KABHI ASHK HAI , KABHI AAH HAI .......................HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 29, 2012, 09:20:55 AM
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 (ye ghazal abd bundeli saheb ke shukriye ke sath post kar raha
  hoon jinki pichlie hafte post ki gai eik ghazal ke qafiyon ne
  mujhe apni iss ghazal ko ,jiska sirf matla moujood thha , puri
  karne ki targheeb di - Hasan)

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Kabhi  Ashk  hai  , kabhi  Aah  hai ,
         meri  Zeest   eik   karaah  hai ;
Meri  sabr-o-Shukr  se  dosti ,
         mera   ranj-o-gham   se   nibaah  hai

Mujhe  pastiyoN  se  na  tuu  daraa ,
        mujhe  baal-o-par  pe  yaqeen  hai ;
Main  bulandiyoN  ka  Safeer  hooN  ,
        meri  Aasmaan   pe   nigaah  hai

Nahi  khush  hum apni khushee  se  ,
       doosre ki  khushi  se  dukhi  magar ;
Na  Qana'ateiN  ,  na RafaaqateiN  ,
       ye  jahaaN  isi  meiN  tabaah  hai

Tujhe  bhook  hai  na  pyaas  hai ,
       na  hi  sard-o-garm  ki  fikr  hai ;
Tu  Faqeer  hai   ki  Malang  hai ,
       na   Qaba   koi  ,  na  kulaah  hai

Mujhe  Roz-e-Hashr  ki  fikr  kya ,
       mujhe  Pul - Siraat  ka  khauff  kya ;
MaiN , 'Hasan' , Ghulaam-e- Rasool  hooN ,
       mujhe  Mustafa   ki   panaah   hai





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Ashk = aansu ; Zeest= Zindagi ;Pasti = Nichaai ;baal o par=wings; bulandi= oonchaai ;safeer = ambassador/advocate ; qana'at = content ; rafaaqat = dosti ; malang = saadhu ; qabaa= dress ; kulaaah = topi / headgear ; roz e hashr = qayamat ka din ; Pul siraat = the razor edge bridge on which no guilty can walk
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2012, 09:25:01 AM »
(ye ghazal abd bundeli saheb ke shukriye ke sath post kar raha
  hoon jinki pichlie hafte post ki gai eik ghazal ke qafiyon ne
  mujhe apni iss ghazal ko ,jiska sirf matla kujood thha , puri
  karne ki targheeb di - Hasan)

  ................................................. .............


Kabhi  Ashk  hai  , kabhi  Aah  hai ,
         meri  Zeest   eik   karaah  hai ,
Meri  sabr-o-Shukr  se  dosti ,
         mera   ranj-o-gham   se   nibaah  hai

Mujhe  pastiyoN  se  na  tuu  daraa ,
        mujhe  baal-o-par  pe  yaqeen  hai ,
Main  bulandiyoN  ka  Safeer  hooN  ,
        meri  Aasmaan   pe   nigaah  hai

Nahi  khush  hum apni khushee  se  ,
       doosre ki  khushi  se  dukhi  magar ,
Na  Qana'ateiN  ,  na RafaaqateiN  ,
       ye  jahaaN  isi  meiN  tabaah  hai

Tujhe  bhook  hai  na  pyaas  hai ,
       na  hi  sard-o-garm  ki  fikr  hai ,
Tu  Faqeer  hai   ki  Malang  hai ,
       na   Qaba   koi  ,  na  kulaah  hai

Mujhe  Roz-e-Hashr  ki  fikr  kya ,
       mujhe  Pul - Siraat  ka  khauff  kya ,
MaiN , 'Hasan' , Ghulaam-e- Rasool  hooN ,
       mujhe  Mustafa   ki   panaah   hai





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Ashk = aansu ; Pasti = Nichaai ; bulandi= oonchaai ;safeer = ambassador/advocate ; qana'at = content ; rafaaqat = dosti ; malang = saadhu ; qabaa= dress ; kulaaah = topi / headgear ; roz e hashr = qayamat ka din ; Pul siraat = the razor edge bridge on which no guilty can walk


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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2012, 09:29:24 AM »
badee shiddat se intezaar thaa aapkee kisee ghazal kaa aaj tamannaa pooree hui badee shaandaar ghazal hai bahut bahut mubaarak
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2012, 09:54:04 AM »
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab Masha Allaah kia kahne waaH jee waaH....
Kia khoobsurat aur rawaaN gazal se nawaaza hai bazm ko...
Dil shaad O gaya janab... Usual Smile


Behad umdaa aur behad pyaari gazal kahi hai... Usual Smile
Is umdaa dilkash dilfareb purasar kalaam par humari hazaaroN
lakhaaoN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye...
Allaah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhshe aur aise nayaab
kalaamoN ka ambaar laga deN aap .... Usual Smile


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2012, 10:15:27 AM »
wah wah...hasanji....bahut bahut khoob...daad....
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2012, 10:19:31 AM »
bht bht khoob hasan ji...
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2012, 04:24:44 PM »
Aadaab Hasan Sir
khoob. bahut khoob...kya jabardast kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.. maja aa gaya..par mere liye thoda tough tha..meanings the to thoda aasaan ho gaya.. ek baar samajh paaya to dil jhoom uthaa. vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2012, 06:16:32 PM »
sach me Bundeli sirji ki ghazal ki yaad aa gai

Hasan sahab Hats off to u--
awsome creation janaab
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2012, 05:13:21 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2012, 07:20:24 AM »
wah be misal ghazal ....
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2012, 12:03:55 PM »

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QALB  SAHEB  , HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA .
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2012, 04:55:38 PM »

Hasan Sahab,

Bahut khoob...kya kahne..waah waah..

"mujhe pastiyoN se na too dara..."...bahut sundar

tabeeyat khush ho gayee.

Dili mubaarakbaad aur dheron shubhkaamnaayen.

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«Reply #12 on: March 30, 2012, 10:44:43 PM »
bhut khub hasan ji...
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2012, 05:08:21 AM »
badee shiddat se intezaar thaa aapkee kisee ghazal kaa aaj tamannaa pooree hui badee shaandaar ghazal hai bahut bahut mubaarak
Bahut shukriya,saini saheb.Aap ke jawab se bahut hausla milt hai.
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2012, 09:07:49 AM »
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab Masha Allaah kia kahne waaH jee waaH....
Kia khoobsurat aur rawaaN gazal se nawaaza hai bazm ko...
Dil shaad O gaya janab... Usual Smile


Behad umdaa aur behad pyaari gazal kahi hai... Usual Smile
Is umdaa dilkash dilfareb purasar kalaam par humari hazaaroN
lakhaaoN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye...
Allaah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhshe aur aise nayaab
kalaamoN ka ambaar laga deN aap .... Usual Smile


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

bahut shukriya , Parwaaz saheb.Nazr e karam banaayr rakhye.
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