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Tanhai mein baithkar teri yaad aaye
mujhe tanhaiyon se nafrat hoti hai
Phoolon ki mehek jab teri yaad dilaye
mujhe gulistaano se nafrat hoti hai
Hawa ke jhonke tere pass hone ka ehsaas dilaye
mujhe aisi hawaaon se nafrat hoti hai
Har raat jo teri yaad mein jaag kar guzaari
mujhe raaton se nafrat hoti hai
Jiski chamak mein raat bhar tera chehra dikhayi de
mujhe uss mahataab se nafrat hoti hai
Ek naya din teri nayi yaad layega
mujhe savero se nafrat hoti hai
Jiski kirane meri zindagi mein roshni na la sake
mujhe uss aftaab se nafrat hoti hai
Bheeg bheeg kar bitaye the kuch lamhe
barsaat hi nahi mujhe har mausam se nafrat hoti hai
Tu nahi hai meri zindagi mein
tere tohfo se nafrat hoti hai
Kyon nahi hai ab meri zindagi mein
doston ke in sawaloon se nafrat hoti hai
Haath tham kar kiye the jo tune waade
mujhe apne har ang se nafrat hoti hai
Teri pasand ke rang ka jo libaas mujh par jache
mujhe har rang se nafrat hoti hai
Meri payal ki jis chankaar par tera dil aaya tha
tujhe jo pasand ho har dhun se nafrat hoti hai
Jala rahi hu teri saari tasveere
mere dil mein base tere aks se nafrat hoti hai
Meri zindagi se duur ja kar bhi meri zindagi mein hai
teri aisi maujudgi se nafrat hoti hai
Mere chehre par chod gaya hai jo udaasi tu
muskurane waale har shaqs se nafrat hoti hai
Chah kar bhi has nahi paa rahi hu
mujhe aisi ghutan se nafrat hoti hai
Na jaane kaise pagal pan mein likh rahi hu
tere naam ki gayi apni har nazm se nafrat hoti hai
Haathon ki lakeero ko noch kar tujhe zindagi mein layi apni
mujhe apne naseeb se nafrat hoti hai
Tujhe bhulane ki koshish mein nakamyaabi hasil ho
apni is lachaari se nafrat hoti hai
Tere bewafaa hone par bhi tujh se pyaar hai
mujhe aaj apne aap se nafrat ho rahi hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2005, 09:33:59 AM » |
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Tere bewafaa hone par bhi tujh se pyaar hai
mujhe aaj apne aap se nafrat ho rahi hai
Hmmm Amrita......... Itni nafrat..................
bohat hi khuub ..................
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2005, 11:58:13 AM » |
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Kya baat hai Amrita......Bohat khoob!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2005, 12:04:51 PM » |
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wonderfull amrita....................very nice words................
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2005, 12:16:40 PM » |
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................................................. .... bohat achha likha amrita  .... good going girl..keep writing... |
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2005, 01:12:54 PM » |
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Excellent Amrita..............bahut bahut achha................................
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2005, 05:06:52 PM » |
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wow....kya khoob likha hai aapne amrita,its really very very nice.
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2005, 05:11:11 PM » |
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thanks dolly ............aryaan....waheed.......nishita....... ...saba.....nidhi...
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2005, 11:08:15 PM » |
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kyun haarenge hum jo mere saath ho tum
tere haaton main haath hai mera mer pehchaan ho tum
sach kehte ho tum ki jaan dene ki baat sab karte hai
kya zarurat hai mujhe kisi bhi cheez ki meri zindagi ho tum
kyun dekhenge hum kisi aur ko kabhi bhi
meri har band, khulti jukti nazar main ho tum
teri chahat pe barosa karte hai hum dil se
ki mere tuh khuda mere dildaar ho tum
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2005, 06:08:22 AM » |
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TAARIF KE LIYE BOL KAM HAIN
LORIYON SE NEEND AB AATI NAHI
ISLIYE MAA CHUP HAI KUCH GAATI NAHI.
JHOOTH BHI BOLE TO AKHIR KIS TARAH
AAINA APNA KARAMATI NAHI.
KYA KARE USSE HUM SHOLON KI UMEED
ANKH TO ANSOO BHI BARSATI NAHI.
