Joon na Rengi kaan main......mann

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Dukhde sabke piro diye hain hamne apne gaan main.
Geet na khushiyon ke aate hain ab to apni taan main.

Sabhi nigahon ne hamko achraj se dekha us waqt,
Sukhe phool sajaye hamne jab apne guldaan main.

Bahan betiyon ko lutta jab dekhe to wo tadap uthe,
Ek pal bhi aisa ab to bacha nahin insaan main.

Bhul gaye janta ko sab hi satta ki mara mari main,
Mahngayi aur bhukh rakhi hai ab har khalihaan main.

Basti main hangama sunkar darwaze sab band ho gaye,
Chikhon ki aawaz suni par joon na rengi kaan main.

Gahare main kahin dafan ho gaye dard ke jo bhi the ahasas,
Isse jyada zinda murde rahte hain shmshaan main.

mann


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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 08:09:58 PM »
Dukhde sabke piro diye hain hamne apne gaan main.
Geet na khushiyon ke aate hain ab to apni taan main.

Sabhi nigahon ne hamko achraj se dekha us waqt,
Sukhe phool sajaye hamne jab apne guldaan main.

Bahan betiyon ko lutta jab dekhe to wo tadap uthe,
Ek pal bhi aisa ab to bacha nahin insaan main.

Bhul gaye janta ko sab hi satta ki mara mari main,
Mahngayi aur bhukh rakhi hai ab har khalihaan main.

Basti main hangama sunkar darwaze sab band ho gaye,
Chikhon ki aawaz suni par joon na rengi kaan main.

Gahare main kahin dafan ho gaye dard ke jo bhi the ahasas,
Isse jyada zinda murde rahte hain shmshaan main.

mann

Wah wah bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne mann jee. bahut daad
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2013, 08:48:38 PM »
bohat khoob maa.n ji,............
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2013, 10:07:05 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne. umda peshkash. dheron daad...
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2013, 12:34:15 AM »
Waah waah waah..
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2013, 01:19:18 AM »
Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Ji.
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2013, 02:58:53 AM »

Sabhi nigahon ne hamko achraj se dekha us
waqt,
Sukhe phool sajaye hamne jab apne guldaan
main.
Bahan betiyon ko lutta jab dekhe to wo tadap
uthe,
Ek pal bhi aisa ab to bacha nahin insaan
main.

Bahut Khub Mann Ji

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2013, 03:54:33 AM »
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waah waah Mann jee, bahut hi khoob, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye. Ayk Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.

Bahan betiyoN ko lut-ta jab dekhe to wo tadap uthay
Ek pal bhi aisa ab to bacha nahiN insaan meiN

Basti meiN hagama sunkar darwaaze sab band ho gaye
ChikhoN ki aawaaz suni par jooN na reNgi kaan meiN

Gahare maiN kahiN dafan ho gaye dard ke jo bhi the ahsaas
Iss se zyaada murde rahte haiN shamshaan meiN
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2013, 02:40:37 PM »
Mann Jee Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob jee , kya gehre aur umdaa khayaalaat ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile
Behad umdaa fikr nazar aayi aapki is kalaam meiN bahut khoob jee bahut umdaa... aik aik ashaar ko kafi gehreai se bayaaN kiya hai aapne.. Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye ... aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2013, 05:42:42 AM »
achi kaawish ke liyN daad hazir hai qubool keejiye


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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2013, 11:41:53 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sumanji
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2013, 11:44:01 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya laaibaji
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2013, 07:54:13 PM »
bahut shukriya aqshji
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«Reply #13 on: May 09, 2013, 11:35:27 AM »
shukriya bishwajeetji
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2013, 11:54:28 AM »
shukriya ravinderaji
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