Jo tum humaare hote....Quateel

by Quateel Ahmad on April 03, 2012, 04:05:12 AM
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Jo tum huay humaare hote
To apni chatt pe bhi sitaare hote

Josh e tamanna mein duaaon ka asar
Mil jaata to kya nazaare hote

Kuu e yaar aur makan apna
Khoob hota jo ek kinaare hote

Shadab zameen ke daldal dekh lete
to pankh apne na utaare hote

Har jagah phire ho qalam liye 'Quateel'
Hunar zubaan ke bhi to sanwaare hote
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 04:06:19 AM »
bdaa hee qaatilaanaa peshkash dheron daad haazir hain
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 04:11:12 AM »
Bahut Shukriya Sainibhai!
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2012, 04:44:11 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause nice 1
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2012, 06:37:20 AM »

dear quateel,
dil ke ahsaso ko sahi shabdo ka libas pahnakar bakhoobi phesh kiya h.
Bhut achchi composition h.
Aate rahiye or achchi achchi peskas pes karke hamari daad wasool karte rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2012, 07:28:33 AM »
Quote from: Quateel Ahmad on April 03, 2012, 04:05:12 AM
Jo tum huay humaare hote
To apni chatt pe bhi sitaare hote

Josh e tamanna mein duaaon ka asar
Mil jaata to kya nazaare hote

Kuu e yaar aur makan apna
Khoob hota jo ek kinaare hote

Shadab zameen ke daldal dekh lete
to pankh apne na utaare hote

Har jagah phire ho qalam liye 'Quateel'
Hunar zubaan ke bhi to sanwaare hote
WAAH WAHH
bahot khoob Qateel sahab
daad daad daad
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2012, 08:50:05 AM »
bahut hi zabardast
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2012, 08:58:40 AM »
Quote from: Quateel Ahmad on April 03, 2012, 04:05:12 AM
Jo tum huay humaare hote
To apni chatt pe bhi sitaare hote

Josh e tamanna mein duaaon ka asar
Mil jaata to kya nazaare hote

Kuu e yaar aur makan apna
Khoob hota jo ek kinaare hote

Shadab zameen ke daldal dekh lete
to pankh apne na utaare hote

Har jagah phire ho qalam liye 'Quateel'
Hunar zubaan ke bhi to sanwaare hote  bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


nice............!
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2012, 11:02:27 AM »
bahut hi badiya....khoob...
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2012, 03:06:57 PM »
Bahut Shukriya, Jaganji, Masoomji, Sarfiraji,Betukji, Shebaji, Dollyji
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2012, 03:44:06 AM »
veri nice dear
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2012, 05:39:38 AM »
 Shukriya Shihabji. Shukriya Sahillji
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2012, 08:50:20 AM »
Bahut achhi,khubsurat peshkash hai.dili mubarakbaad .
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2012, 12:34:59 PM »
Shukriya, Siddiquiji!
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