IS KADAR KUCHLI GAYI HAI INSANIYAT
AB KISI KE PAAS WO JATI NAHI.
ZEHER KE PYALE LIYE HAI SAB MAGAR
DIL KISI KA BHI 'SUKRATI' NAHI.
JIS TARAH SE KAH RAHE HAI HUM GAJAL
LOG KEHTE HAI KI KAHI JATI NAHI
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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2005, 06:32:40 AM » |
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every line is just WOW.....keep up the good work gurl!!!!......and this line just amazing "Tere bewafaa hone par bhi tujh se pyaar hai mujhe aaj apne aap se nafrat ho rahi hai"'
Kuch jayedaa hee nafrat nahi hogayee yaar!!!
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amrita
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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2005, 09:04:02 AM » |
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very nice faree and jeet........
thanks isha.......i know bahut jyaada hi nafrat hogayi....likhne ke baad realise kiya kuch jyaada hi hogaya tha log pm kare ke pooch rahe hain ARE YOU ALL RIGHT..??...
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2005, 09:20:10 AM » |
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Tanhai mein baithkar teri yaad aaye
mujhe tanhaiyon se nafrat hoti hai
Phoolon ki mehek jab teri yaad dilaye
mujhe gulistaano se nafrat hoti hai
Hawa ke jhonke tere pass hone ka ehsaas dilaye
mujhe aisi hawaaon se nafrat hoti hai
Har raat jo teri yaad mein jaag kar guzaari
mujhe raaton se nafrat hoti hai
Jiski chamak mein raat bhar tera chehra dikhayi de
mujhe uss mahataab se nafrat hoti hai
Ek naya din teri nayi yaad layega
mujhe savero se nafrat hoti hai
Jiski kirane meri zindagi mein roshni na la sake
mujhe uss aftaab se nafrat hoti hai
Bheeg bheeg kar bitaye the kuch lamhe
barsaat hi nahi mujhe har mausam se nafrat hoti hai
Tu nahi hai meri zindagi mein
tere tohfo se nafrat hoti hai
Kyon nahi hai ab meri zindagi mein
doston ke in sawaloon se nafrat hoti hai
Haath tham kar kiye the jo tune waade
mujhe apne har ang se nafrat hoti hai
Teri pasand ke rang ka jo libaas mujh par jache
mujhe har rang se nafrat hoti hai
Meri payal ki jis chankaar par tera dil aaya tha
tujhe jo pasand ho har dhun se nafrat hoti hai
Jala rahi hu teri saari tasveere
mere dil mein base tere aks se nafrat hoti hai
Meri zindagi se duur ja kar bhi meri zindagi mein hai
teri aisi maujudgi se nafrat hoti hai
Mere chehre par chod gaya hai jo udaasi tu
muskurane waale har shaqs se nafrat hoti hai
Chah kar bhi has nahi paa rahi hu
mujhe aisi ghutan se nafrat hoti hai
Na jaane kaise pagal pan mein likh rahi hu
tere naam ki gayi apni har nazm se nafrat hoti hai
Haathon ki lakeero ko noch kar tujhe zindagi mein layi apni
mujhe apne naseeb se nafrat hoti hai
Tujhe bhulane ki koshish mein nakamyaabi hasil ho
apni is lachaari se nafrat hoti hai
Tere bewafaa hone par bhi tujh se pyaar hai
mujhe aaj apne aap se nafrat ho rahi hai Nice one .. specially these lines !!
Mere chehre par chod gaya hai jo udaasi tu
muskurane waale har shaqs se nafrat hoti hai
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2005, 09:25:01 AM » |
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dekh ke apni muhhobat ka anjaam
aaj apney honey pe nafrat hoti hai
waffa ke badley milli bevfaai tum se
humko apni waffa se nafrat hoti hai
jis shajar ke neechey kartey they pyaar ki batien
dekh ke uss suney shajar ko shajar se nafrat hoti hai !!
padh ke itni mayuus shayri ko "HumTum"
ab humey shayri se nafrat hoti hai !!
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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2005, 11:25:37 AM » |
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is dil ke chhalon ko koi shayeri kahe to parwah nahi
takleef to tab hoti hai jab koi wah wah karta hai...
awesome amrita ..... really very very nice
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