~~"KABHI FURSATT MILE TO"~~

by k.shael on November 10, 2008, 07:19:25 AM
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KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERE DIL KE KAREEB
CHALE AANA, KI RAKHE HAI BAHUT GAMM ISME
HO JO WAQT PASS TERE INHE ZARA SEHLANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERI AANKHON SE ,
AANKHEIN MILANA, KAI BARSO SE SIMTE PADE
HAI  SAILAAB INME HO JO WAQT PASS TERE
INHE ZARA SUKHA JAANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERI RAATON ME
KHAWAAB BAN KAR HI CHALE AANA, KAYI
RAATON SE SOKAR NA DEKHA, HO JO WAQT
PASS TERE MUJHE AAKAR SULANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERI SAANSOO ME
UTAR JAANA, SIRF FAKAT- RASM ADA KARTI
HAI AANE JAANE KI, HO JO WAQT PASS TERE
INHE ZARA SAKOON DILANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERE DIL KE KARIB
CHALE AANA…

BY. K.SHAEL

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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2008, 07:26:01 AM »
 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob shally... Thumbs UP
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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2008, 07:26:52 AM »
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SHUKRIYA HONEY DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2008, 07:27:08 AM »
Very Very Nice Work... Applause Applause
Bahut achha likha hai Shally..
Aur shabdon ka istemaal bhi bakhoobi kiya hai..
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2008, 07:30:51 AM »
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SHUKRIYA MAHIYA JI,
UR COMMENT IS VERY VALUEABLE
FOR MY THREAD...
THANX A LOTTTT FOR APPRICIATE MY WORK,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2008, 11:43:03 AM »
bohat achchha khayaal likha aur bohat khoobsoorti se likha hai aapne shael ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2008, 01:36:14 PM »
KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERI RAATON ME
KHAWAAB BAN KAR HI CHALE AANA, KAYI
RAATON SE SOKAR NA DEKHA, HO JO WAQT
PASS TERE MUJHE AAKAR SULANA…
BY. K.SHAEL
Kyaa hi maasoom chaahat hai K.SHAEL ji! Waah!
                      -abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2008, 03:21:41 PM »
Bahoot Badhiya Shally Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #8 on: November 10, 2008, 04:09:47 PM »
wah wah wah kaya baat hai... Kabhi fursat ho to... wah bahoot khoob shally.. hamesha ki tarah bahoot he acha likha hai!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 10, 2008, 04:25:06 PM »
KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERE DIL KE KAREEB
CHALE AANA, KI RAKHE HAI BAHUT GAMM ISME
HO JO WAQT PASS TERE INHE ZARA SEHLANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERI AANKHON SE ,
AANKHEIN MILANA, KAI BARSO SE SIMTE PADE
HAI  SAILAAB INME HO JO WAQT PASS TERE
INHE ZARA SUKHA JAANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERI RAATON ME
KHAWAAB BAN KAR HI CHALE AANA, KAYI
RAATON SE SOKAR NA DEKHA, HO JO WAQT
PASS TERE MUJHE AAKAR SULANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERI SAANSOO ME
UTAR JAANA, SIRF FAKAT- RASM ADA KARTI
HAI AANE JAANE KI, HO JO WAQT PASS TERE
INHE ZARA SAKOON DILANA…

KABHI FURSATT MILE TO MERE DIL KE KARIB
CHALE AANA…

BY. K.SHAEL



jitni taareef karun kam hi hai......itna khoobsurat andaz-e-bayan....shally bahoot hi achcha likha hai...hazaaron daad kabool karen
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«Reply #10 on: November 10, 2008, 09:49:42 PM »
...good job Shael...keep it up...
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«Reply #11 on: November 11, 2008, 09:10:35 AM »
Kabhi Fursat Mile To Pyaar Kar Lena,.
Hum To Har Haal Me, Tujhpar Nisaar Hue Baithe Hain,.

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«Reply #12 on: November 11, 2008, 09:21:35 AM »
bohat achchha khayaal likha aur bohat khoobsoorti se likha hai aapne shael ji
 Applause Applause Applause


SHUKRIYA TANHA JI...
AAP BHI KUCH SAATH ME LIKHTE TO
AACHA LAGTA...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2008, 09:26:29 AM »
Kyaa hi maasoom chaahat hai K.SHAEL ji! Waah!
                      -abd bundeli

SHUKRIYA ABD JI,
AAPKO APNE THREAD ME DEKH KAR
AACHA LAGA...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2008, 09:27:10 AM »
Bahoot Badhiya Shally Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.


SHUKRIYA JANSHEEN JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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