Kaatib-e-TaQdeer...

by Aryaan on October 12, 2006, 05:30:07 AM
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Aryaan
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«Reply #15 on: October 18, 2006, 05:37:47 AM »
Tareef ke liye alfaz kam padein ge Angel... Bohat acha likha.. Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #16 on: October 18, 2006, 05:30:29 PM »
Are re aryaan tum bhi na..... wiase thanks...

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Banna Sanwarna Achha Nahi Lagta,
Be-Sabab Hasna Achha Nahi Lagta,
Chand To Hai Be-Hajab,
Har Aankh Mein Utarna Achha Nahi Lagta,
TuM Hi Aao To Kuch Baat Bane,
Ab Kisi Aur Ka SaMna Achha Nahi Lagta,
Sabah Ne Kaha MausaM Ne Angdai Li Hai,
TuM Bin MausaM Suhana Achha Nahi Lagta,
PaiMane Beasar Hai Teri Aankhon Ke SaMne,
Saaqi Ke Haath Se Peena Achha Nahi Lagta,
Khazaan Parasti Mein Guzri Hai UMar Sari,
Ab In Baharon Se Ulajhna Achha Nahi Lagta...
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«Reply #17 on: October 19, 2006, 07:34:27 PM »
Aur Angel tum bhi na... hamesha itna acha likhti ho keh tareef karni pad jati hai.. :D
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«Reply #18 on: October 20, 2006, 02:37:10 PM »
Shukriya Waheed Bhai,..

Husena Ji Lajawaab Likha Hai Phirse,..

Nice One,..

Yunhi Likhte Raho,..
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«Reply #19 on: October 20, 2006, 05:40:41 PM »
achha nai wo tomain bura likhti hoon to bhi tum tarif karte ho aryaan tongue3

thanks azeemmmm... tongue3


Chahat Ke Is Dhere Par,
Dariya Aur Kinare Par,
Dil Ko Aaj Aazad Kiya,
Maine TuMhko Yaad Kiya!!!

Tanhayi Ki Raaton Mein,
Khud Hi Baaton Baaton Mein,
Is Dilko Yun Shaad Kiya,
Maine TuMhko Yaad Kiya!!!

Jab Se TuMko Dekha Hai,
Jab Se TuMko Chaha Hai,
Har Ek Pal Fariyaad Kiya,
Maine TuMhko Yaad Kiya!!!

Is Jeewan Ke Nisaabon Mein,
Aur Raaton Ke Khwabon Mein,
Jaag Ke Bhi Dil Shaad Kiya,
Maine TuMhko Yaad Kiya!!!

Phool Ke Khilne Se Pehle,
TuMko Milne Se Pehle,
Khud Ko To Barbad Kiya,
Maine TuMhko Yaad Kiya!!!
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«Reply #20 on: October 20, 2006, 07:44:35 PM »
Arey nahi baba achi likhti hain tau tareef karta hoon  Angel...

Again a Beauty..
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«Reply #21 on: October 21, 2006, 08:21:07 AM »
very nice Aryaan...Angel...
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«Reply #22 on: October 21, 2006, 01:09:44 PM »
Bahoot Khoob angel Phirse,..
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«Reply #23 on: October 21, 2006, 01:11:14 PM »
Kaash Ke Hoti Zindagi Meri Koi Kitaab Jaisi,..
Ke Jab Gham Se Dil Bhar Jaata To Band Kar Dete,.

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«Reply #24 on: October 21, 2006, 05:16:36 PM »
thanks aryaan, jalpari and azeem,

arey nai aryaan tum to sachi mein bahut tarif karte ho...


Ye Nazrein Mere Mayus Chehre Pe Dalo Kisi Din,
Kyon Roz Guzarte Ho Baras Jao Kisi Din,
Main Apni Har ShaM Us Raat Ko De Dungi,
Sine Par Rakh Kar Sir So Jao Kisi Din...
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«Reply #25 on: October 22, 2006, 05:03:09 AM »
Thanks a lot Jalpari... Yes! Again a Good One Angel & Azeem...
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«Reply #26 on: October 22, 2006, 08:36:49 AM »
Ur Welcome Husena And Aryan Bhai...
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