PM »
Aadab Laaiba Ji,

Ek aur umda kalaam aapka, Bohot behtareen ehsaas aur dard bhare ashaaron ke saath... Daad kubool kare... Neeche ke chand ashaar dil mein ghar kar gaye. Likhte rahe...

mujhe tum se to shikaayat nahiN thee
ye shikWaa bhi to MaGar aakhRee hai,..

ye souchaa bhi to nahiN tum se mil kar
mOhabbat kee ye DaGar aakhRee hai,.....

najaaNe kab ho mulaaQaa.t jaaNaa,..
jo daalee hai tum pe NaZar aakhRee hai..,

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,

Abrar.
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2013, 09:23:57 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2013, 09:44:59 PM »
bahut hi khubsoorat  icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2013, 11:07:19 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2013, 11:19:05 PM »
laajawaab ...bahot umda likha hai aapne laaiba ji..dheron daad

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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2013, 11:43:09 PM »
waah! bahut khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2013, 11:55:46 PM »
Quote from: mohdabrar on June 02, 2013, 08:55:07 PM
Aadab Laaiba Ji,

Ek aur umda kalaam aapka, Bohot behtareen ehsaas aur dard bhare ashaaron ke saath... Daad kubool kare... Neeche ke chand ashaar dil mein ghar kar gaye. Likhte rahe...

mujhe tum se to shikaayat nahiN thee
ye shikWaa bhi to MaGar aakhRee hai,..

ye souchaa bhi to nahiN tum se mil kar
mOhabbat kee ye DaGar aakhRee hai,.....

najaaNe kab ho mulaaQaa.t jaaNaa,..
jo daalee hai tum pe NaZar aakhRee hai..,

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,

Abrar.


bohat bohat shukria aapkaa abrar ji,..................
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2013, 12:08:30 AM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 02, 2013, 09:23:57 PM
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thanx,................
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2013, 12:13:43 AM »
Quote from: NeelamJ on June 02, 2013, 09:44:59 PM
bahut hi khubsoorat  icon_flower
shukria neelam j aapkaa,..............
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2013, 12:46:57 AM »
laajawab laaiba jee..umda peshkash hai..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: June 03, 2013, 12:51:51 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 02, 2013, 07:20:35 PM

mohabbat kaa yeh SaFar aakhRee hai,
sahaa dil par jo JaBar aakhRee hai,...

mujhe tum se to shikaayat nahiN thee
ye shikWaa bhi to MaGar aakhRee hai,..

ye maqtal ab ke sAjaa hai to sun lo,..
jo ujDaa hai woh NaGar aakhRee hai,.....

ye souchaa bhi to nahiN tum se mil kar
mOhabbat kee ye DaGar aakhRee hai,.....

najaaNe kab ho mulaaQaa.t jaaNaa,..
jo daalee hai tum pe NaZar aakhRee hai..,
 

gr8888888,ma'am
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2013, 01:24:34 AM »
As usual, its too beautiful as ur heart is.........Laaibaji
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2013, 03:23:34 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 02, 2013, 07:20:35 PM

mohabbat kaa yeh SaFar aakhRee hai,
sahaa dil par jo JaBar aakhRee hai,...

mujhe tum se to shikaayat nahiN thee
ye shikWaa bhi to MaGar aakhRee hai,..

ye maqtal ab ke sAjaa hai to sun lo,..
jo ujDaa hai woh NaGar aakhRee hai,.....

ye souchaa bhi to nahiN tum se mil kar
mOhabbat kee ye DaGar aakhRee hai,.....

najaaNe kab ho mulaaQaa.t jaaNaa,..
jo daalee hai tum pe NaZar aakhRee hai..,
 

wah wah kya kahne laaiba per tumhaara kalaam aakhri nahin hona chaahiye aage bhi likhti rahna.......... icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2013, 05:10:07 PM »
Quote from: nashwani on June 03, 2013, 12:46:57 AM
laajawab laaiba jee..umda peshkash hai..happy9
shukria,...................
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