Kab tak...

by brokenbyluv on October 07, 2010, 09:33:12 AM
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Main kab tak yu hi apne khayalo mein tujhe bulati rahungi,
main kab tak bita kal yad kar apni ankho ko rulati rahungi,

main kab tak yu hi andhero mein chalte hue,
khud ko girne se bachati rahungi,

main kab tak apne dil ko saza de kar,
apne ansuo ko chhupati rahungi,

main kab tak sahu ye dard ishq ka,
kab tak sab bhula k muskurati rahungi,

main kab tak bhatakti rahu mhbt ki raho mein,
aur kab tak sab k kaabil khud ko banati rahungi,

thak si gayi hu har ehsas se ab tou,
main kab tak apni kismat ko aazmati rahungi........
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2010, 12:31:59 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 07, 2010, 09:33:12 AM


Main kab tak yu hi apne khayalo mein tujhe bulati rahungi,
main kab tak bita kal yad kar apni ankho ko rulati rahungi,

main kab tak yu hi andhero mein chalte hue,
khud ko girne se bachati rahungi,

main kab tak apne dil ko saza de kar,
apne ansuo ko chhupati rahungi,

main kab tak sahu ye dard ishq ka,
kab tak sab bhula k muskurati rahungi,

main kab tak bhatakti rahu mhbt ki raho mein,
aur kab tak sab k kaabil khud ko banati rahungi,

thak si gayi hu har ehsas se ab tou,
main kab tak apni kismat ko aazmati rahungi........



Geetji,Aapke Lekhni ki Sabse Khaas Baat Yeh lagti hai ke har ek Lafz Jaise Haqeeqat ka Aaena sa hota hi..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji..Iss Nazm Mein Insaan Ki majbooriyan Aur Tadap..Dono Hi jabzaat Bakhoobi Nazar Aaye..

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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2010, 12:38:45 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji.........
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2010, 07:26:22 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI       BROKENBYLUV JI.....

MAIN KAB TAK TUME YUN TARDFATI RAHUNGI
MAIN KAB TAK TUJHE INTEZAAR KARATI RAHUNGI
MAIN KAB TAK TUHJKO JHOOTHE DILASE DETI RAHUNGI
AAKHIR "KAB TAK" JAB TAK BAAT NE BIGAD JAYE TAB TAK...?
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2010, 09:21:29 AM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. bahut khoobsurti se aapne dil ke ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hai...
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dil tuta hai kai baar tumhaara ye maine maana,
par ek baar pyaar se meri taraf to dekho jaana,

thokrein khai hain tumne har baar ye maine maana,
par ek baar pyaar se meri taraf to dekho jaana,

chahunga tumhe main khud se badh ke o meri jaana,
par ek baar pyaar se meri taraf to dekho jaana,

na hoga koi dard tumhe na hogi koi shikayat kabhi,
thaamunga haath jo tumhaara na main chhodunga kabhi,

kya shikayat hai tumko mujhse ki rooth jaati ho har baar,
kya khata hui hai mujhse jo duur mujhse jaati ho har baar,

aa jaao paas mere aaj tum o meri jaana,
ek baar pyaar se meri taraf to dekho jaana,

chahunga tumhe main khud se badh ke o meri jaana,
par ek baar pyaar se meri taraf to dekho jaana...
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2010, 12:15:16 PM »
Shukriya kapil ji n cara ji aur khoob likha hai aap dono ne...
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2010, 12:23:33 PM »
shukriya Geet ji...
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2010, 12:24:02 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2010, 12:33:28 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2010, 12:41:23 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on October 08, 2010, 12:30:06 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji
Aur Hriday Ji Aapne Bhi Achch Saath Diya Hai


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Shukriya shihab ji....
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