Juda koi hota hai ~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 24, 2009, 01:01:52 PM
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this is for shwetha....people don't take out any other meaning


dil kii in berang galyon ab shor na koi machta hai
har pal yeh sannaata meri maut pe dastak deta hai

yaad tujhe phir kar beitha main apni tanhaayi main
na samjha kyun yeh saagar meri aankhon mein aa kar rehta hai

meri becheni ko na samjhengi yeh duniya deewani
inhe kya mallom kaisa lagta hai jab apna juda koi hota hai
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angel4u
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2009, 02:00:09 PM »
Bahut khoobsurat likha hia Salil as usual...
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2009, 03:56:32 PM »
this is for shwetha....people don't take out any other meaning


dil kii in berang galyon ab shor na koi machta hai
har pal yeh sannaata meri maut pe dastak deta hai

yaad tujhe phir kar beitha main apni tanhaayi main
na samjha kyun yeh saagar meri aankhon mein aa kar rehta hai

meri becheni ko na samjhengi yeh duniya deewani
inhe kya mallom kaisa lagta hai jab apna juda koi hota hai

Why people will take other meaning?
Very nice dedication...... Daad hazir hai Salil.

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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2009, 05:01:46 PM »
Mashallah bahaut acha likha hai janab...Great dedication... Applause Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2009, 09:38:12 PM »
very very nice sallil ji. Applause Applause Applause
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2009, 09:59:00 AM »
Hey Thanks Dear...Itni pyari dedication ke liye.....

Aankhen chalak hi padti hain jab dard ka sailaab aata hai...
riste aur majbut ho jaate hain jab khoya rista phir mil jata hai.....
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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2009, 10:11:50 AM »
Mashallah Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai, Salil Ji Aapne, Rab Aapke Rishte Mein Aur Dum Bhare,

And Nice Lines Shweta,.
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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2009, 05:18:40 PM »
this is for shwetha....people don't take out any other meaning


dil kii in berang galyon ab shor na koi machta hai
har pal yeh sannaata meri maut pe dastak deta hai

yaad tujhe phir kar beitha main apni tanhaayi main
na samjha kyun yeh saagar meri aankhon mein aa kar rehta hai

meri becheni ko na samjhengi yeh duniya deewani
inhe kya mallom kaisa lagta hai jab apna juda koi hota hai

Very nice dedication Salil
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2009, 07:42:55 AM »
thanks everyone
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