Jo hadse gujar...

by Just_Hate_Love on December 26, 2004, 10:14:14 AM
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Jo hadse na gujar jaye wo pyaar hi kya,
Jo pyaar karnepe majboor na karde wo ikraar hi kya,
Intezar to sab karte hai,
Saanse tutne tak saath na de wo yaar hi kya.
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2004, 10:22:08 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Jo hadse na gujar jaye wo pyaar hi kya,
Jo pyaar karnepe majboor na karde wo ikraar hi kya,
Intezar to sab karte hai,
Saanse tutne tak saath na de wo yaar hi kya.
that was nice mr love
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diva
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2004, 10:22:50 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Jo hadse na gujar jaye wo pyaar hi kya,
Jo pyaar karnepe majboor na karde wo ikraar hi kya,
Intezar to sab karte hai,
Saanse tutne tak saath na de wo yaar hi kya.
that was nice mr love
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2004, 10:31:07 AM »
Thnx diva.
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diva
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2004, 10:51:54 AM »
rona kuch is tarha ki ashq na behe
dard saho kuch is tarha ki zakham na rahe
labo pe aah ,ankhon me paani
roko kuch is tarah ki koi gum na rahe                  


this was 4 u  mr love
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2004, 10:55:31 AM »
It was really good n thnx too. Keep writing
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2004, 12:14:09 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Jo hadse na gujar jaye wo pyaar hi kya,
Jo pyaar karnepe majboor na karde wo ikraar hi kya,
Intezar to sab karte hai,
Saanse tutne tak saath na de wo yaar hi kya.


wahhhhhhh! nice one!
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2004, 12:19:55 PM »
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rona kuch is tarha ki ashq na behe
dard saho kuch is tarha ki zakham na rahe
labo pe aah ,ankhon me paani
roko kuch is tarah ki koi gum na rahe                  


this was 4 you  mr love


beautifulllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #8 on: December 30, 2004, 07:41:39 AM »
Zindagi kisiki amanat nahi hoti,
Amanat kabhi khayanat nahi hoti,
Dil ko sambhalkar rakhna,
Meri dosti ki Kaid me,
Kabhi Zamanat nahi hoti.
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2004, 08:59:22 AM »
WOW........HATE AND DIVA.
VERY NICE WRITTEN.
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2004, 09:11:47 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "diva"
rona kuch is tarha ki ashq na behe
dard saho kuch is tarha ki zakham na rahe
labo pe aah ,ankhon me paani
roko kuch is tarah ki koi gum na rahe                  


this was 4 you  mr love


beautifulllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!


wowowowowowow   Just_Hate_Love..............diva......both very excellent work..............

Rulane se pehle ek baar hasaya hota,
Kasoor kya tha is dil ko bataya hota.
Milee saza us khata ki jo ki naa humne,
kash tumse dil na lagaya hota...................................... (nm)
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: December 31, 2004, 05:16:34 AM »
Thnx Waheedbhai.
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: December 31, 2004, 11:32:27 AM »
wah waheed ji!

 :D
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