Kaanton Se Aarthi ko Sajwa Do Koi!

by Meena on May 20, 2005, 01:53:01 PM
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well, dosto ne kaha ke kafi dino se kuch likha nahin...so aaj phir se hazir hoon ek nayi poem ke saath!!  :D


Chup chup kar tanhai me ek shaks ko yaad karte hai,
Aa jaye woh wapis, Khuda se yeh fariyaad karte hai,
Shayad hawa me koi tinka tha jo chala gaya meri ankhon me,
Behe raha hai ashkon ka samundar, isse rukwa do koi!!!

Dam tood raha hai dekho pyar ka arman humara,
Jism jaise hogaya yuh bejaan sa humara,
Bewafai ke kanjar se bach na sakhti wafa ki rooh,
Aab to is rishte ko dafna do koi!!!

Kaanton ki sej par so rahe te sapne humare,
Daga har maud par de raha hai apne humare,
Ek ek kar ke toot gaye vishwas ke daage yaha,
Aab to zindagi se humara damna chudwa do koi!!!

Odh liya hai kafan aur ban gayi mai dulhan maut ki,
Aab na asar hoga koi, kisi bhi di hui chot ki,
Baharon ki wafa ras na ayi, kuch aise zakhm mile hai,
Aab phoolon se nahin par kaanton se meri aarthi sajwa do koi!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2005, 05:03:59 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
well, dosto ne kaha ke kafi dino se kuch likha nahin...so aaj phir se hazir hoon ek nayi poem ke saath!!  :D


Chup chup kar tanhai me ek shaks ko yaad karte hai,
Aa jaye woh wapis, Khuda se yeh fariyaad karte hai,
Shayad hawa me koi tinka tha jo chala gaya meri ankhon me,
Behe raha hai ashkon ka samundar, isse rukwa do koi!!!

Dam tood raha hai dekho pyar ka arman humara,
Jism jaise hogaya yuh bejaan sa humara,
Bewafai ke kanjar se bach na sakhti wafa ki rooh,
Aab to is rishte ko dafna do koi!!!

Kaanton ki sej par so rahe te sapne humare,
Daga har maud par de raha hai apne humare,
Ek ek kar ke toot gaye vishwas ke daage yaha,
Aab to zindagi se humara damna chudwa do koi!!!

Odh liya hai kafan aur ban gayi mai dulhan maut ki,
Aab na asar hoga koi, kisi bhi di hui chot ki,
Baharon ki wafa ras na ayi, kuch aise zakhm mile hai,
Aab phoolon se nahin par kaanton se meri aarthi sajwa do koi!!!


wow  meena    bahot  khoob  motiiiiiiiii...............excellent............. ......
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2005, 05:41:03 PM »
.....shukriya ...waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2005, 09:32:34 PM »
wow meena tusi teah just great ho.......that last para just mind blowing......dil ko chuu (touch) gaya!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2005, 10:57:55 PM »
Wah! Meena kamaal ka likha hai aap ne, ek ek lafz mein inteha ka drad chupa hai....Bohat khoob.... likhti raha kijiye....
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sandhaya
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2005, 06:43:45 AM »
meena ji kya baat hai .................
too good
Humne socha tha ki dulahan banege hum bhi
jab tutt gaya hai ye khwaab-e-barahm dil ka
tak gaye hai hum abh jal jal ke iss aag main
abh humko sab riston se mukt karva do koi
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2005, 07:48:03 AM »
shukriya isha...aryaan.....aur sandhaya ji!!!!!!! aap sab meri poems padte ho aur pasand karte ho  Usual Smile

sandhaya ji:

rishto se mukh hona itna asan hota,
to hum bhi mehefil me tanha na hote!!!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2005, 07:51:05 AM »
UR welcome Meena ji aapki poems hoti hi itni achi hai

mehfil ki tanhai ko kaise bardasht karun
ki main tuh ek pal hun khushi jo barbaad hua hai
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2005, 07:59:47 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
UR welcome Meena ji aapki poems hoti hi itni achi hai

mehfil ki tanhai ko kaise bardasht karun
ki main tuh ek pal hun khushi jo barbaad hua hai


thank u sorry but i didnt get ur shayari!  sad5
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sandhaya
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2005, 08:08:44 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
UR welcome Meena ji aapki poems hoti hi itni achi hai

mehfil ki tanhai ko kaise bardasht karun
ki main tuh ek pal hun khushi jo barbaad hua hai


thank you sorry but i didnt get ur shayari!  sad5


usme kuch mistake thi meena ji i hope ki abh samaj aa jayegi

mehfil ki tanhai ko main kaise bardasth karun
main tuh ek pal tha khushi ka jo barbaad hua hai
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2005, 08:13:23 AM »
wah ji wah!!!

Gham se bhare pyale mein khushi ki kuch boonde hein,
Ye bhi chhalak gayin to jeena mushkil hoga. (NM)
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sandhaya
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2005, 08:23:51 AM »
sukhriya meena ji and.........good one

gum kyun milta hai jaise bandaaro ki tarah
aur khushi paane ko tarasta har insaan nazar aata hai
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2005, 08:27:28 AM »
thanx!!

nazariya ka fark hai, aur samajh ki hoti hai kami,
warna baharon me phoolon ki talash na hoti!!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2005, 08:31:16 AM »
ur welcome meena ji ............
sach kaha hai aapne .........................


Jo milta hai vo humko kabhi kabul nahi hota
aur jo milta nahi uske liye rote hai hum
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: May 21, 2005, 08:37:43 AM »
true!!!

talab hoti hai humesha unki, jo hota humse door,
khud ko dukhi karte hai, aur dete hai Khuda ko kasoor!!
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