Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum":Shayri-E-Dard

manjum

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Jo tum Pyar ka ek gulab de dete.
Ham uske baad apni sari bahar de dete.

Le pate chain se kabhi ek sans bhi agar,
Fir apni kasam dil ka har karar de dete.

Tumse agar mil jata jhutha hi sahara,
Ham apni zindgi ka tumko naam de dete.

Meri ek aah ke bare punchh lete agar tum,
Ham apne hae aansu ka hisab de dete.

Gar yad tum kar lete ek bar jara sa,
Yadon ki jo hai tumko wo kitab de dete.

Ek lamhe ko ji tera pyar mil jata,
Ham uske baad hanste hanste jan de dete...

manjum "mann"


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nirala

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2011, 07:08:10 AM »

wah manju wah.
kya ehsaas kya khumaar.
bahut hi umda poetry.
dil se karodo daad re.
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thanx
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ParwaaZ

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2011, 07:13:59 AM »

Manjum Jee Adaab!

Ahsaas O khayaal achche lage aapki tehreer ke..
Aur lafzoN ki her pher achchi rahi...
Sabhi sher achche rahe daad kabool kijye..

Kuch kahna chaheNge waise to humne nuks dikhana chhod diya hai..
Par aap abhi tak sahiN se kafiye match kar ke likh rahi thi aur
achcnak aisi kalaam likhi aapne to kahna zururi samjha humne...

Koshish kariye aik hi kafiye ko shuru se anjaam tak pahuNchane ki..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.....


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Anshumali

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2011, 09:23:57 AM »

Quote from: manjum on February 05, 2011, 05:22:45 AM

Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas likhe hai aapne ... Manjum Ji !

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... dil se daad !


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2011, 11:13:34 AM »

Bahut khoob manju mann ji..


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Matrix Guy

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 11:26:13 AM »

bahot asardar likha he manju ji...........sab sher ka arth bahot gehra he........but manju ji jesa parwaj ji ne kaha me bhi usi wahi baat kahna chahta hu......is baar shayad koi karan raha ho.....well keep it up........bahot khubsurat.is poetry ke congrats...


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dead heart

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2011, 01:31:15 PM »

Bahaut bahaut khoob Manjum jee..
Khush rahiye..!
Applause


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2011, 03:21:46 PM »

Bahut Khub Manjum JI Applause


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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2011, 06:04:11 PM »

pyar ka gulaab kya dete
dil ka tukda laaye the
haal tera kya poochte sanam
bifarti yaado ka sahara hum paaye the
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bahut khub Manju ji.
dili daad aapke kalaam ko
khus rahiye
sukriya


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manjum

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2011, 09:02:22 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya niralaji...

daad aur duaye dete rahiega...


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manjum

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2011, 09:09:04 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya parwazji... aapne pada aur apne khyal pash kiye... aapne jo kafiye wali baat kahi wo ek dam thik kaha... iski wajah hai ki ye kalaam bahut purana hai... tab jab ham jo khyal aate the unhen likh liya karte the... par han aage se khyal rakhenge...

shukriya ki aap itna baate hain... samjhate rahiye aapki koi baat nukhas nahin lagti hame.... plz


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manjum

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2011, 09:10:38 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya anshuji... yun hi sath rahie...


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manjum

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2011, 09:12:52 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya matrixji...

duaye aur daad dete rahen... padte rahen mujhe


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manjum

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2011, 09:15:40 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya rahimji...

duaye dete rahie sada


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manjum

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Re: Jo tum pyar ka ek gulab de dete... "manjum"

«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2011, 09:17:06 AM »

bahut bahut thanks rishiji...

padte rahie.... sath rahiye...


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