jo mile hai dard aankho se bata denge

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khamosh ho gye  mare lafz,
jo mile hai dard aankho se bata denge,

yoh tari soch main aayi,
apni mashtishk e shikan ko mitta denge,

woqt e lamha gyjarta hai,tasli nahi hoti,
tum bewaaffa ager ho jao, hum waffa nibha denge,

aaram sa mil raha hai aag ki tapish se jism ko,
woh ager shama bujhane aaye,hum fir jala denge,

in hatho ki lakiro may tum na huye to,
dard o maahol main hum khud ko jhulsa denge,

koi padh nahi payega mare dard ko,
hum is kader yaado ko seene main chupa denge,


                jj saini


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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2014, 04:04:33 AM »
bahut khoob............
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2014, 04:16:27 AM »
woqt e lamha gyjarta hai,tasli nahi hoti,
tum bewaaffa ager ho jao, hum waffa nibha denge,

in hatho ki lakiro may tum na huye to,
dard o maahol main hum khud ko jhulsa denge,



Kya Batttttttt Haiiiiiiiiiiii,
So Nice Jeet Ji.
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2014, 05:35:37 AM »
Wah! Wah! Jeet jee Bahut Umdah Ghazal hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Surindar.N       Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2014, 08:02:11 AM »
nice
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2014, 09:36:16 AM »
shukriya miraj sir ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2014, 09:36:58 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2014, 09:37:44 AM »
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shukriya saini sir ji
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2014, 10:06:21 AM »
shukriya mayur sir ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2014, 10:13:28 AM »
badhiya Applause Applause
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अच्छा है......
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«Reply #13 on: March 13, 2014, 03:00:11 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #14 on: March 13, 2014, 06:01:30 PM »
shukriya chiragh sir ji
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