KABHI ASHK HAI , KABHI AAH HAI .......................HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: April 06, 2012, 03:25:09 PM »
wah wah...hasanji....bahut bahut khoob...daad....
Dolly ji.Thanks.Blessings.
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«Reply #16 on: April 07, 2012, 10:08:56 AM »
bht bht khoob hasan ji...
manzil e ishq ji . Bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #17 on: April 08, 2012, 07:35:28 AM »
Behad Umda aur Lajawab Peshkash Hai Hasan Saheb... dil se daad Hi Daad... Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #18 on: April 08, 2012, 03:17:43 PM »
Aadaab Hasan Sir
khoob. bahut khoob...kya jabardast kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.. maja aa gaya..par mere liye thoda tough tha..meanings the to thoda aasaan ho gaya.. ek baar samajh paaya to dil jhoom uthaa. vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Applause Applause

Shukriya,MKV ji.Thode mushkil alfaaz  thhe ,main ne  bhi darte darte post ki.Lekin koshish karta hoon ki meaning doon aur aasaan zubaan  mein.Ye alfaaz mushkil zaroor hain lekin ghazal ke liye naye nahin.Ummeed karta hoon mere naye saathhi in alfaaz ,unke meaning aur pronunciation se waqif ho kar apne fun mein mazeed nikhaar laayeinge.
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«Reply #19 on: April 08, 2012, 05:03:50 PM »
sach me Bundeli sirji ki ghazal ki yaad aa gai

Hasan sahab Hats off to u--
awsome creation janaab
superbb

Sarfira  ji , yeh  ghazal  hichkichate  hue  post  ki  thhi
lekin  khushi  hui  ki  aap  jaise  baazouq  logon se hausla
mila . Bahut  shukrguzar hoon . Hasan.
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«Reply #20 on: April 09, 2012, 05:41:23 AM »
Applause Applause Applause
Thanx,Qais ji.
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«Reply #21 on: April 09, 2012, 12:42:59 PM »
wah be misal ghazal ....
Thanx , Laiba  ji. khush  rahiye.
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«Reply #22 on: April 09, 2012, 06:26:18 PM »
Hasan Sahab,

Bahut khoob...kya kahne..waah waah..

"mujhe pastiyoN se na too dara..."...bahut sundar

tabeeyat khush ho gayee.

Dili mubaarakbaad aur dheron shubhkaamnaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  bahut  shukriya , Satish  ji. khush  rahiye , Hasan
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«Reply #23 on: April 10, 2012, 07:59:20 AM »
bhut khub hasan ji...
Thanks , Rahi  saheb .
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«Reply #24 on: April 10, 2012, 03:38:14 PM »
Behad Umda aur Lajawab Peshkash Hai Hasan Saheb... dil se daad Hi Daad... Applause Applause


Mann ji , Hausla  afzai  ke  liye  tah e dil
se  mashkoor  hoon . Hasan





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«Reply #25 on: June 05, 2012, 07:40:40 AM »
(ye ghazal abd bundeli saheb ke shukriye ke sath post kar raha
  hoon jinki pichlie hafte post ki gai eik ghazal ke qafiyon ne
  mujhe apni iss ghazal ko ,jiska sirf matla moujood thha , puri
  karne ki targheeb di - Hasan)

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Kabhi  Ashk  hai  , kabhi  Aah  hai ,
         meri  Zeest   eik   karaah  hai ;
Meri  sabr-o-Shukr  se  dosti ,
         mera   ranj-o-gham   se   nibaah  hai

Mujhe  pastiyoN  se  na  tuu  daraa ,
        mujhe  baal-o-par  pe  yaqeen  hai ;
Main  bulandiyoN  ka  Safeer  hooN  ,
        meri  Aasmaan   pe   nigaah  hai

Nahi  khush  hum apni khushee  se  ,
       doosre ki  khushi  se  dukhi  magar ;
Na  Qana'ateiN  ,  na RafaaqateiN  ,
       ye  jahaaN  isi  meiN  tabaah  hai

Tujhe  bhook  hai  na  pyaas  hai ,
       na  hi  sard-o-garm  ki  fikr  hai ;
Tu  Faqeer  hai   ki  Malang  hai ,
       na   Qaba   koi  ,  na  kulaah  hai

Mujhe  Roz-e-Hashr  ki  fikr  kya ,
       mujhe  Pul - Siraat  ka  khauff  kya ;
MaiN , 'Hasan' , Ghulaam-e- Rasool  hooN ,
       mujhe  Mustafa   ki   panaah   hai





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Ashk = aansu ; Zeest= Zindagi ;Pasti = Nichaai ;baal o par=wings; bulandi= oonchaai ;safeer = ambassador/advocate ; qana'at = content ; rafaaqat = dosti ; malang = saadhu ; qabaa= dress ; kulaaah = topi / headgear ; roz e hashr = qayamat ka din ; Pul siraat = the razor edge bridge on which no guilty can walk

Waah SIDDIQUI ji! Aaj hee aap kee gazal meyree nazar mein aayee hai! Bahut khoob! Aapkey 'pyaar-o-dulaar' key saamney 'shukriyah' mein woh wajan kahaan, ki, ataa karoon!
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«Reply #26 on: August 06, 2012, 11:43:08 AM »
Waah SIDDIQUI ji! Aaj hee aap kee gazal meyree nazar mein aayee hai! Bahut khoob! Aapkey 'pyaar-o-dulaar' key saamney 'shukriyah' mein woh wajan kahaan, ki, ataa karoon!
Bhai , main  bhi  bahut  sharminda  hoon  ki  aapka  comment
aaj  ittefaq  se  is  bhooli  bisri  ghazal  pe  nazar  aa  gaya .
Bahut   bahut  shukriya  .  Takheer  ke  liye   muaafi  , lekin
ghalti  qasdan  nahi  hui  hai . Khair andesh , Hasan
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