Kabar Me Chain Se Sona Nahin Aya

by Meena on May 04, 2005, 07:01:21 PM
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Meena
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Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2005, 08:26:12 PM »
wah!!! kaya baat hai!!! bahoot khoob Meena....bahoot achyy....

Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2005, 08:41:44 PM »
buhat khoob  pooja and  meena jee u  r  mind blowing..................................
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2005, 02:05:43 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahoot khoob Meena ji.....  jawab mein kuch arz ker paya hoon .....

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=8360

HumTum sad5
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2005, 02:08:25 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!

Wah! Meena... kamaal ka likhti hain aap, bohat khoob!
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Manish_Friend
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 02:31:04 AM »
Wah Meena ji.. wah.. really wonderfully written..Words express so much emotion...
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2005, 06:13:19 AM »
Wow meena just mind blowing specially the 1st para......i bow to uor shayri
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2005, 07:14:23 AM »
wah meena sis,bohat khoob likha,such nice words.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2005, 09:55:54 AM »
meena ji u r superb really so nice of u...........
apno ne begano ki tarah kaam kiye
humne apne hi haathon khudko ilzaam diye
kya kya na kiya tere liye oh bewaffa humne
tujhe yaad kiya tere liye phir di duaein hume jalane ke liye
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2005, 10:12:37 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahut khoob meena ji u r greattttttttttttttttt

tere janne ke baad haume to jeena nahi aaya
keh gaye the khwaab me aaoge par
hum ko neend ki goo.d me jana nahi aaya
kaat de tamaam umar tere intezar mai
aur tujhe meri maiyat sharik hona nai aaya.
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2005, 11:05:27 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
wah!!! kaya baat hai!!! bahoot khoob Meena....bahoot achyy....

Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!


shukriya ji shukriya kuddiye!!!!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2005, 11:06:51 AM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
buhat khoob  pooja and  meena jee you  r  mind blowing..................................


thank u ji thank u!!!!!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2005, 11:07:33 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahoot khoob Meena ji.....  jawab mein kuch arz ker paya hoon .....

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=8360

HumTum sad5


shukriya ji shukriya... apke jawab ka bhi jawab nahin!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2005, 11:08:14 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!

Wah! Meena... kamaal ka likhti hain aap, bohat khoob!


shukriya ji!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2005, 11:08:49 AM »
Quote from: "Manish_Friend"
Wah Meena ji.. wah.. really wonderfully written..Words express so much emotion...



tareef ke liye shukriya janab!!

 :D
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