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! kaash !
uske aansoo mere palkon me kho jaaye
uske har gham mere dil me so jaaye
! kaash !
seene me basi tanhaiyan uski
guum ho jaye meri saanso me
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gar ye ho nhi sakta
tab
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! kaash !
meri yaaddaast kho jaaye
fir chahe wo kisi ki bhi ho jaaye
! kaash !
unke bina hum jee nhi skte ye
unko na sahi uss khuda ko to yakeen ho jaaye
!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2010, 06:23:42 AM » |
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Wah! Kya baat hai Subbu
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2010, 06:36:38 AM » |
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guruji--- iske liye mai sukriya nhi kahunga. ye mene likha thode hai. ye to bas meri soch hai aur kuch nhi.  |
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2010, 07:06:32 AM » |
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Bahut Khub Kb Bhai
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2010, 07:09:22 AM » |
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veri nice kb ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2010, 09:29:35 AM » |
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sukriya Rishi and Sahil ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2010, 10:19:33 AM » |
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kaash .............
killbill ji .........
gar ek kaash nahin hota..........
ji ke bhi maiN lass nahin hota
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2010, 11:10:58 AM » |
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wah Tamanna ji--
kya baat kah di aapne uffff
haye-- maar daala iss 2 line ke reply ne.
jhakash line Tamanna ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2010, 11:11:38 AM » |
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wah Tamanna ji--
kya baat kah di aapne uffff
haye-- maar daala iss 2 line ke reply ne.
jhakash line Tamanna ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2010, 11:17:53 AM » |
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dekhkar meri laash ko mere humsaaye bhi dhoor hain
koi unhien batayee jindagi unki bhi ek mehmaan hai
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2010, 11:24:44 AM » |
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nice lines kb ji....
leejiye ek kaash hamri taraf se bhi...
kaash khawab bhi haqiqat hote...
tum sang hum haste.... rote....
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2010, 11:48:15 AM » |
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wah manzil ji--
bahut khub
sukriya aapka..
iss kash ne kuch jaadoo kr dia ab..
ye dekhiye mera aur ek kash
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!kaash! agar ye
!kassh! na hota
mere hi ! Laash ! me fir ye ! zindgi ! naam ka
! mehmaam ! na hota
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2010, 11:52:36 AM » |
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wow kb its just superb...
in other way aapne hamari bolti band kar di..
ab hum kya kahe...
but ur lines are just mindblowing...
hats off...
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2010, 11:59:25 AM » |
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ye to aapki nazren inayat hai Priya ji
jo aap aisa kah rahi hain.
thanx k aapne pasand kiya
sukriya hai ji dil zigar gurda har taraf se aapko sukriya hai..
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2010, 08:11:24 AM » |
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ye kaash ne bhi kya khub rang jamaya hai
dilon ki sabki aarzuon se milaya hai
hum bhi kehte k kaash aisa hota waisa hota
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