"" kabhi suron ka sangam tha "" 'nir'

by nirala on January 26, 2011, 07:41:37 PM
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nirala
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phoolon ka haar tha kabhi
ab kaanto ka taaz hai

kabi suron ka sangam tha
ab besura raag hai

khushiyon ka mela tha kabi
ab mayusiyo ka sartaaz hai

kabi apno ka rela tha
ab parayon ka raaj hai

hariyali ka mausam tha kabi
ab sukha sansaar hai

kabi dilkash nazara tha
ab veeraan baazar hai

rangeen sapno si haqeeqat thi kabi
ab toote saare khab hain

kabi Hansi ke deewane the
ab ek muskaan ki talash hai

ek sachha humraj tha 'nir'
ab bewafai ka ilzaam hai
 
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dead heart
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2011, 11:16:06 PM »
Bahaut seedhe lavzon main bahaut kuch kehgaye..
bahaut bahaut khoob..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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Intezar
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2011, 11:58:05 PM »
kya baat hai nirala ji... bahut achhe...

Intezar !
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Anshumali
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2011, 02:54:44 AM »
phoolon ka haar tha kabhi
ab kaanto ka taaz hai

kabi suron ka sangam tha
ab besura raag hai

khushiyon ka mela tha kabi
ab mayusiyo ka sartaaz hai

kabi apno ka rela tha
ab parayon ka raaj hai

hariyali ka mausam tha kabi
ab sukha sansaar hai

kabi dilkash nazara tha
ab veeraan baazar hai

rangeen sapno si haqeeqat thi kabi
ab toote saare khab hain

kabi Hansi ke deewane the
ab ek muskaan ki talash hai

ek sachha humraj tha 'nir'
ab bewafai ka ilzaam hai
 

Bahut Badhiyaa ... Nirala Ji !

ehsaas acche lage hume ... likhte rahen ... !

dil se daad ... !
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2011, 04:10:43 AM »
Bahut Khub Nirala Ji
U Hi Likhte Rahiye Humesha
Aur Humesha Khus Rahiye
God Bless u


Rishi...
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2011, 04:14:27 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause

kahakahon ki baarish thi kabhi
aaj udaasi ka ehsaas hai

mastama tha nirala kabhi
aaj sochta bht khaas hai

likhte raho yunhi har baar
hume padhne ki jagi pyaas hai
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2011, 08:47:26 AM »
Niraala jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob ahsaas O khayaal rahe hai aapke is kalaam meiN..
Sabhi ashaar achche rahe..
Bayaani bhi achchi rahi janab... ApplauseApplauseApplause

Daad kabool kijiye...

And Kasak jee aapka jawaab bhi bahut khoob raha .. ApplauseApplauseApplause

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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manjum
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2011, 08:49:37 AM »
wah niralaji wah

bahut khub...

 Applause Applause Applause
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2011, 09:01:45 AM »
bahut ssarrraaa Thanku sabhi logo ko.
mera altu faltu chije padhne ke liye Usual Smile
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K mam aapka reply Mazama cho Usual Smile

thanx Manju and sabko
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