kaash kabhi aisa hota -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

aaina

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«Reply #15 on: June 02, 2009, 07:38:27 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 27, 2009, 06:25:36 AM

Bahut bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai...Har Ek Sher,Har Ek Lafz Dil Ko Chuta Hai..
Bahut Ache..

bhut bhut shukriya khwaish bhai.........


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aaina

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Re: kaash kabhi aisa hota

«Reply #16 on: June 02, 2009, 07:45:14 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 28, 2009, 01:55:14 PM

bahot khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji Clapping Smiley

behad behad ache ashaar likhe hain aapne

thxxxxx so much kaash


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aaina

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Re: kaash kabhi aisa hota

«Reply #17 on: June 02, 2009, 07:48:28 AM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 01, 2009, 12:58:55 PM

Wah wah Aaina Ji
very good
SARVESH RASTOGI

bhut bhut shukriya servesh sahb


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aaina

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Re: kaash kabhi aisa hota

«Reply #18 on: June 02, 2009, 07:54:46 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on May 26, 2009, 10:54:18 AM

Aslam Ji,

Aisa bohot kam hota hai ki kisi ki ghazal ya nazm padhne ke baad main shayari main uska jawab doon...kaafi kam...par aapki ye poem padh ke kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....aap jaisa to kabhi nahin likh sakte, bas ek koshish....ummeed hai bura nahin lagega !

Kisi Ko Itna Na Chaho, Wabaal-e-Jaan Ho Jaaye,
Chaahat Se Tumhari Rooh Lahuluhaan Ho Jaaye

Kisi Ki Yaad Sahraaon Main Na Bhatka De Tumko,
Hayaat Ka Haseen Gulshan Hi Veeraan Ho Jaaye

Tanhaaiyon Main Khud Ko Itna Na Kho Dena,
Zindagi Ki Rahguzar Ye Sunsaan Ho Jaaye

Bewafa Mohabbat Main Dil Ko Na Tadpaao,
Ki Jeena Ho Jaaye Mushkil, Marna Aasaan Ho Jaaye

Kehte Hain Lafz Hote Hain Dil Ka Aaeena,
Shayari Aisi Likho, Diiwaan Ho Jaaye

aisi baat nhi hai celmira ji aap bhut acha likhti hain mashallah, mere liyn isse badi aur khushi ki baat kya ho skti hai ki aap meri post par shayri ka jawaab shayri mai de rhi hain isme bura maanne wali to koi baat nhi.......mein to chaunga ki aisa har baar ho........bhut hi acha likha hai aapne bhut hi khoob......Allah paak aapko is fun mai aur maharat ata farmaye aameen


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: kaash kabhi aisa hota

«Reply #19 on: June 21, 2009, 05:07:57 PM »

Quote from: aaina on May 26, 2009, 04:12:18 AM

Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota
Uski khamosh jheel aankho mai
Mere jeene ka silsila hota
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota

Uski zulfo.n se khailta mein
Uske aariz ko chedata mein
Usko baho.n ke daayere mai
Halke halke samaita mein
Kaash kabi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Wo jo kuch sochta mai kar jata
Banke muskaan chehre pe bikhr jata
Wo agr kehta doobne ke liyn
Mein chdte dariya mai utar jaata
Kaash kabhi aisa hota…………..

Chandni si raatian hoti.n
Kuch aankahi si batai.n hoti.n
Makhmali si uski baho.n mai
Garam meri saasai.n hoti.n
Kaash kabhi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Usko apni aankh.n mai basa kar
Har gham ko uske gale laga kar
Apna har sukh mein usko de daita
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota

Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji


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Talat

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Re: kaash kabhi aisa hota

«Reply #20 on: June 21, 2009, 05:13:24 PM »

Quote from: aaina on June 02, 2009, 07:54:46 AM

Bohot shukriya Aslam Ji......You are very humble....!! Thanks so much.


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deepika_divya

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Re: kaash kabhi aisa hota

«Reply #21 on: February 12, 2010, 05:59:19 AM »

Waah Waah Waah Waah Kya Baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.. Bahoot Hi Umda Likha hai

Aur Talat Di aapne Bhi Bahoot Bahoot Lajawaab Jawaab Diya hai .. Bahoot Khoob!

Applause


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