juddaaiiiiiiiii

by kirank on August 17, 2012, 07:23:47 AM
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 Wo Zamana Bhi Ek Zamana Tha,
 Jab Kisi Ka Dil Mere Liye Deewana Tha,
 Meri Kismat Mein Likhi Thi Judai Unki,
 Unka Ruth Jana To Ek Bahana Tha,
 Usne Mujhe Aazmaya Bahut Hai,
 Jaa Jaa Kar Maine Manaya Bahut Hai,
 Sach Pucho To Bahut Pyara Lagta Hai Dil Ko Wo Shaks,
 Jisne Mujhe Rulaya Bahut Hai,
 Uski Chahat Main Dil Majbur Ho Gaya,
 Bewafai To Uska Dastur Ho Gaya,
 Kasoor Uska Nahi Mera Tha,
 Maine Chaha Hi Usko Itna,
 Ki Usko Khud Par Gurur Ho Gaya.....
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2012, 07:29:19 AM »
Acchi koshish hai..
likhte rahiye...
aur shayri ko sahi head me post kariye..ise aapne 'give your introduction' section me post kar diya hai..galti se.
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2012, 09:36:26 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2012, 09:41:48 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2012, 10:20:24 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2012, 08:42:53 PM »
Quote from: kirank on August 17, 2012, 07:23:47 AM


 Wo Zamana Bhi Ek Zamana Tha,
 Jab Kisi Ka Dil Mere Liye Deewana Tha,
 Meri Kismat Mein Likhi Thi Judai Unki,
 Unka Ruth Jana To Ek Bahana Tha,
 Usne Mujhe Aazmaya Bahut Hai,
 Jaa Jaa Kar Maine Manaya Bahut Hai,
 Sach Pucho To Bahut Pyara Lagta Hai Dil Ko Wo Shaks,
 Jisne Mujhe Rulaya Bahut Hai,
 Uski Chahat Main Dil Majbur Ho Gaya,
 Bewafai To Uska Dastur Ho Gaya,
 Kasoor Uska Nahi Mera Tha,
 Maine Chaha Hi Usko Itna,
 Ki Usko Khud Par Gurur Ho Gaya.....


VERIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII NAAAAAAAAAAAAAICE
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