kabhi mujhe tanaha...............

by ranjana on May 12, 2006, 01:16:25 AM
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kabhi mujhe tanha ,kabhi mujhe khamosh rehne do,
dil ki gehrayion se  jo kehnna chahati hun woh kehne do
yun aa kar raaton ko jagaya na karo.................
aaker yun khawabo mein sataya na karo.......
khawab buntti in ankho ko kuch,
haseen khawabo mein khone toh do..........
kabhi mujhe tanha, kabhi khamosh bhi rahne do.......

pyar ke do pal jo tune diye hain mujhe,..............
in palo ko jee toh lene do............
janti hun ki praaye hai yeh sab khawab,
aur meri khushiyan adhuri hai...........
par jeene ke liye kuch galat fehmaiya bhi jaruri hain...........
unhi galat fehmiyon se hi bas ek pal hi khush toh ho lene do..........
kabhi mujhe tanha , kabhi mujhe khamosh bhi reh lene do..........................


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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2006, 03:51:25 AM »
nice ranju bahut hi aaccha
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2006, 05:13:36 AM »
shukriya vikas...............
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dardhai
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2006, 03:47:46 PM »
BAHUT  KHUUUB.....
Aisa kyun lagta hai har kisi ka PYAAR KI BEWAFAI ek jaisi  hai.

(Aap ne jo lines quote kiye hain ......)
janti hun ki praaye hai yeh sab khawab,
aur meri khushiyan adhuri hai...........
par jeene ke liye kuch galat fehmaiya bhi jaruri hain...........
unhi galat fehmiyon se hi bas ek pal hi khush toh ho lene do..........
kabhi mujhe tanha , kabhi mujhe khamosh bhi reh lene do..........................
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(Akhir 5lines mein  todi si correction karta hun....)

JAANTI HUN PYAARE KWAAB HAIN YEH SIRF...............
UNHI GALAT FAHMIYON MAIN KUSH TOH HO LENE DO........
KABHI MUJHE TANHA, KABHI MUJHE KHAMOSH BHI REH LENE DO............


4m : DARDHAI
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2006, 02:20:03 AM »
Quote from: "dardhai"
BAHUT  KHUUUB.....
Aisa kyun lagta hai har kisi ka PYAAR KI BEWAFAI ek jaisi  hai.

(Aap ne jo lines quote kiye hain ......)
janti hun ki praaye hai yeh sab khawab,
aur meri khushiyan adhuri hai...........
par jeene ke liye kuch galat fehmaiya bhi jaruri hain...........
unhi galat fehmiyon se hi bas ek pal hi khush toh ho lene do..........
kabhi mujhe tanha , kabhi mujhe khamosh bhi reh lene do..........................
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(Akhir 5lines mein  todi si correction karta hun....)

JAANTI HUN PYAARE KWAAB HAIN YEH SIRF...............
UNHI GALAT FAHMIYON MAIN KUSH TOH HO LENE DO........
KABHI MUJHE TANHA, KABHI MUJHE KHAMOSH BHI REH LENE DO............


4m : DARDHAI[/quote]

bahut khub ji.............aapki likhi lines bahut acchi lagi....
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mrkotians
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2006, 02:29:13 AM »
ranjana dard mein... hmmm... kuch hain?? GM

kuch aur nahin chahiye mujhe
bas tu meri ban ja priya...

phool se likhna tha jo ek kavitha
main kaanton se likh diya...

na jane kya hua tha mujhe
us pal bahut zid kar diya...

khushi dena tha tujhe magar
dukh de diya na jane kyon...

yun na samjho ke main khush thi
andar dil ke kone dard thi mujhe bhi

gaa rahi thi bahut hi sushravya premgaan
na jane kaise hua us mein apasvar

maaf kar do mujhe is pal ke liye
har pal ke liye... zindagi ke liye...

pyar hain tumse.... zindagi bhar...
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2006, 04:04:52 AM »
Quote from: "mrkotians"
ranjana dard mein... hmmm... kuch hain?? GM

kuch aur nahin chahiye mujhe
bas tu meri ban ja priya...

phool se likhna tha jo ek kavitha
main kaanton se likh diya...

na jane kya hua tha mujhe
us pal bahut zid kar diya...

khushi dena tha tujhe magar
dukh de diya na jane kyon...

yun na samjho ke main khush thi


andar dil ke kone dard thi mujhe bhi

gaa rahi thi bahut hi sushravya premgaan
na jane kaise hua us mein apasvar

maaf kar do mujhe is pal ke liye
har pal ke liye... zindagi ke liye...

pyar hain tumse.... zindagi bhar...



bahut khub MK JI.........
ranjana dard mein .bhi hai ji...... Usual Smile GM
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2006, 04:10:01 AM »
meri aankho ko  yeh kiska intzar hai
uska khyalo mein aana beshumaar hai
boond-boond rista hai mera ghaav
loot ke le gaya hai koi mere ka chaav
virah ka yeh kaisa uphaar hai........
meri aankho ko yeh kiska intzar hai...........
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gumnam
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2006, 08:49:54 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
meri aankho ko  yeh kiska intzar hai
uska khyalo mein aana beshumaar hai
boond-boond rista hai mera ghaav
loot ke le gaya hai koi mere ka chaav
virah ka yeh kaisa uphaar hai........
meri aankho ko yeh kiska intzar hai...........

BAHUT KHUB LEKIN

EK TU HI HAI JISKI AANKHEIN ITNI JALDI BHOOL GAI,
VARNA YAHA KA ZARRA-ZARRA SHAKAL MERI PEHCHAANE HAI.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2006, 09:07:43 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
kabhi mujhe tanha ,kabhi mujhe khamosh rehne do,
dil ki gehrayion se  jo kehnna chahati hun woh kehne do
yun aa kar raaton ko jagaya na karo.................
aaker yun khawabo mein sataya na karo.......
khawab buntti in ankho ko kuch,
haseen khawabo mein khone toh do..........
kabhi mujhe tanha, kabhi khamosh bhi rahne do.......

pyar ke do pal jo tune diye hain mujhe,..............
in palo ko jee toh lene do............
janti hun ki praaye hai yeh sab khawab,
aur meri khushiyan adhuri hai...........
par jeene ke liye kuch galat fehmaiya bhi jaruri hain...........
unhi galat fehmiyon se hi bas ek pal hi khush toh ho lene do..........
kabhi mujhe tanha , kabhi mujhe khamosh bhi reh lene do..........................


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bahot  khoob    Ranjana...........  dard........  mark........
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manu1979
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hi
«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2006, 06:33:34 PM »
bahut khoob ranju ji aap ka ye kalaam pahle bhi padha hai aaj fir padha mazaa aa gaya
aise hi likhte rahiyega
regards
manu
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2006, 03:04:56 PM »
shukriya Manu ji.....................
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ranjana
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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2006, 01:58:25 AM »
Quote from: "gum"
Is ehte drd ko mammaat roko,
Yeh toh saza hai kisi ke intezaar ke,
Log inhe ansu kahe ya deewangi,
yeh to nishani hai kisi ke pyaar ke


nice...................

aankho mein hamne dard ko chipaa rakha hai
unke intazaar mein duniya ko bhula rakha hai
woh laut ke aaye ya na aaye ......
hamne toh apni akhari saanso per bhi sirf unaka naam likha hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2006, 02:04:54 AM »
Nice gum and ranju!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2006, 06:44:44 AM »
shukriya POOJA JI................ Usual Smile
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