-----/// Kaash... Tum laut aao ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on December 15, 2012, 09:48:45 AM
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sach kehti ho tum shaayad ki mujhse hi tum ho
par kaise bataaun tumhe ki tum bin main kuch nahi
haan main hi thaa jo muskaan laataa thaa tumhaare hothon pe
haan main hi thaa jo tumse geet likhwaataa thaa, magar

kyaa tumhe maloom hai ki,  wo tum hi thi
jisse maine sikhaa pyaar karnaa,  wo tum hi thi
maaloom na thaa ki kyaa hotaa hai kho jaanaa bheed me
maaloom na thaa ki kyaa hotaa hai ehsaas chaahat kaa

mila tumse pehli baar to naa jaan paayaa thaa magar
miltaa rahaa tumse to ye sach jaanaa maine
ki mumkin nahi kuch bhi keh paanaa tumsse judaa hoke
mumkin nahi muskuraanaa tum bin ye jaanaa maine
koshish to bahut ki maine aa ke mil loon tumse magar
yeh kadam mere jo uth_te hain fir ruk jaate hain

jaane wo kaunsaa bandhan hai jisne rok rakhaa hai mujhe
main chaah ke bhi kadam badhaa paataa nahi
main, chaahtaa bahut hoon par muskuraa paataa nahi
judaa ho ke tumse kisi se saath nibhaa paayaa to tumhaari yaadein hain
yaad aate hain aajkal har lamha tumse kiye mere wo saare vaadein hain

ab bhi kabhi tanhaa baithe apne kamre me
sochtaa hoon kyaa wajah thi
kyaa kasoor thaa meraa tumhaaraa
ki judaa ho gaye hum ek dusre se
tut ke bikhar gaye hamaare wo kasmein vaadein

ye dil jo thaa kaanch ke aaine ki tarhaa
ab bikhar ke jaane kyun tukdo me badal gayaa
kyun hamaari haath ki rekhaaye dhokaa de gayi
kyun ye hamaaraa pyaar bharaa jahaan badal gayaa

aaj bhi sochtaa hoon main ki kaash tum aajaao laut ke ek baar
aake lag jaao mere seene se aur kaho mere kaano me dheere se

'jaanu, mujhe tumse mohabbat hai, aaj bhi mujhe sirf tumse mohabbat hai'

kaash.... tum laut aao....
kaash.... tum laut aao....


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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2012, 09:55:11 AM »
WWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH HRIDHAY JI BOHUT UMDA PESHKASH MUBARAK HO
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2012, 10:49:46 AM »
waah waah waah v nice..........bahut khubsurati se likhi gayi khubsurat rachna....
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2012, 10:58:02 AM »
waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ~hriday~ ji bhot kamaal ka likha hai apne.
kya feelings hain kya style hai
waahhhhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2012, 11:10:47 AM »
hriday jee ek behtareen peshkash rahi mubarakbad qubool kijiye

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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2012, 12:33:18 PM »
1 rau kabool karein huzoor, khubsurat peshkash
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2012, 01:05:41 PM »
wah wah, umda aur mubarakbad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2012, 01:26:44 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2012, 02:08:41 PM »
bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne hriday jee

dhadakte hue dil ke sawaal javaab. kho sa gaya padhte padhte.

ye lines bahut bhayee mujhe.
kyaa tumhe maloom hai ki,  wo tum hi thi
jisse maine sikhaa pyaar karnaa, 
wo tum hi thi maaloom na thaa
ki kyaa hotaa hai kho jaanaa bheed me
maaloom na thaa ki kyaa hotaa hai ehsaas chaahat kaa

behatreen..Applause Applause

mai aapko tah e dil se mubarakbaad deta huN.
Kohinoor hai is mahfil ke..jaisa naam vaisa hi nature.
duniyadaari se door, chand aise logo me jo poetry ka maza lena jaante hai..
keep it up.
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2012, 03:01:32 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saahill ji......!!!

Quote from: saahill on December 15, 2012, 09:55:11 AM
WWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH HRIDHAY JI BOHUT UMDA PESHKASH MUBARAK HO
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2012, 06:14:20 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Gaytri ji.....!!!

Quote from: gaytri gupta on December 15, 2012, 10:49:46 AM
waah waah waah v nice..........bahut khubsurati se likhi gayi khubsurat rachna....
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2012, 02:53:46 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Heer ji....!!!

Quote from: @Heer@ on December 15, 2012, 10:58:02 AM
waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ~hriday~ ji bhot kamaal ka likha hai apne.
kya feelings hain kya style hai
waahhhhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2012, 04:45:06 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

Quote from: aqsh on December 15, 2012, 11:10:47 AM
hriday jee ek behtareen peshkash rahi mubarakbad qubool kijiye

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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2012, 05:28:44 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2012, 06:43:14 AM »
bahut abhut shukriyaa Anand ji....!!!

Quote from: anand mohan on December 15, 2012, 12:33:18 PM
1 rau kabool karein huzoor, khubsurat peshkash
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